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| Tweet Topic Started: Aug 21 2013, 10:47 AM (250 Views) | |
| Mr. Creep | Aug 21 2013, 10:47 AM Post #1 |
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So I am more than happy to reciprocate with feedback and would offer it myself more often but frankly I'm barely hitting the six month mark at efedding in general, so I don't ever really know what to say about others. I read and try to follow a lot of what the vets say though. (Even though it can contradict and be confusing at times) So I know I've barely been around very long here, and it seems to me like the concept of Mr. Creep was well received, but how is the execution? Is there something I need to work on? I know I've somewhat varied him from my original contract (I would gladly update with his two-bit thug behavior and his general lost grip on reality if need be), but does it still work? Like/dislike? Thanks in advance... Edit much later: Don't mind me, just archiving - Mr. Creep Show Episode 1 Episode 2 Behind the scenes - A day in the life of Episode 3 Episode 4 Episode 5 Episode 6 Episode 7 Episode 8 Episode 9 Episode 10 Episode 11 Episode 12 Episode 13 |
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| Sqweaktoy | Aug 21 2013, 02:14 PM Post #2 |
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I wanted to think of some constructive feedback, something you could use to improve, unfortunately I don't have any. the character is amazing, Totally lives up to the promise of the bio. I will probably be able to offer more useful feedback once the shiny newness of Mr. Creep wears off. |
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| Lita Maivia | Aug 21 2013, 03:04 PM Post #3 |
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A rep change wouldn't upset me... but then you should understand that I'm a bit shallow and like when people use super attractive reps. Hehe. So no, I'm not picking on the character nor am I telling you that a change is needed. I just have no actual input because the character is doing just fine thus far. |
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| Minister Wighty | Aug 21 2013, 03:19 PM Post #4 |
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What The Boy said. Mr. Creep is great. Keep up the good work; you'll go far. |
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| Mr. Creep | Aug 29 2013, 12:38 AM Post #5 |
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Heh originally I was thinking of using the Strangers from the movie Dark City as a photo rep but there's honestly even less good photos of them to use than there are of nosferatu, granted I don't think they would count as heart throbs either... Powder doesn't look menacing enough... Billy Corgan? Yeah sorry, I think he'll have to remain ugly, hehe. |
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| Mr. Creep | Dec 4 2013, 03:23 PM Post #6 |
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Umm, ermm... now that I've reached a whole ten episodes. Any additional feedback?? Is the comedy stale? Does the show format work for establishing Creep as a mischievous yet endearing heel? Is there enough shoot/match addressing? Any of the side characters that need removing or that you'd like to see more of? Anything at all? |
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| Pete | Dec 4 2013, 04:19 PM Post #7 |
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I loved the latest episode, as I told you via PM. The RPs are perhaps a bit too long, but the comedy worked (at least for me) and Mr. Creep is perfect as the self-righteous, deluded heel (a la Bo Dallas on NXT). So yeah, good stuff. |
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| Mr. Creep | Dec 4 2013, 04:44 PM Post #8 |
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Why thank you good sir. |
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| Pete | Dec 4 2013, 05:08 PM Post #9 |
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Wait, you have SIX MONTHS' experience? Hell, dude...at six months I was still jobbing out and trying to write comedy gimmicks. It was almost a year before I even got my first championship! Well done. |
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