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Gives me the...; Feedback please...
Topic Started: Aug 21 2013, 10:47 AM (250 Views)
Mr. Creep
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So I am more than happy to reciprocate with feedback and would offer it myself more often but frankly I'm barely hitting the six month mark at efedding in general, so I don't ever really know what to say about others. I read and try to follow a lot of what the vets say though. (Even though it can contradict and be confusing at times)

So I know I've barely been around very long here, and it seems to me like the concept of Mr. Creep was well received, but how is the execution? Is there something I need to work on? I know I've somewhat varied him from my original contract (I would gladly update with his two-bit thug behavior and his general lost grip on reality if need be), but does it still work? Like/dislike?

Thanks in advance...

Edit much later:

Don't mind me, just archiving - Mr. Creep Show

Episode 1
Episode 2
Behind the scenes - A day in the life of
Episode 3
Episode 4
Episode 5
Episode 6
Episode 7
Episode 8
Episode 9
Episode 10
Episode 11
Episode 12
Episode 13
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Sqweaktoy
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I wanted to think of some constructive feedback, something you could use to improve, unfortunately I don't have any. the character is amazing, Totally lives up to the promise of the bio. I will probably be able to offer more useful feedback once the shiny newness of Mr. Creep wears off.
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Lita Maivia
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A rep change wouldn't upset me... but then you should understand that I'm a bit shallow and like when people use super attractive reps. Hehe. So no, I'm not picking on the character nor am I telling you that a change is needed. I just have no actual input because the character is doing just fine thus far.
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Minister Wighty
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What The Boy said. Mr. Creep is great. Keep up the good work; you'll go far.
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Mr. Creep
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Lita Maivia,Aug 21 2013
03:04 PM
A rep change wouldn't upset me... but then you should understand that I'm a bit shallow and like when people use super attractive reps. Hehe. So no, I'm not picking on the character nor am I telling you that a change is needed. I just have no actual input because the character is doing just fine thus far.

Heh originally I was thinking of using the Strangers from the movie Dark City as a photo rep but there's honestly even less good photos of them to use than there are of nosferatu, granted I don't think they would count as heart throbs either... Powder doesn't look menacing enough... Billy Corgan? Yeah sorry, I think he'll have to remain ugly, hehe.
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Mr. Creep
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Umm, ermm... now that I've reached a whole ten episodes. Any additional feedback??

Is the comedy stale? Does the show format work for establishing Creep as a mischievous yet endearing heel? Is there enough shoot/match addressing? Any of the side characters that need removing or that you'd like to see more of?

Anything at all?
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Pete
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Mr. Creep,Dec 4 2013
03:23 PM
Umm, ermm... now that I've reached a whole ten episodes. Any additional feedback??

Is the comedy stale? Does the show format work for establishing Creep as a mischievous yet endearing heel? Is there enough shoot/match addressing? Any of the side characters that need removing or that you'd like to see more of?

Anything at all?

I loved the latest episode, as I told you via PM. The RPs are perhaps a bit too long, but the comedy worked (at least for me) and Mr. Creep is perfect as the self-righteous, deluded heel (a la Bo Dallas on NXT). So yeah, good stuff.
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Mr. Creep
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Why thank you good sir.
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Pete
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Wait, you have SIX MONTHS' experience?

Hell, dude...at six months I was still jobbing out and trying to write comedy gimmicks. It was almost a year before I even got my first championship!

Well done.
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