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Vice Feedback; Mmmmm... beefy!
Topic Started: Oct 17 2013, 12:09 AM (263 Views)
Minister Wighty
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The Boss
SO! Short results this week for Reasons. Because of that there are no entrances for this show... also it's been mentioned to me a few times that a lot of the entrances are out of date. Some of you have been awesome about getting them to me already but for those of you that haven't... um... we use them now. So maybe it's update time.

Anyhow, thanks to everyone who wrote shit. A lot of plot got laid this week; sad to see Kursur, Graver, and Nicolette hit the bricks but the epic Kursur storyline has been building for a while (excellent finale during the week, by the way) and [R] as a gimmick was really going nowhere.

So! Hellraise card coming tonight before I go to bed and this week... THERE WILL BE WRITERS OTHER THAN NIR. He's called dibs on a couple but the rest will be FAIR GAME! This is a trial run to see if it's something we can do week to week, so don't disappoint and be sure to meet the deadlines!

Anyhow, let's get to feedback for the show.

Thots?
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Hayden
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Reading the show, but quick thots.

- Ken mocking Suri by bringing up Seto was cool, as was Suri's reaction. Pirate Bay Spider Cav as a whole is awesome.

- Dream being drunk also fit well, considering the RP beforehand. Then again, is Dream drunk while inside the ring? Or is he Stuporman through and through?

(He was probably drunk. Still getting used to the drink!)

- Pirate Bay Spider Cav vs. KAMIKAZE Pro just has to be at Hellraise in one way or another. Heck, Hikou vs. Shinigame as one match in a "Best of Three" series at the PPV would be awesome to see.
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Nathan
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Well, that sucks Graver go but it's awesome BLS got to have a series of matches with him and Giggles before he left. *thumbs up* Lol.

The entire show was awesome! The tag match closing the show was great and I'm happy to see The League and Astro get the win! Wooo. No thanks to Astro obviously; Alexander led that whole thing :p (inside joke to Lita, lol).

Seriously though, that match kicked ass and I enjoyed promos setting up some of the title matches for Hellraise. I'm definitely looking forward to that show! The K-Pro vs. Red Pirates match was great too!

Great stuff as usual all around, everyone! Definitely looking forward to Hellraise.
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Pete
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I left my feedback on the other topic because Newbie, but I basically am happy with my win and surprised Jo-Jo didn't win since he had one RP more than me.
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Lita Maivia
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Took care of it for you. Honest mistake.
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Pete
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Lita Maivia,Oct 17 2013
05:24 AM
Took care of it for you. Honest mistake.

Thanks. Old habits die hard, I automatically assume show feedback is posted in the show results topic because that's how I always did it. Again, newbie.
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BleakInfinity
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Good show this week as always. Everything is really set up nicely setting up for Hellraise. Can't wait to get working on RPs this week for the PPV. Astro gets better and better. I truly enjoyed RPing this past week.
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Punkin
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Great show and a shit ton to work with, really great job this week guys, just a quick shout out to Cody for letting me have some input into his promo as well, And I gots me a title shot on PPV to boot :D
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Mr. Creep
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As usual a stellar job.
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Punkin
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The graphics for the hell raiser card are sweet as well, great frightmare pic for it
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rotinaj
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I only read enough on my lunchbreak to see if I won or not. :P However, I'll go ahead and volunteer to write a match for the PPV now. I prefer singles matches, but am just fine with tags if need be.

Edit: Okay, now that I've read the show, it was pretty fun. I will cop to my own criticism, but there's a sore lacking of undercard segments going on here. I dropped the ball on it myself, as the one between Ronan that I had in mind never materialized. But more folks who aren't in [R] and the main event players need to step up, yo.

I like the Punkin/McGillis rivalry, although I'd like for there to be a leeeeeetle bit more contact in it. But it's definitely an enjoyable thing.

I also am curious to see who this Blazing Kisuke guy is and what he has in mind.

In the rainbow-colored seg, just for posterity, I had no idea who was talking, who any of these people were, or how I was supposed to figure anything out. If that's a dramatic choice, then so be it, but this fed reeeeeeally has issues with helping newbies understand who is who, what motivations there are, and who to root for or like. I get the whole "shades of grey" argument, but when everybody is apparently a dick, it gets a touch hard to want to see anyone in particular win.

Just sayin'.

But the main event was pretty cool. I never read any of Priest's work before, but now I want to go back and look up some of his RPs or something. I dug his promo on Mister Creep. And I was hugely amused with how the World Champ and his challenger weren't the only thing going on in the ME. It's the rare fed that lets that happen and not feel lackluster, but this pulled it off well.

So, yeah. Fun show to read, overall.
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Pete
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rotinaj,Oct 17 2013
05:21 PM
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In the rainbow-colored seg, just for posterity, I had no idea who was talking, who any of these people were, or how I was supposed to figure anything out. If that's a dramatic choice, then so be it, but this fed reeeeeeally has issues with helping newbies understand who is who, what motivations there are, and who to root for or like. I get the whole "shades of grey" argument, but when everybody is apparently a dick, it gets a touch hard to want to see anyone in particular win.

Just sayin'.

I should change that, as my characters tend to lean face to ultra-face. Time has shown I couldn't write a heel if my life depended on it xD
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Enzuigiri
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How embarrassing, I thought and RPed thinking it was a tag match but instead it was a Fatal 4-Way. I need to get my eyes checked. :(
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ratedgdr
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"No pointed sticks?" "SHUT UP!!!!
I'll work on some entrances and get them sent before Hellraise.
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Lita Maivia
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I don't really have feedback for the show even though it was as fantastic as usual. But I did want to leave feedback about RPs this week. I had so much fun interacting with the League this week. Astro and Nathaniel had an incredible dynamic that only got better when Lioncock and Stephen showed up. This was my first time RPing with Creep and it was a unique experience to say the least. That is a one of a kind character and it was awesome to be included with him for a week.

And thanks for the feedback on Astro! You have no idea how great it is to get some feedback on him. Made my day. :)
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