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| Minister Wighty | Nov 24 2014, 05:52 AM Post #1 |
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OK. No-shows from Dream and Knight sucked, but whatever. I was really impressed by Cody McGinnis, Claire de Loon, and Scott Free this week. All of them were really interesting, well-written, and well-developed. I wish I could gush more or go into more detail, but that's basically what I came away with. Everybody else did good, too. I can't say I was disappointed by anyone, and I really loved a lot of the fire showed by everybody, especially Sticky. I'm continuously impressed by your effort. Just having a hard time finding your niche in this fed. We'll get there soon. I love all the storyline suggestions and ideas I've been sent. I'm really glad to see everyone interacting. My favorite part of this week was Boy, Lita, and Nathan helping to build Cody McGinnis. I love seeing that kind of teamwork. Anyhow I'm gonna go work on the card. PREVIOUS THOUGHTS... Podcast, PPV, NGIW, and work all in one day on top of being sick? Yeah, I'm turnin' in for the night. Card up late tomorrow. Real feedback to follow. This RP cycle is going to sit on American Thanksgiving a bit... but there's plenty of time after and many of us aren't American, so I don't think there should be any problems being booked. If I recall correctly I shouldn't be booking Joe. Am I still to not be booking Mike Harrison? Hit me back with that, and like I said. Real feedback and new card tomorrow-ish. Thots? |
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| Jo-Jo | Nov 24 2014, 07:33 AM Post #2 |
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No, no, you can book me. But it's a heavy week so a light booking would be nice. It was just last week that was all scrunched up to where clear thought just wasn't possible. So yeah, in no way surprised Roxie lost. On a side rant, that one link in Adam's RP...that's what passes as fashion? Ill treatment of a model and a cut up shirt? Damn, I feel like Larry the Cable guy in saying I've got a whole drawer full of fifty dollar shirts now. Anyway, I see Poison's prediction came true. Will that mean something? Was he involved? Oh no!!! Actually, I don't know so I'm curious to see if anything comes from it. :P Damnit, Roxie's supposed to be something right now and I know what but getting her there and having her be that in a Roxie sense is...proving rather difficult. So apologies to Lita if I'm messing things up between her and Kim. At the same time I was hoping to get in a little more on the Roxie/Bloodbath thing but was constrained for time as in I didn't know when a two year old might wake up in the room next to mine again. lol I like Mouse and I like where she's going and how she's handling. Also I liked the "Rodent of the Spectre Girls" bit. I still don't know HOW I'm going to introduce the cloaked figures fully, but thus far it's good that it's gotten both Eve and Mouse now. I know, I know, Joe it's just another self driven storyline. If anyone else is ever interested in partaking, please drop me a line. All in all, a good show I wish I could've done more for. :) Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| Nathan | Nov 24 2014, 01:14 PM Post #3 |
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Awesome show this week! I had a lot of fun writing the RP's with T and Lita for this cycle. I'm really enjoying this storyline that T and I are crafting with Nathaniel and Cody. At first, in the previous RP cycle, I was hesitant that people may think it was the same thing with Nathaniel paying off an opponent but it's gone in a totally different direction this time and I think both Cody and Nathaniel have been built up pretty well in terms of their characters and gimmicks. The "Burning of a Bridge" RP was really good too. As for the match itself, I really liked the mini teaser to the upcoming match between April and Nathaniel. It was cool to see that and I'm looking forward to the full thing. I also liked how there was an extension of the "Burning of a Bridge" RP between Cody and April in the match itself with Cody beating the crap out of April for a bit. I've said it before and I'll say it again, I definitely like the fact that Tier is back and it was cool that he was in this show against Ken Hirogawa and that he got the win. Overall, this show was awesome and I'm definitely looking forward to the next. |
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| Lita Maivia | Nov 24 2014, 04:37 PM Post #4 |
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I really enjoyed this week's show and feel like a lot of good stuff is really brewing between a ton of characters. I apologize to Wight for not doing more with the Pirates this week. I just haven't been inside their heads for quite some time now. But! I do have an idea of something I'd like to do with this angle, so I'll shoot that your way soon. I'm eager to continue things with Adam and Joe. The Roxie/Kim thing can't be over that way. There definitely needs to be more going on there. And then there's Kim and Bloodbath. I am having way too much fun with that to have it go away. Then there's Claire. I've got some ideas for Claire if Adam is at all interested. Finally, April was so much fun this week. Unfortunately it all happened right out of the gate and I didn't know what to do with her later in the RP window. If everybody could be that motivated every week, we could probably consider going to weekly shows but it's way too soon to jump on that pony. A huge thanks to Boy for working with me on RPs. I absolutely love Mr. Intensity and am constantly amazed that I am working an angle with that character. He could have easily made April look like a fool in that RP but nope, finally one of my characters has nailed Mr. Intensity! Chester weeps that it's not him. LOL Also, I've had a great time working the storyline with T. The Cody and April interactions feel more like a TV show to me and I'm really enjoying the vibe that comes out of those. I think they add a lot to the characters and the storyline surrounding them that makes the matches they're in that much more exciting. And for it to go where it went on this show this week is great. I loved it so much but I don't have a clue where to go from there. If Cody doesn't approach April, I'm not sure she'd be willing to approach him this soon. So that'll be interesting to see where it goes. I really missed Mike Harrison this week. |
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| Daisuke | Nov 24 2014, 05:18 PM Post #5 |
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Who Let That Idiot Near a Computer?
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Hmm. Didn't really do enough to win with Sakura. Promo was a little disjointed, and the dinner party didn't really go anywhere. My own fault for just springing that on Lita. On the plus side, Graver still rocks, and there was good stuff on the show. T-III-er was/is cool, CODY and yay, Claire wins. |
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| Hayden | Nov 24 2014, 09:23 PM Post #6 |
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"Make sure you get my good side, pal."
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I'm gonna have to apologize for my lack of appearance this week. Working at a Marie Callender's on holidays may help pay bills, but it is exhausting work. I do have to say, many thanks to the commentary team picking up on The Dream's.... tendencies. Much appreciated. |
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| Sqweaktoy | Nov 24 2014, 10:28 PM Post #7 |
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This week was a blast, and right off the bat too, which is even better. I'm having a great time with April & May (Hayden, you have no idea what you started, I'm going to force that meme so hard) and I feel like the characters really work well together ( even if their Win/loss record doesn't exactly agree lol) so thanks to Lita for that. I'm really happy I got to do that RP with T. I love Cody's current gimmick and I like that I got to participate in it in a small way. Also BLOOD! SWEAT! TIER! That is all. |
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| triadred | Nov 25 2014, 04:02 PM Post #8 |
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Yay for unexpected contendership matches! Boo for bitter-sweet finishes. I feel bad for Sticky, because we were unexpectedly put against each other again, and I came out on top one more time. I'm willing to bet that had we not been booked in a tag match where we were able to lean on each other's role plays and instead had to stand as individuals, his output would have been much stronger. Hopefully, there's turn around for Gus Richlen in the near future! That being said, I'm happy to mix it up at the top of the Midway ladder again! It' going to be interesting to see what happens at Vice and consequently how Last Chance will shape up. Triple Threat match anyone? I see Scott poking his nose in April and Nathaniel's business at Vice for sure! Claire's doing well... and I didn't expect that. I half thought my work with her this week was going to be farted on. I don't usually do drama well. I can't think like how I think a woman thinks... yes, that makes sense if you read it slow. But drawing a little bit of experience from real-life arguments (that weren't obviously about wrestling and children) and asking the Misses for female input has panned out well... I guess. Suggestions are ALWAYS welcome, even though I didn't get much feedback last time I had asked for it. That's fine. I get it. But don't come crying to me when my stuff starts to suck. That's all on you! I liked what I liked, scratched my head over what I didn't, and yeah... great show. Stuff's really starting to get interesting around here, and that's all thanks to you stupid-talented lot! Keep up the fantastic work, folks! |
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| ratedgdr | Nov 29 2014, 03:52 PM Post #9 |
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Yeah, if I had known that the tag match would be canceled and it'd turn into a contender match I would have skipped my Boswell Adroit imitation and done a hell of a lot more. And now I'm hoping my mental block breaks soon. I may end up trying to do a massive promo on my phone and hope it doesn't log me out. |
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| Minister Wighty | Nov 29 2014, 04:05 PM Post #10 |
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Hell, if I had known before the last minute I would've given both of you a heads up. |
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