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| MADNESS Feedback; 03/05/2014 | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 6 2014, 12:01 AM (571 Views) | |
| Lita Maivia | Mar 8 2014, 03:09 PM Post #21 |
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The Lovely Assistant
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I'm pretty much just waiting to see if Hayden still has full thoughts to give. :D However, I'd love to hear from anybody on this show's results or the fed as a whole. I am in a creative mood lately so I am down to help anyone that wants to get something together. All my characters are in a good place to mix it up with pretty much anyone at the moment. So I encourage anyone to hit me up by PM, email, or YIM. I love discussing this place and it's characters but I don't hear from people much at all. :( |
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| Nightmare | Mar 8 2014, 07:31 PM Post #22 |
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You and I are waiting to hear back from Adam on our plan, Lita. Lol |
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| Lita Maivia | Mar 8 2014, 10:08 PM Post #23 |
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The Lovely Assistant
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Well yes, in general I'm waiting to hear back from Adam on that storyline idea I pitched for the two of you. I'm also waiting for Nate and Steve to post an RP idea that I suggested for the three of us. And I'd like to do something RP-related between Seto and Suri as well as Cody and April, but those aren't really anything concrete that's been put out. For this thread alone, though, I always like reading Hayden's feedback. :D |
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| Hayden | Mar 9 2014, 12:08 AM Post #24 |
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"Make sure you get my good side, pal."
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Sorry it's been late Lita. Just so much to take in, I had to have breaks in between reading. Thots..... - SICK turned out amazing. The matches were concise, but they each told a story. That being MWC and Free are looking like threats to whoever they face. Would've liked to see competition in these matches, but c'est la vie. - The Dream Team having a match was a nice change of pace, as we haven't seen much of The Jokester lately. Truth be told, I sometimes struggle with Jokester, only because I end up making Dream the straight man to Jokester's antics (The Reunioning really shows that). I wanted to get a third RP up to introduce Arya and have The Dream Team be the wacky duo, but time escaped me on Monday. Shame. As for the match, once again surprised that Jo didn't get the victory in this one. Don't get me wrong, I always enjoy seeing The Dream (Team) pick up the W, but I thought Jo's story this cycle was great. He did PM me to let me know there would be a change in the line-up, and I thought the dynamic between Catherine and Roxie was entertaining. I'd love to do some more follow up, given that The Dream Team and Roxie seem to be cut from the same mold. - PPV THOTS needs it's own thot. - Great start to the PPV with the Flycore Title match. Shame to see Pete go after having a pretty nice feud between Dream and Vycious, so to see him go is a shame. That said, I did think this was Seto's to win, so I was a little shocked to see Gus pick up the victory. He's been doing well as of late, but I felt his RP wasn't as strong as it was against Free the week before. But he did get the victory and I don't want to take away from that, so congratulations to Gus. - I'm always gonna be just a tad upset that Daffney is used as a rep, especially after seeing that picture. She is very beautiful. - The match itself had a great story behind it, with Bloodbath ready to really wreck shit and April eager to prove herself. I'll be honest, I nominated April for most improved at the last NGIW Awards, and given the rate she's going, I could see her winning it this year. Plus, with April winning, it opens up a lot of possibilities for opponents. - A WILD RIN TAKEDA APPEARS. - I like Rin Takeda. - I really hope this isn't the last Hard Ten Match in NGIW, because hot damn this is a great feud-ender. Holland got to look like a beast during this match, and I could see this becoming his specialty if he wanted. - I quite liked the talking point of Cody letting the RCR and the Flycore Title slip through his fingers, and how this match was his chance to solidify his hold on the Midway Title. It gave everything he did more of a sense of urgency, as though he really needed to win and make this the title he could be proud of. The main thot I left with was that the only move performed in the ring was the finisher while everything else was outside the ring. Almost like they (from a "behind the scenes" standpoint) wanted as many fans as possible to see the finish and actually have a wrestling move happen in the ring. - THAT SPIDER ENTRANCE THO! - I touched on it in my Brief Thots (tm), but it was nice to see the BLS get the titles. I would have liked a run down of the rules of a Black Feather Universal Match, as the commentators mentioned the points being used up. Aside from that, I love the hide character, and Hikou's still a punk but that's part of his charm, and seeing the Spider Knights lose hurts my heart. But it was the BLS's time, and they even won like bastards after using Lioncock to assist them. - Post-match, I kinda didn't like. Yeah, BLS acting like they did all the work is classic heel and I can sorts get behind it, but the reveal of the anger between them being fake left a bit of a bad taste in my mouth. The animosity between the two has been interesting to see over the past few months, with Eversol getting the title shot against Astro and Alexander being jealous, and I felt there were some great RP's born out of the tension between them. Seeing that it was all a ruse kinda makes me feel as though I got invested for nothing. In a sense, they played the heel roles well, so I can respect them for that. But I still feel a bit cheated, especially because I felt like there could have been an interesting series of RP's based on the tension still between them while trying to co-exist as champions. - Poor Lioncock. I've made it no secret I dug the guy from the beginning, so I was sad when this happened. Especially when he said "But guys I thought we were frien-". Sad Hayden is sad. - Oh hey Kim Coulter what up? - I really hoped we'd see Lucas instead of Astro and Horus would accompany him to the ring and they'd reunite and I could explode in a ball of happiness. So seeing Astro (the fiend!) crush the paper of Lucas and Horus.... he may as well have crushed my heart. MY HEART LITA. JUST LET ME HAVE MY HOOLU! PLEASE! - Don't judge me on that last thot. - Triple threat matches are always an interesting read, given that you always want to make all three look as good as they can and keep the action fair. So going into this, I felt a little apprehension in how this would turn out. Spoiler: Wonderful. Each competitor played to their strengths and got to show off, from Astro's luchadore antics to Intensity showing off his power to Stanton's desire to succeed, each one looked amazing at the end of it. I loved Stanton hitting the Shoryuken on Intensity and the Proto Buster on Astro, only to get a two from both men. These are K.O.'s people, and the kickouts show how much both men wanted to be champion. Stanton losing was tough to see, but after the showing he had, I'd say he has nothing to be ashamed of. A fantastic match. - Lioncock.... :( - I could hear crazy rambling hide all day. ALL HAIL THE RAPTOR MESSIAH, HIDETO REDENTOR! - THE CUBE MOTHERFUCKERS. AWW YEAH. - At this point all thots are going to be parts I especially marked out for. - Loved the "five-pirate + two-knight + some guy" description of the Pirate Bay Spider Cav. And judging by the banner that Lita made and I stole (sorry!), he's the Grey Pirate and I am perfectly fine with that. Optionally, the Black Pirate and that sounds badass. - Seto and Suri walking arm and arm was cute. - BLUE MIST! BLUE MIST! BLUE MIST! BLUE MIST FOR EVERYONE! - HADOKEN CONNECTS! GIGAFLARE ACHIEVED! - Aizawa fighting his way through the Spider Cav as Tremendous fights through the Sekigun is a great visual. And finally they come to blows! - Nice to see Seto try to help the Captain. Get into his good graces buddy! - Tremendous bows to no man and that's another great visual. - To save thots, I liked Seto coming to Suri's aid throughout the entire match. Not that she can't take care of herself (as she demonstrates later), but I'd like to think it's a callback to the beginning of this little romance and it's still cute. - Yoshi swinging off a cable to take down three of the Sekigun is great. - And Kichi goes down! Though he did put up a pretty good fight for the time he was in there. - Renji is a dick! It is everyone for themselves, but still dude. KISUKE fell off the Cube because of you! - SHITTO. It just got real. - Aizawa trying to get KISUKE to strike Aimi is possibly the evilest thing he's done. Bastard! - DAMN RIGHT KISUKE YOU FIGHT FOR YOUR WOMAN- where are you going? - SETO UCHIHA IS A FUCKING MACHINE! - He might also be dead after that. But still. Damn that's impressive. - Shinigami just giving up has me confused. He was fighting earlier... - BLACK MIST FROM hide! I'd capitalize it, but legend has it he can hear when you capitalize the "h". - Hikous kinda dies and Renji follows him after Suri kicks ass. And she follows it up with a Shot Across The Bow! - Ken and Aizawa striking one another just makes me wince. They must have been some stiff shots. - Aizawa's a tough bastard I'll give him that. Dude refuses to quit. - A final act of defiance. I can dig it. - GOKAI SCRAMBLE! - Holy crap how did I forget hide? Sneaky little bastard! - Post show has me curious. Shinigami being creepy and Aizawa showing fear has me legit confused. There's a deal mentioned, Aizawa plays the role of punk until the bitter end.... and just like that, they're gone. - I would have gladly paid for this PPV. Well done everyone who RP'ed and a special shoutout to Nir for putting in amazing work. I'll miss you brother, and I hope to see you soon. |
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| Lita Maivia | Mar 9 2014, 12:36 AM Post #25 |
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The Lovely Assistant
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It's okay. It was well worth the wait! I love reading feedback!!! Also, sorry for basically badgering you for it.
Aw. That's so sweet. Thank ye!
There's a possibility it could be Seto. Kim has shown a ridiculous weakness for good-looking Asian men. Ask Sakubara Kanemoto, Yasutora Narita, and hide Kitazawa. Although, I don't think she ever quite got over the first and that latter... I don't know what's going on there but I think it's always going on.
Too late. You are judged! Also, don't give up on Lucas just yet. Stay with me here and hopefully you'll enjoy what's in store for this angle. Hehe.
I was actually going for the Silver Pirate, but that didn't come across quite as expected in the banner. But if Seto would prefer to be the Black Pirate, I'm not going to argue. Also, no worries for nabbing it. After all, I didn't even ask if it was OK to put Seto in there. Haha.
I personally loved all of these! The imagery of these two just blasting their way through the "grunts" to face off was incredible. The whole refusing to bow, Shitto's grand return from Hell, and of course the Gokai Scramble finally happens. Nir certainly blew this feud off like the ultimate finale.
Nir informed me beforehand that he had a moment planned for this match centering around the KISUKE/Aimi storyline and I had been so eager to see what he had up his sleeve. It was an incredible moment but I'm still really sad that it's a bittersweet moment. KISUKE has his great defiance but then he leaves forever. I really wanted them to kiss in the middle of the ring, KISUKE help the Pirates win, and then have him stick around to join the Pirate Bay Spider Cav as the Gold Pirate. Yes, I said Gold! It makes sense. Trust me. I think Nir should at least bring KISUKE back and re-join NGIW. I don't care what anybody says because Aimi is REALLY sad right now. Like, she's so sad in my head that it hurts to RP her... and it hurts to not RP her. :( |
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| Daisuke | Mar 9 2014, 09:05 AM Post #26 |
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Who Let That Idiot Near a Computer?
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She's a load of fun. I'd do her as a full time character, but she doesn't have enough to say.
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I must confess that part of hide's rambling was straight up lifted from Bleach., It's the actual incantation for Sokatsui, [Pale Fire, somethingsomething] which is what hide does, although it does look a whole lot like spitting mist. Bonus points to Renji who said something similar in the week. Bleach has been a great source of And finally, yes: hide can hear capital H's in his name. |
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| triadred | Mar 9 2014, 11:09 AM Post #27 |
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The Handsomest Boy in Professional Wrestling
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Given the kind of feedback I've received, I'm going to put it out there and let the popular vote decide his fate... keep Scott Free: yes or no. Also, Lita and Will... I'm mulling over some of the little details and will get back to you guys before the weekend's through. Promise! That means I will doubly get back to Lita. Man... what a busy lady! |
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| Doomed | Mar 27 2014, 08:50 PM Post #28 |
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Belt Maker
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As I just told Wrighty in PMs, I found myself too occupied with stuff outside of the fed for a while, I just couldn't find the time, and what was supposed to be a week to recharge myself somehow got stretched out. I'm sorry if I worried you or anyone else; Leaving NGIW hanging was never my intention. I love this place too much to just leave it, so an apology to everyone's in order. That being said.....I LOVED this card. Great, well-paced, entertaining card. I don't expect any less from an NGIW card, but it's quality still surprised me. |
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