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Topic Started: Feb 13 2014, 04:53 AM (282 Views)
Minister Wighty
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OK. That's what you can basically expect from here on out. Sundays I'll be able to do more spit and polish, but that's a normal Wednesday.

Card'll be up... uh... when I get time. Within the next 24 hours. Any suggestions or requests? PM me.

I'll post some feedback in this thread from this week's judges at that time, too.

I think everyone who RPed did a great job, though. So there's that.

Thots?
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Lita Maivia
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Show was good. I really enjoyed Yoshi's match (surprised he won) and loved the Trent/Suri/Seto match. That was fun and the ending was really cute.

I'm surprised to see Astro in the tag match. In the RPs, the mask had been destroyed and I thought I had passed along in my notes that he would be Lucas again.

Also disappointed that Wight and I weren't able to get our segment together to start off April's new storyline. Why did this RP window feel ridiculously short?
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triadred
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Because you're getting older and you forget things. I think it's time we put Lita in a home, guys. It's for the best. Don't worry though. We'll visit every other weekend.

Is it just me, or are people falling off the map? I know I wasn't around that much this week... but I had the computer blues. Seems like that roster swell has subsided and some of the flash-in-the-pans are fading out. I suppose, in a way, that's a blessing in disguise. The roster is shrinking down to a manageable size which probably takes a lot of weight off Wight's shoulders... but not off his ass! Hey-oh! I kid, I kid. You have an adorable ass, Wight. At least, that's what the Boy says! Oh! Two for two!

I mixed some sorries into Lita's birthday cake and she's going to have to share with Wight, because I didn't have time to churn out an Odd Couple RP before the deadline. For whatever reason, I experienced mad writer's block inside of that RP hour I had. Probably because I'm not a writer! I read that feedback chunk last week about the Odd Couple needing to balance match talk with personal talk more... I'll strive for sure. That kind of feedback is awesome and I'm glad Wight's including it in the show feedback threads.

Thanks to Hayden for being a good sport. I know that most people like to chug along their storyline path uninterrupted, and having someone like a Scott Free rain on their parade is more often than not, not welcomed even out of character. So thanks for indulging me, man. You're the coolest.
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ratedgdr
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"No pointed sticks?" "SHUT UP!!!!
I have a bad feeling MWC's feud just vanished.
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Nathan
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triadred,Feb 13 2014
10:05 AM
That kind of feedback is awesome and I'm glad Wight's including it in the show feedback threads.

I completely agree. The feedback really helps, especially when it's tough to find a direction to go in. I tried to use the feedback from last time about how BLS should prey on Claire to get their aggressive side across and instead applied it to the match with hide.

Which brings me to my next point, even though I already told him on Yahoo Messenger, sorry to Dai for the late RP this week. Despite having the good feedback to work from and build something out of it, I was still mentally drained for some reason and I couldn't get anything decent down for RP's. I'm not entirely sure how good my RP was for this Vice cycle but I mostly tried to get Nathaniel's aggression across and bring up storyline stuff with hide.

The match itself was really good and I liked the disqualification finish because it also got the BLS aggressiveness across as well. The show overall was great as usual; I agree with Wight in that everyone involved in RP's did a great job.

Looking forward to the next one!

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triadred,Feb 13 2014
10:05 AM
I think it's time we put Lita in a home, guys. It's for the best. Don't worry though. We'll visit every other weekend.


Truth :p
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Lita Maivia
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Hey now. I checked my sent PMs and I DID pass that info along. I'm not crazy. I'm the most sane person here. :p
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Nathan
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Lita Maivia,Feb 13 2014
03:51 PM
I'm the most sane person here. :p

That's debatable. :p
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Minister Wighty
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Feedback. Sorry it took so long. Been moving.

"I guess I didn't quite understand what Poison was on about this week."

"I was really anxious to see the Dream character go places."

"Predator Nation needs more content. The RPs are very brief and very little happens in them."

"I felt hide's crazed sermon was one of the better ones of that Dai's made."

It's kind of light, but feedback was kind of light this week. Sorry.
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triadred
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I remembered a question that I had... why is it Scott Free can't win a match without a low blow? I mean, if my RP's are good enough to earn a win, why taint the victory? It's like the character is being set up to fail further down the road. "I'm going to straight up out wrestle you!" Scott Free said to his opponent before the big match. The opponent laughs right in Scott's face and spits a little. "Ha! Whatever you say, ball kicker..." What do I do when that happens?
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Minister Wighty
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The most succinct answer is that Nir and I are both crazy busy, which causes us to be kind of forgetful. Like how Lucas was supposed to come down to the ring this week, not Astro. Its why I've been calling for help on a lot of fronts, but few are answering. :/

I'm sorry it happened. It was nothing personal, or even intentional, and I'll do what I can to avoid it in the future, but these are just some of the boo boos were going to have to expect for the time being.
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triadred
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I wish there were a code for inflection. People seem to think my tone come off way barkier than I intend it to. I blame concise army writing! I'm in no way miffed about the low blow victories. I'm curious. Besides, how could I ever be angry with you, Wight? You're too dreamy! Right, Lita!
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Daisuke
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triadred,Feb 19 2014
01:43 PM
"I'm going to straight up out wrestle you!" Scott Free said to his opponent before the big match. The opponent laughs right in Scott's face and spits a little. "Ha! Whatever you say, ball kicker..." What do I do when that happens?

What you do is play it like he's either a liar, or delusional; like you know it's happening, but he won't acknowledge it. There's money in heels that think they're faces.

PS. Dai's laptop's hard drive is cooked. May be fixable, may not be. May curtail his RPing, may not.
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triadred,Feb 19 2014
08:43 AM
I remembered a question that I had... why is it Scott Free can't win a match without a low blow? I mean, if my RP's are good enough to earn a win, why taint the victory? It's like the character is being set up to fail further down the road. "I'm going to straight up out wrestle you!" Scott Free said to his opponent before the big match. The opponent laughs right in Scott's face and spits a little. "Ha! Whatever you say, ball kicker..." What do I do when that happens?

Win if you can, lose if you must, but ALWAYS cheat.

That's the mark of a great heel. Why do they care if they fight fair? They win, that's all that matters. Dude, that is the ESSENCE of being a villain. You either do what Dai said and pretend like it's not happening, or embrace that shit. "Yeah, I kick people in the nuts. I rake eyes, I cheat, I break the rules, because rules can't contain me and nobody's done a damn thing about it yet, so I guess they're too scared to!" or something. If you're gonna be a bad guy, give us a reason to hate you. It can be something as simple as not fighting fair. The thing we forget about wrestling sometimes is that you don't have to reinvent the wheel to make a compelling character. :)

Pretending like it doesn't happen really does get you heat though. I remember Adam Pearce getting checked before a match once, and the guy is a NOTORIOUS rulebreaker. He looks right at the ref and says "What do you mean, illegal object?! I don't cheat! I am a stand up guy!" BBBOOOOOOOOOOO. We all know he's full of it, but what does he care?
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ratedgdr
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"No pointed sticks?" "SHUT UP!!!!
Minister Wighty,Feb 18 2014
11:54 PM
"Predator Nation needs more content. The RPs are very brief and very little happens in them."

Well, last show I had a lot of personal shit distract me from doing a decent promo, but there's one feud I've been wanting to have and that somebody and I had wanted for months and I keep getting shifted further and further away from it.
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Minister Wighty
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PM me about it. Lets make it happen.
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"No pointed sticks?" "SHUT UP!!!!
Minister Wighty,Feb 20 2014
05:36 PM
PM me about it. Lets make it happen.

PMed the person who was supposed to be involved. If this is still happening, I'll let you know.
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