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| Black/Bullet Feedback; 04/13/14 | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Apr 14 2014, 06:08 PM (246 Views) | |
| Lita Maivia | Apr 14 2014, 06:08 PM Post #1 |
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The Lovely Assistant
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Well, somehow I managed to write the entire show. Wasn't planning on it but it sort of became necessary, I guess. Anyway, I posted it up because I figured it's best to get it up so people can read what happened. Thanks to Boy for the promo that we did for the show. I had fun with it. Thanks to Wight for the Bisenshi promo we wrote together. Good stuff. Everything else was written by me. So apologies if I screwed up anyone's character. I'm not really a match writer these days. :\ |
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| Jo-Jo | Apr 14 2014, 06:42 PM Post #2 |
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For the record, Roxie does have an entrance in with her updated wiki like profile I sent Wight a couple weeks ago. Her profile's just not edited up with it yet. Also, yes, Roxie does consider people like Horus to be a "manly man". But obviously in a bad way. Other than that, I didn't find anything wrong with how you wrote Mouse or Roxie. So, you know, thumbs up there. :) I think this past week I found out why I don't like writing Feminist Roxie very often; it, unfortunately, concludes in a stalemate of an argument. Roxie's deadset on her views and will never change them. So it's sorta why now I try and avoid using that as much as possible for matches. I know some don't like "Idiot Roxie" but I think she's far easier to respond to in a way where things can actually grow. Also, so Hayden knows now the Spectre Girls will be Mouse and Eve. Roxie's needing to pick up extra shifts at the Hellfire Club for bailing on her last. Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| Sqweaktoy | Apr 14 2014, 07:23 PM Post #3 |
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The Boy
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This was... Unexpected. Lita you are a hero. just... a hero. In other news the thing that broke was a securing pin for the computer's heat sink, replacement parts are on order now and should be in by Tuesday, thursday at the latest, expect Wight and myself to be on less frequently until then, as we are sharing one computer for the first time in literally years. Now on to the feedback. First the ME Go team Violence!!! Did you know that was the first time Intensity's been pinned since Hikou back in December? Which was before he won the title. Just saying that's a pretty big feather in Holland's cap. I loved the Aimi ULTRA match. and the aftermath spells interesting things in the future. More as I get time, (sorry I'm at work atm) |
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| Nightmare | Apr 14 2014, 08:36 PM Post #4 |
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Holy crap! I just beat the NGIW Champion! I have to say, I have not had this much fun roleplaying for a match in a long damn time. That was a blast. Very much like working with everyone involved. But holy crap! I just beat the NGIW Champion! I wasn't expecting that. I figured if my team won, Ad would get the fall considering Bloodbath is a former NGIW contender. Great show gang. |
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| ratedgdr | Apr 14 2014, 09:10 PM Post #5 |
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"No pointed sticks?" "SHUT UP!!!!
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OK, I won't lie, I'm a bit surprised I retained. Actually, make that VERY surprised. Other hand, it gives me an opening to go a different route for me promos this cycle.... |
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| Daisuke | Apr 15 2014, 01:39 AM Post #6 |
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Who Let That Idiot Near a Computer?
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Show rocked, I sucked. This is an accurate summary of events from my end. Dammit, when did Kim get so nice? |
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| Lita Maivia | Apr 15 2014, 09:29 PM Post #7 |
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The Lovely Assistant
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Thanks to everyone who left some feedback so far. Dai, you don't suck. And I don't know when Kim got so nice. There's just something about Intensity, I guess. |
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| Sqweaktoy | Apr 15 2014, 09:51 PM Post #8 |
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The Boy
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It's all the pretty, he has so much of it, and Kim likes it so... |
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| triadred | Apr 15 2014, 10:04 PM Post #9 |
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The Handsomest Boy in Professional Wrestling
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Lita, I think you should take over as Bloodbath's handler because you do a far better job with him than I could ever hope to do! But I suppose that's a given since you rock so hard. Show was outstanding. Scott Free losing... eh, I can live with that. I didn't feel like his offer was very good this week. I'm still curious about Wight's thoughts on him. I'm wanting to know what's caught his attention. Congrats to the winners (me) and better luck next crime to the losers (me also). |
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| Nathan | Apr 15 2014, 10:28 PM Post #10 |
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The Diamond Standard
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Agreed! The entire show was awesome. The Stephen/Dream match came out great and I won't speak for Steve but I feel like the Eversol character was portrayed perfectly just like the Alexander character was portrayed last week. I've been having a lot of fun RP'ing against Hayden for this feud. We both have definitely been on our toes trying to match up in quality with the Dream Team RP's. The Cody/April vs. Hikou/Setsuko match was awesome as was the Strange Bedfellows main event. Overall the entire show was amazing and definitely thanks to Lita for writing the whole thing. Everybody involved this last cycle put up some good stuff RP-wise. I'm definitely looking forward to the next card. |
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| Lita Maivia | Apr 17 2014, 08:54 PM Post #11 |
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The Lovely Assistant
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Well, I wrote everything but since Wight is incapacitated at the moment, I guess I should give feedback on why people lost and whatnot. Mouse winning was pretty axiomatic. Utena's handler didn't RP. Wight suggested brooming her from the roster so that was done. I don't really have a whole lot of feedback on Mouse yet because she's so new. She doesn't seem offensive in any way, so that's a good thing. I don't quite get her yet. Maybe I missed something but I didn't understand the two entrances she had. We've already established that I'm not a big fan of Scott Free. I don't hate the character by any means, he just doesn't really ignite much interest out of me. That's out of the ordinary because generally I love what Adam does. I'm really enjoying what I'm seeing for Campbell since he returned. The "Harvey" thing is great as is the fear of chairs. I wanted to bring a chair into this match but I didn't find room for it. I hope Doomed is OK with the use of "Harvey" in the match. I actually really enjoyed writing Horus vs. Roxie more than I thought I would. I really enjoy the Horus character to an insane degree. I just think he's a fantastic character. I love reading him, I love interacting with him, and turns out I love writing him. Hopefully he was written accurately in the match. Roxie... I have a love/hate relationship with her. I do not like writing her in matches because I just don't get the whole song rhythm thing. So apologies if she wasn't written well in the match. Roxie winning wasn't a huge shock. Joe did so much more with Roxie as well as weaved some story into it. Horus just didn't say much at all, sadly. On another note for Horus/Roxie, sorry if Joe is at all offended that Astro played a big role in the match and subsequently the result. I wasn't trying to downplay Roxie's victory or say that she couldn't win on her own. I just wanted to build some heat for my upcoming match. I hope nobody was offended by that. I actually voted for a Cody/April storyline loss. I thought it would bode well for the Cody character if there was a sudden loss that he wasn't expecting. However, Wight pointed out that there was no conceivable way that he could give himself and Dai a victory in this encounter given what T and I had done with Cody and April. I've had a lot of fun working with T and I think the Cody/April friendship is one of my favorite things in NGIW at the moment. Coupled with the Reno/April... whatever the hell they have. My only regret with the match was that I felt I sort of short-changed Hikou way too much. So I apologize for that. Hikou was hilarious in the RP Wight and Dai did. I didn't really vote in the Dream/Eversol match. I voiced storyline concerns from both outcomes, but the feedback I received was that Eversol should win and there was curiosity on why it was even up for debate. I enjoyed what I saw from Dream (as I always do) and I had fun working with both Steve and Nate this week. The Flycore title match was the biggest issue when it came to deciding. Sticky did a good job with Richlen and Hayden has been on par with Seto for a good stretch of time now. The ultimate decision was that we would like to build to another match between these two, hence Richlen winning in a way that leaves it open for a rematch. We didn't want Richlen to cheat but we didn't want Seto to be knocked out of contention. I hope Hayden doesn't take this loss hard because we still love Seto and he will get another shot at the belt very soon. I think Ultra vs. Aimi was my favorite match that I wrote. It's short, but I think it does what it needs to. The flow of the match just hit a stride with me and I felt both looked fantastic in the short amount of time the match actually reads. The aftermath was my favorite, though. I love this version of Ultra. He's a bit darker and I love that. I've always felt the character would work great with a darker vibe to him. Like Wight said, I love that both Ultra and Trent are acting like self-entitled dicks. The main-event was another situation but in a different way. There was no denying that Will and Adam slaughtered Boy and Dai in the RPs. It's just how the cards fell and nobody was arguing that point. The concern was how to handle the NGIW Champ or RCR Champ getting pinned so close to their confrontation. I think Wight fielded it out to Boy and he may have decided to have Intensity be the one to get pinned. I think that worked best storyline-wise as hide is somehow the one stepping to Intensity in their pending confrontation so it wouldn't be a good move to have him take the fall. Scared as hell to write the match. I'm so glad Adam was happy with the way his character was written.
He does. Kim probably wants to see more of it. |
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