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And, with that completed, we now begin...Part 5!

Part 5
Preface

Preface


A Few Thoughts on Part 5


As always, thank you to everyone for reading and commenting. You are all amazing. I will continue to aim to please and get better. If I ever stop doing so, please let me know, and I will work to fix it :) A few things I will be working to improve on in the next Part are...
1. Better characterizations of my Pokemon. They really are cool characters, I'm just doing a poor job of showing it.
2. More of Chris. He's only appeared four times, and he's kind of a major character.
3. Better descriptions! I feel like this is were I struggle the most.
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