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Vice/SICK feedback; ULTRA-Sick Wighty Edition
Topic Started: Apr 3 2014, 01:21 PM (180 Views)
Minister Wighty
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Guh. I'M still sick. But I felt a little better this morning so I hammered out the matches I needed before work.

Irritated by the schedule mixup, but it can't be helped, I guess.

I have thoughtful feedback but not right now. Head too fuzzy.

Grats to the winners, better luck next time to the losers. A few storyline wins in this show, that's unusual.

EDIT: Thanks to Dai for SICK and Lita for helping out with Vice. And promos from both of them, I think.

Thots?
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Lita Maivia
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The show was good for what it was. I'm glad Dai and Wight did what they could for the show. Honestly, I didn't want to write anything this week because last week I put a LOT of work into the show and there was virtually no feedback as a result. That was a bit akin to a kick in the teeth so yeah.

RPs this week felt kind of sparse. Was something going on for people?

I dunno. Tough to get excited about next week when the level of interest from people lately feels so incredibly low.

It was cool seeing Suri get a win. Wasn't entirely sure if I was going to pull it out this week. I wanted to do something with Hayden but not sure what's going on there. Tried to contact him three times (I think, maybe two) and haven't heard back from him. Hope everything is OK. Suri was written great, though, and I was happy to see her win by less than clean methods. She is the dirtiest fighter of the Pirates and would be perfectly happy with that win.

I originally wanted Bloodbath involved in Erik's match this week but after last week, I haven't heard a peep about either regarding the way their characters were written for the kick off of this angle so I didn't really know what made sense for them this week, to be completely honest.

Had pretty good communication with T this week and I really enjoyed what we wrote together even if it took way long for us to get it done. Surprised we won because I got inspired so late in the game and I really enjoyed the interactions between Roxie and Terrifying. They were so FUN! I love seeing Roxie interact with people that don't get her. And I think I'm enjoying her so much more now that I hear Usagi Tsukino for her now.

I enjoyed what I wrote for Nathaniel vs. Dream. It was a brief overview, of course, but it felt fun and intense at the same time. Dream is fun and BLS is intense. I think the combination works fantastic with those two. I really like what I'm seeing in the RPs from both sides of this feud and it does get me inspired to write when I read the characters.

A bit bummed that things with Horus/Astro sort of crumbled. Wight and I discussed things but it slipped through the cracks. I rushed something into the show to get Astro out there, but I dunno. Just doesn't feel like anything to me at the moment.

The Bisenshi ULTRA stuff was FANTASTIC and the true highlight to this show. The backstage segment, the Intensity/Tremendous match, shenanigans, and aftermath were all aces. It's the only thing I'm currently excited for at this particular moment.
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Daisuke
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I dunno, I just had a bad week or two for RPs. I didn't help that my opponent in the hide match was missing.

As I was telling Wight, the only ideas I had involved Rin saying "Just so."

¬_¬

Anyone like Sick? It seemed pretty funny in my head.
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Nightmare
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Basically what happened with me was, my term just started yesterday and what happens is I don't get home until 7:30 at night, and im so wiped out that it's hard for me to roleplay. But what you did for Erik and Scott was perfect.
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Hayden
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Yeah, I need to apologize to Lita this week. Midterms are starting next week, and I've found myself buried under piles of homework and studying. On the plus side, I did have to do a monologue for my Acting Class and became a pseudo-Raptor Messiah. They found the words quite chilling, so props to Dai for the writing and hopefully he doesn't mind I used a promo of his as inspiration.

I've mostly skimmed, but it seems it's more of an overview than detailed explanations, which isn't bad at all. The show felt short and concise, like a review of the show. I'm not sure if this is how it'll be from now on or if it was only for this week, but it was a nice change of pace. As always Wighty, I'm available to write a match, since I'll be on spring break after next week. I'll PM you.

Also, loved SICK this week. Dai is, as always, the man. Loved the commentary for Utena vs. Shiguya especially.
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Sqweaktoy
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Sorry about this week myself. I had other ideas, but the way my one RP flowed I kind of wrote myself into a corner.

Honestly I think that there was more interest than it seems like, just the longer cycle made it seem sparser than it was.


I did like the shows a lot, SICK was a fun read and I love the Rin Takeda segment, (which I believe I already told Dai)

Vice was also pretty great, I know that Lita felt like the Astro/Horus thing went a bit flat this week, but I don't know, I thought it was good to have a 'set up week' this cycle, that way things have a place to heat up from till the PPV. Everything else proceeded quite well from my perspective.
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Minister Wighty
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I thought SICK was HILARIOUS. I got to make the daiface! SQUEE!

I think a lot of the storylines are progressing nicely, albeit a bit slow. Communication hasn't been 100% for whatever reason and it has an effect both on what I'M aware of and what the rest of the management staff is aware of. REMEMBER; EVEN IF SOMETHING IS OBVIOUS IN YOUR RPS, EVEN IF WE TALKED ON YAHOO OR FACEBOOK, IF YOU NEED ME TO REMEMBER SOMETHING IMPORTANT FOR HE SHOW YOU HAVE TO REMIND ME. PMs work best.

Surprised and disappointed there weren't any other judged this week, but I don't mind calling a whole card by myself. Went with the ending to Roxie/Terrifying because since Cody and April had some really good RPs it felt awful to have them lose to a solo Roxie. Terrifying was great, and if not for the drop off I probably would've given Joe's team the W. I was less thrilled with Roxies efforts, but he kept on point and put out a lot of decent content with her.

Really liked what Scott had to say this week. Slowly selling me on that character, Adam. Figured I'd get him a clean win cuz he deserves it.

The short results are basically what's going to happen if I don't have enough writers... Or if he writers I do have only post short results. I will pit in as much effort as you guys do, but if you don't care enough to contribute full matches, then neither do I.

Great to see Doomed back. Anyone know what happened to BDC?
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Minister Wighty
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Not editing a post on my phone... Just asking for trouble.

if you guys know you've got some stuff coming up like vacation or midterms or whatever, let us know so we can manage our expectations. Even if you still wanna be booked, not waiting around for stuff that's never gonna happen keeps us from wasting our time and lets us focus on other areas.
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triadred
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I thought I had given feedback on the Bloodbath/Holland match, but I am mistaken! Sorry for that, Lita. I thought the match was amazing! You captured Bloodbath perfectly and I have all the confidence in the world in your decisions for this feud going forward. Will and I are in good hands!

I'm glad to hear that I'm making headway with Scott Free. So far I've been told that he's like a watered down Brian Mauler... and I'm trying to get away from that. I'm curious to know what you liked about the RP's, Wight.
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Jo-Jo
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Not gonna lie, it was fairly difficult coming up with material for Terrifying and Roxie that would keep consistent without overloading their characters. Figured I could've stuck with the "Roxie doesn't want to tag with men" and "Terrifying won't tag with anyone" routine but figured I'd give it a shot and try at their clashing personalities. Not to mention at the end of the day, I prefer writing "stupid Roxie" to "feminist Roxie" as I find the latter gets stale faster.

It does suck that both joint projects I was with ended rather early for the extensive RP time. It was fun, for the short time, working with Utena and I always enjoy writing Eve with Vi. I can understand Wight's situation there, still just saying it sucks. Looking forward though to continuing some Mouse writing.

Party on,
Joe.

~eat snacky smores~
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Daisuke
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Hayden,Apr 3 2014
10:32 PM
On the plus side, I did have to do a monologue for my Acting Class and became a pseudo-Raptor Messiah. They found the words quite chilling, so props to Dai for the writing and hopefully he doesn't mind I used a promo of his as inspiration.

<3
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