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The battle for Punkin's face feedback; Pretty please with sugar on top
Topic Started: Oct 17 2013, 05:11 PM (121 Views)
Punkin
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JORDAN ADEUS PUNKIN CALIBAN
Could very easily be the dumbest thing I have ever written but I enjoyed it lol, what do you guys think about the battle for Punkin's face?
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Daisuke
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Who Let That Idiot Near a Computer?
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I quite liked Punkin as an under-card "wreck shit" kind of character, and I really feel that you've rushed this storyline; especially as the first reveal of Caliban seemed very spur of the moment in the build up to a multi-man match. Punkin would have been [and could still be] a good character to find your feet with, but so far your expectations for Caliban seem to be wildly different from the booking team's.

I think that your RPs as a whole could use some tidying up; you make a lot of fairly common, basic errors. I have a feeling that maybe I rate this higher than others, but I think you could benefit from neatening up some.

Finally, I thought Caliban's comment about Hulk Hogan was out of line for a). a pro wrestler talking in character, and b). an employee of what ought to be in-universe a competitor to the 'E. I tend to shy away from mentioning real companies at the best of times.
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