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BLACK/Bullet Feedback Time; Off to a rocky start...
Topic Started: Feb 4 2014, 01:31 AM (243 Views)
Minister Wighty
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The Boss
I'd complain more about the show being late but I've had a lot of shit going on in my life, so I can't be too mad.

Anyhow.

Thanks to Nir for most of the show. Thanks to Hayden and Will for the matches they wrote. Thanks to Lita and Dai for some sexy promos, thanks to me for everything in-between.

Could've used some more judges this week... surprised more people didn't step up? I guess you guys trust my judgement. How sweet. Here's some feedback for ya.

"Hayden's efforts with Dream just felt bigger and better [than his opponents] and like they had more going on overall."

"More content [from ULTRA, BANG, and Holland], really."

"Everybody [in the Bullet three-way] was fantastic this week."

"I like the thought of having the BLS prey on Claire to really put across how callous they are, which would send Bloodbath into a bloodlust which is always when he's best."

"Nate's last RP brought up a lot of good points."

"I really like the idea of the Spectre Girls not getting along. It was the first time I've really found Terri interesting that she seems to be up for plotting against the other girls. The entire plot is one of Joe's more intriguing storylines."

"[The Odd Couple could] have a little more going on. Or, try to balance the match talk and the storyline talk a little better."

"I felt Lita and T did a great job with their April & Cody material."

"Just keep doing what you're doing, in regards to Terrifying."

"Generally Hayden's RPs are giant blocks of speaking parts with nothing to break them up. Seto's was better this week and I'd like to see him continue that way."

Hope that greases your wheels a bit. I left out the feedback I received for my own efforts, but it was all taken to heart and I appreciate it. I'll post the card ASAP. Have to make some adjustments since I didn't get a few things when I expected them...

Thots?
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Hayden
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"Make sure you get my good side, pal."
If you have not read the entire show, or at the very least the Cibernetico, I'm gonna wait while you do that. Because here be spoilers.




















You're back? Great! Now,

YOSHI.

GODDAMN.

FUKUMORI!


I love the Pirate Bay Spider Cav. So very much.

Also, I never want to hear Lucas speak bad about Horus. Why can't you see he cares about you?

For the feedback I received, I do appreciate it. I try to set up different styles to differentiate Dream and Seto, and since Dream is the loud and outspoken one, it makes more sense for him to ramble and talk while Seto is more reserved. That's not to say I don't want Seto to speak at length on certain things, but they've each got their own style that I really want to define and expand upon.

Oh, and Aimi is the best wingman in the company. And I'm glad the burgeoning romance between her and KISUKE a few months ago was brought up.
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Daisuke
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The truth is: I am terrified at the prospect of seven Tremendouses.

Shame Setsuko lost, I liked her new manager. [¬_¬]

I did some angles with the intention of building up the seemingly inevitable KitaSeikai vs. BLS match, but it got a little vague. I had a feeling that the Blue Labels were breaking up, and the angle [quality stuff, by the way] made me think that even more.

PS. The bit with the Bloodbath fan was just so I could drop a link to the t-shirt in.

Cibernetico was snazzy.
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Jo-Jo
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Um...nice to know you're finding Terri better, but...what happened to the idea I sent you twice?

--edit--
Also didn't even know BLS was even a part of the match until I read the results. Were they a late addition?

Party on,
Joe.

~eat snacky smores~
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Daisuke
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Yeah, the card got bumped at least once to reflect this.
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Minister Wighty
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Jo-Jo,Feb 4 2014
07:26 AM
Um...nice to know you're finding Terri better, but...what happened to the idea I sent you twice?

--edit--
Also didn't even know BLS was even a part of the match until I read the results. Were they a late addition?

Party on,
Joe.

~eat snacky smores~

I've had an extremely rough week in my personal life and it's effected my attention span. I am very sorry I violently misunderstood what you were asking about. If you like, we can start that angle this week.

And yes, it was about a day after the card was posted but it was bumped. Perhaps I should start posting OOC when the card gets bumped with some edits?
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Nathan
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Awesome show this week. I definitely agree that the April/Cody interaction in the RP's was great. The match itself was good as well. I enjoyed writing the segment between BLS this week and the match flowed really well with it. I was hoping to get more RP's up and get them in sooner but things kinda fell apart on that end. As I had mentioned to Wight in a PM, the idea to have BLS just arriving to the arena and have them be late in character was more to sort of match the fact that we were late getting RP's in this week. Lol. It was a sort of a on-the-fly idea I came up with to get something up.

As I've said before, I really like Lita's stuff with Astro/Lucas. That whole storyline has been awesome to see coming together and the main event with Astro and Intensity was great. I wasn't expecting that kind of finish to it but I think that was perfect. Everybody involved in the entire show did a great job in their RP's.

I'm definitely looking forward to the Vice card and hopefully I can get some quality stuff done for it.
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Jo-Jo
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Sometimes it's a little hard to see if there's glowing eyes or not, maybe just writing "Updated" in the card title might help or something. As for the angle; alright.
Party on,
Joe.

~eat snacky smores~
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Doomed
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I'm very sorry about my no-show of doom for BLACK. It was a busy week, with bouncing back-and-forth between work and family-time, and I feel like a moron for confusing the deadline and the result date. My bad, entirely.


With that said, I still enjoyed BLACK/Bullet. Top-notch show from top to bottom. It's the consistent quality of results that's why I love being a part of NGIW, though my win-loss record here says otherwise. :P
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