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Topic Started: Nov 13 2014, 05:21 AM (257 Views)
Minister Wighty
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Card'll be up tomorrow. More detailed feedback... maybe coming? I dunno. I liked everything this week. You guys really gave it your all, but somebody's gotta win and somebody's gotta lose so I picked the only ways I know how. I can go in-depth if you need me to. Otherwise, feel awesome, because you are.

Thanks to Dai and Lita for promo. Everything else by me.

Thots?
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Daisuke
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Had a feeling that Mr. Jack O'Lantern was going to be some variety of Tier. "I could barely get [R] to order a pizza." Hehe, love Graver.

Had some decent ideas this week, but couldn't make anything of them early enough to make them awesome. The Kim and hide one, in particular was sitting in my inbox for nearly the whole week. Hopefully, I'll have a bit more time this weekend to move that forward.

Koji is always a weird one to write, because he's just not interesting enough a promo on his own, but he's supposed to be the big, hard one. Think I did him justice. The match certainly did.

Scott Free was pretty good. Obviously, everyone was, but he deserves a mention. Adam was pretty much on fire all week.

EDIT: Also good to see some organic-ish development of the Pain character. Always seemed to me that having him mentioned was some Cart before the Horse thing. Good show.
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ratedgdr
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"No pointed sticks?" "SHUT UP!!!!
Annnnnnnnnnnnnnnnd my downward slide continues.
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Lita Maivia
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Don't feel bad, Sticky. I didn't win either and I was booked in A LOT of matches. But I had fun. Did you?
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triadred
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Good show. Lots to re-read when I get the chance. I really want to give this show the attention it deserves since so much happened. But I did skim. I'm happy to have won my matches. Who wouldn't be? That being said, I don't see Sticky's point of view with this downward slide stuff. I dunno, man... after a little research it's safe to say that Gus has been doing pretty well for himself of late. He had crazy momentum before Hellraise when he pinned Mike Harrison, who's a prime Midway contender, and then pinned Eric Holland, who was the King of Hell at the time! Dream took the fall at the PPV and Bloodbath took the fall last week. So yeah, you're really going to have to qualify your "feedback" before I buy into it. Or not. It's up to you. I'm not trying to jump on your back. I'll speak for myself when I say I don't like complaints that are without solutions or at least compelling logic attached to them.

All the role plays that I read this week really pumped my nads. I particularly enjoyed Kim Coulter finally ripping those rose tinted lenses away from Roxie's eyes. I hope tacking some Scott Free stuff on the end didn't offend anyone. It seemed like open ended tension between Roxie and Kim, and I figured a Scott Free exclamation point was a more fitting end than a Kim Coulter period... I'm talking punctuation, folks! Please, waffle me with your opinion if I'm wrong.

I enjoyed the scheming Nathaniel Alexander stuff this week. He's the guy I love to hate. Good stuff, Morpheus!

Tier back in NGIW?! Joy-gasm! This is a story I'm going to be watching close, and delightfully so. I much prefer "I want to win" Wight as opposed to the other guy you pretend to be sometimes.

I feel like I'm not clever enough for Dai's role plays... but whatever. My brain chuckles because hide made Kim wet. Heh.

EDIT: Forgot Bloodbath and Claire... it was hard to tap into the side-line heat Wight wants to brew between Gus and Bloodbath. That's mostly what motivated the second Odd Couple role play. The third was more or less a reaction to what Sticky had done with Gus. I wanted to cut ot off after Bloodbath talked about Shaelin, but more came out and I posted it just to see what would come of it. I'm happy with the results. Now, something I really want to talk about... the first role play was something I had rolling around inside my head since the Halloween Party. Kim/Bloodbath is a side-side-side story that I want to keep very much peripheral and build until the time is right. Sex nothing. It's going to be about manipulation and drama and fucking blood and violence!
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Pain
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The show was awesome, the Tier return was badass and I loved how even though Cody was barely in the match he was still fighting in a battle of his own. I think this could grow into something bigger, but we'll see.
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Nathan
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Great show this week! I had fun RP'ing Nathaniel scheming to take Cody out of the mix in their match. T and I tried to build up a bit more to what we got going but things didn't go exactly as we planned. The original intention that we had was for character development purposes for Cody and Nathaniel but also to stoke the fires a bit more in the Cody/Harrison feud. I PM'ed Mike in hopes that we could get a joint RP between Nathaniel and Harrison in order to add more fuel to the fire but I guess he didn't see it in time to get something up. In the end, at least the RP's T and I managed to get going served their purpose in developing our characters.

The stuff between Kim Coulter and Roxie that Joe and Lita did was awesome. The first thing I thought of when I read that interaction between the two was this for some reason. There was one RP that Joe posted where you could actually pinpoint that moment. Lol. Awesome stuff from both of ya.

Just like T said, the return of Tier was bad ass. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how that story progresses.

Overall a great show and a lot of good stuff from everybody involved. Looking forward to the next!
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Minister Wighty
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I'm at work right now, and goddammit, I WILL play some warlords of draw or in he next 48 hours, but I'll likely also do up a post for the "how to please me " thread about wins and losses, how to take them, and so on.

I'm struggling to come up with feedback for this cycle that you can really take to heart since its all either "RP more" or "be blessed with better ideas". I'm not sure what to say; everybody did great.
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Daisuke
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triadred,Nov 13 2014
08:24 PM
I feel like I'm not clever enough for Dai's role plays... but whatever.

Which bits? I thought I was being pretty obvious this week...

Well, apart from hide; but even I don't know what's going on there.
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