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[COMPLETED]Sons of Three - Eldest: Pokemon Yellow Nuzlocke Story Run; Dec 26: Trailer is up
Topic Started: Jan 20 2011, 08:58 PM (56,123 Views)
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Jan 25 2011, 07:38 PM
Ah. I Googled a quick list of 1975 comedies, and while "Holy Grail" was included, your joke was buried just a little too well for me to pick out.

I thought William's constant "running away" might be the reference, but if that were the case I suppose he would have been chased by a French Miltank.
I guess I'll have to be more clear next time - ah well, my fault for picking such a small detail.

Oh, and I'm trying to have Chapter Eight out by tomorrow night. I updated twice yesterday and all, but once a day is my more realistic schedule. If fact, every now and then it may go down to once every two days... :ugh:
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THIS IS PURE AWESOME. No kidding, like, I have no other words with which to describe your story, except maybe PURE GOLD. Or yellow. Or sicknasty.

Oddly enough, the beginning of the story reminded me of Star Wars. Epsiodes 4-6 are definitely reflected in the storyline, whether you meant it or not.

Right, so don't stop writing. You've got something magnificent going on here.
Hello. Let's play some music.
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I really like this, so I hope you keep at it :3
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Chapter Eight
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Now a few thoughts on Chapter 8...
WARNING, read chapter 8 first!
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Hope you guys enjoyed 8! Looking forward to writing 9!!
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Chapter Nine
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YES! That's right! Chapter 9 is out early!!!


And now, a few thoughts:
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Stay posted! :D
Edited by TrainerBOB, Dec 29 2011, 07:41 PM.
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Part Three

Preface


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Yes - told ya it wouldn't take too long. Hope you enjoyed it, these diaries entries of Professor Oak are getting to be my favorites to write.
Edited by TrainerBOB, Jan 27 2011, 08:15 PM.
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I'm getting a feeling Jimmy did something to all of the gym leaders ;_; Oak's diary pieces are interesting, I wonder how Jimmy will tie in with the main plot though. Your more anime-style battle is nice too, always more interesting to read than something regular.

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Jan 27 2011, 05:05 PM
Oak's diary pieces are interesting, I wonder how Jimmy will tie in with the main plot though. Your more anime-style battle is nice too, always more interesting to read than something regular.

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Thank you, they really are my favorite parts to write. I think part of the reason is because I generally enjoy writing in first person more than third person, but I knew with the plot I had in mind I couldn't do it in first person.

And the anime-style catch is right - I used to watch the TV show all the time when I was a kid and still do sometimes. I think the influenced me, and I have trouble writing it another way.

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Chapter 10 is up!

There is a song-reference in this chapter. If you can figure it out, then I will award you 500 awesome points!*

Chapter Ten




*Awesome points have no real currency value and are worthless.
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Misty's no Jenny. Now where are my awesome points?

They should have some value :(
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Misty's no Jenny. Now where are my awesome points?


You win! If anyone still doesn't get it, the reference is the song "867-5309/Jenny" - which was Misty's phone number. It's catchy, though it might get stuck in your head.

And they SHOULD have some value. Hm...I'll think of something...

Anyway, I spent the morning playing up to Misty so I would have stuff to write about. Now I'm ready to write all of Part 3!

Here's Chapter Eleven :)

Chapter Eleven

Chapter Eleven



Keeping following - things get more exciting! There are lots of new friends coming up in Part 3, as well as some enemies. Plenty of Plot twists, and more information on "the three" as well. Also, some dying does happen, though I won't say how much. A few close-deaths too.

Predictions? Guesses?

Keep watching :)

Also, the title of this chapter has some significance. Can you figure it out? And no, it's not the actual sun, HAKHAKHAK.


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And...Chapter Twelve is up!

Chapter Twelve

Chapter Twelve


There MIGHT be another update tonight...I tend to have LOTS of more time on the weekends - sometimes. Sometimes, I have a lot less.

READ CHAPTER 12 First!


Also, I won't be revealing what the meaning of the title of Chapter 11 was for a few chapters. The name will be used again in a similar way that is symbolic, and I don't want to give away any surprises. Feel free to guess what it means still though :)
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Swarms of Zubat in that cave indeed :(

Thinking of what the sun means, hrm.
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I'll give you a hint, if you want it :)

Although, I won't say if your right or wrong until I write chapter 17 (I got everything outlined).

Hint
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Chapter Thirteen is up! WHOOP! Three chapters in ONE day.

Of course, I got like, no homework done today. Guess what I'm doing tomorrow? :x_x:

Totally worth it.

Chapter Thirteen

Chapter Thirteen


Some thoughts. Read Chapter 13 first



Also, sometime in the near future I'm going to be removing all the old stuff from the first post and editing old posts to post it inside. The main thread is somehow getting too big O.o

My readers may not even realize it. Just kind of giving everyone a heads up :)
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Blood and death and Rockets oh my :) I'm liking this run more and more. Also very nice update speed.
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Chapter 14 is up!

A team change happens in this chapter, so I posted a spoiler showing what my team's status was at the end of this chapter. But read the chapter first!

Chapter Fourteen

Chapter Fourteen


Read Chapter 14 first!


I will try to make a team update at the end of every chapter. Since I'm ahead right now in playing, I can't do levels because I can't remember where everyone is at. But I'll start adding levels to the notes I take while I play.

That's all, stay tuned for me! :D

(Oh, and over 500 views? :keke: )
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