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Confidence (Some Assembly Required); FRA run, hopefully with 100% less save file loss!
Topic Started: Apr 6 2017, 11:09 PM (1,218 Views)
❤ Heather ❤
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So, since NQNH went the way of the dodo (rip in save loss), I still haven't completed a FRA Nuzlocke. With this, I'm going to change that, and do it the right way. Starting off, we have...

THE RULES


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Without any further ado...

Come On, Start The Adventure!


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Cute! A little bit of the dialogue was kind of ham-fisted though. Maybe that's just my reaction to the condensed nature of screenshot runs but given I haven't felt that about the original it might be new. Anyway, look forward to more!
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I swear to god Daisy and Cam are so cute

Camryn's sprite is looking good, too! I see the face of an Aroma Lady?

Just one problem: I'm using the Black Water theme, and Derek's text is nigh-unreadable with that background. The others' are fine though.

So many catches... Well, I suppose Brock won't be a problem with both Frank and Dean.
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i remember yr other run. shame it went under. save file losses r the worst. ://

this is looking good so far! usual stuff that happens at the start aside, the team is interesting. especially the sunkern o: brock shouldn't be a problem with dean and frank
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This is very cute so far! I'm definitely enjoying it.

I don't think I've ever seen a MC who's already in a relationship at the start of a run. Definitely refreshing to see something new.

I look forward to more!
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The First Campaign


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Aw man, I didn't even know NQNH went down the shitter. Hm. Shame, I liked it a lot.
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Rise To The Challenge (vs Brock)


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[edit_reason]one small typo escaped my notice, it has been fixed,[/edit_reason]
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Whoop, might've missed the last update. Good thing it didn't take long to catch up.

Brock doesn't let up on healing does he? Good thing you grinded that much. And aww at the lady part, it made me smile.

That pun though. Camryn no indeed.

"Ugh, I'm no good at this battle small talk!" I like this interpretation of this random trainer that's never going to show up again. (Also I was so worried that someone would be KO'd due to all the detail, you have no idea...)
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Your team looks pretty strong, and I like all their personalities. Good luck!
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Dean no ;_; I didn't even click the music link when I read this earlier (family in the room) but I still felt a bit sad. Was hoping to see how well Sunflora hold up in FRA...

"I'm a Rocket, dumbass!" OK, that made me laugh a bit.

Aand FRA made Rocket even less menacing. Good going.

Boreas is gonna be interesting, huh...
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Want a storylocke of a "soul-crushing" hake along with that amateur music? This one's gonna come back someday I swear:
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I'm so glad you haven't given up on FRA, despite your save file loss.
I really liked the story of a trans girl trainer, and I knew that you were really good at writing those types of stories from last time. And this definitely doesn't fail to deliver!

I've noticed your style takes on a more text approach for screenshot runs, which makes the character development and interactions much more worth it rather than speedrunning though the screenshots. I really like that!

Each of the Pokemon have been a joy to see, I didn't like Frank or Marigold at first due to their personalities, but they have been growing on me so far.
I'm totally happy for Camryn that she is seen as who she really is, but I fear that her Pokemon or later characters will become prejudiced to her. Just like what happened last run, but I am still intrigued how you will handle that. I want to see her grow more into who she wants to be!
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Oh, nice! You got the Hitmontop. I always liked that over the other Hitmon evos, so I'm definitely not complaining.

Anyhow, hi! So far, everything looks off to a good start. I do have some comments, if you don't mind.

I felt that your dialogue could be tighter. What I mean by that is that sometimes, your dialogue can feel rushed and sometimes, I feel there's a bit of a disconnect between the scenes. Since a lot of our content is dialogue-driven, it's really important to have the flow feel natural and that means sometimes, you can put more content in there as needed to make the conversation feel like a conversation. I'll try to give you some examples when it's not 2:18 AM over here, hehe, if you're interested.

I also feel that some of your plot points could have been stretched out further. What comes to my mind is the relationship between Frank and Camryn. It was great that Camryn called Frank out for his attitude, but I think if you allowed it to breathe a bit more, it would have gotten a bigger payoff. Same goes for Roc's reason for wanting to evolve.

It's still your story at the end of the day, though, but I think this could help it be better!
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Sorry for the wait, all! 202 wasn't the only thing kicking my ass, but I managed to pull through and get the grades I needed to keep on my major and my scholarship, so that's great! Would have gotten this out sooner but another summer of McDonald's work is draining and uuuuurgh save me plz ;w;

Without further ado!

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Let Boreas Fight.

Man, Derek is a jerk in that scene. I honestly don't think Rock Smash has much use still, especially since Z-No removed the Sevii Isles.

Marigold is becoming the kickass Princess we all wanted her to be, literally!

I noticed you put Misty on hold for now, with your current levels you can easily storm in if you wanted. Though I guess a little bit more training wouldn't hurt.

Furret is annoying in this game because it has Fur Coat, and the fact that the Rival's variant will do whatever to stay alive like using Charm.

Geez Roo, how many fights are you planning to steal?

I'm glad this is back, take your time with the updates still.
I've been planning to start an FRA run myself, but that's for later...
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Hey all! Sorry to keep you waiting on this, but I had a rough start to the year: I took a class that has me in way over my head, and between that and emerging considerations of changing my major, I had to let this step aside for a bit. I'm not sure when the next part will be-let's hope it's before Christmas?

Mint: When I was starting to write this update, Boreas getting to fight wasn’t gonna be a problem. Then...well, I’ll let you read all about it. Marigold is indeed very much a kickass, and I love her for it. As for Misty...Believe it or not, we're not at the levels I took her on in my old run juuust yet, and I believe I only went 3 levels above the recommended level there. With some of the tricks FRA GLs pack, and not having Dry Skin Helioptile to cheese with in this run, we're going to need to be careful. FRA Furret is honestly what I wish canon Furret was. Furret's design is too cool for its stats to just shaft it like they do now.

Without further ado!

Lingering Clouds


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Just finished reading this- I'm intrigued to see what will happen next :)
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