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The Three Best Friends' Run Through White; IsahBellah, Sadist, and I do a trio-locke story (Chapter-Find in First Post)
Topic Started: Jan 29 2012, 10:20 AM (6,601 Views)
Eren Jaeger
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Welcome to another exciting run of EPIC proportion
Unfortunately, there will be no screenshots taken because of the different storylines,
but that's just all part of the fun :D you get to see different perspective of the trainers and their personalities


The heroes:
Cheren (played by Sadist) : White Randomlocke
Bianca (played by IsahBellah) : White 649
And Touko (played by me) : Regular White

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Forum Rules AKA the rules we break :P



Touko's POV

My name is Touko Hanabi...
I pretty much lead a boring life in a small town with 3 houses and a pokemon lab.
But I don't think of it as a bad thing necessarily, after all: I have two awesome friends.

But enough of that.
Today's my birthday and I'm going to be 16.
Cheren and Bianca are already 16 and would've started their journeys already if it weren't for me, but they don't complain...
Actually, they seem pretty happy to go on a journey together and to be honest, I do too.

Man... I started to ramble again, sorry...


I sat on my bed, waiting for my friends to come up, but I was starting to get a bit impatient

Oh come on... where are you guys... you said you'd be here and my house isn't that far...

As I said that to myself, I heard someone coming up the stairs.

Sorry I'm late. My mom wanted me to do some chores before I left... after all, we'll all be gone for a while

Yeah... Time just seems to fly by so fast, but at least our parents are willing to accept that and let us go on our pokemon journey

Speaking of that, where's Bianca? I thought she'd be here before me

I don't know... Maybe her mom sent her to do an errand too?

Probably... Well, I guess we have to wait then...

I motioned Cheren to take a seat on my bed beside me, but he declined and sat across the room in my computer chair.
Then again, I guess it was a bit weird to sit next to one of your friends, that is a girl, in a room that has no other person in it...

I looked back and forth between the stairs and the gift. I was getting more and more impatient.
I wanted my journey to start, but then again, so had they so it was unfair for me to feel so anxious.
As I was about to ask Cheren another question, we suddenly heard someone running up the stairs frantically.

Well, there's Bianca

We got up out of our stairs as we heard a tumbling sound... Bianca tripped up my stairs again.

Don't worry! I'm okay!

We heard her get up and then climb the rest of the way up.

Hey guys! Sorry I'm late, I just-

Woah! Bianca! Were'd you get that black eye?

Bianca shuddered for a second and touched her right eye.

Wha-wha-what do you mean Cheren? What black eye?

The one you're covering u-

HEY! LOOK AT THE PRESENT! COME ON TOUKO!... HURRY... OPEN IT!

This always happened... it was like Bianca.
Bianca always came over and hurt herself on something and came up with either a cast on, a bruise, or a broken tooth.
Then Cheren always asks where she got it... but then she tries to get me to switch over the conversation...
But I really don't know what was going on with her...

Come on Touko... please?!

Okay, okay... hold on

I made my way over to the present and read the card on it.

Happy Birthday!
I know you've all been wanting a pokemon for a long time.
Prepare for your journey well and decide which will be your partner
Good luck!
-Professor Juniper


I opened up the present and inside were three pokeballs.

How do we decide which one will be ours?

Just let them out and we can go from there.

Oh, okay!

I picked up the pokeballs and released them one by one


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The grass type was named Snivy

The fire type was named Tepig

And the water type was named Oshawott


I looked at all three and was astounded by all... but one...
Tepig had to be the ugliest out of the three in my book
I turned my head to it and pouted

Bianca however made her choice clear as she scooped up the water type in her arms

This cutie's mine!

Uh... Bianca, don't you think Touko should-

MIJU IS MINE!

she shouted at Cheren demonically. He backed away scared and so was I...

Okay... okay... she's yours

Yay <3

She snuggled the little otter pokemon in her arms while Cheren and I were still creeped out.

Since she clearly made her choice... go on and choose either.

Thank you Cheren...

I told him as I scooped up the female Snivy.

Well, I guess I'm with you then, Bacon.

The male Tepig scoffed and faced away from him

What? Don't like your name?

No I don't! my name is Chuck!

Woah! What was that?!

Bianca and Cheren paused and looked at me.

What was what?

Your Tepig! It just talked!

Both of them looked at each other and then me.

Are you all right, Touko?

Yeah, are you sure you didn't hit your head on the stairs?

I SWEAR TO YOU THAT PIG SAID HIS NAME WAS CHUCK!

Hey, now that I think of that, that's not a bad nickname... I'll take it under consideration.

Why don't you guys believe me?! Bah... forget it

We should head to Professor Juniper's lab so we can tell her about our pokemon... and also get Touko checked out.

YOU'RE NOT FUNNY CHEREN!

As we left my house though, Bianca got a smile on her face and spun around to face me.

Touko! You wanna battle with our new pokemon?

But, Bianca, she's not in the right of-

SHUT UP CHEREN! I'd be happy to battle you Bianca!

She jumped up and down.

All right! my first battle!

Both of us faced each other outside my house on opposite ends with our pokemon in front of each other

When your pokemon get tired, I'll tell you guys to stop so we can prevent a terrible injury.

Okay!

Right!

Begin!

Snivy, use Leer!

Snivy stood in place and glared at the Oshawott, which seemed to be a bit startled.

Oshawott, use Tail Whip!

In place of the glare, Oshawott wagged its tail. Snivy looked at her very confused.

Leer, once more Snivy!

Tail Whip, Oshawott!

Are you two going to attack any time soon?

SHUT UP CHEREN!

Tackle, Snivy!

Snivy rushed into action and with her speed, dashed towards Oshawott, tackling her to the ground.
Oshawott was pushed back but landed on its feet, tired but all right

Tackle, Oshawott!

Oshawott responded with a slower, but powerful tackle that pushed Snivy back as well
Both pokemon were tired and one move could finish them

Oshawott! finish with Tackle!

Oshawott tried to charge at Snivy again

Too slow...

Snivy tackled Oshawott and she hit the ground painfully and unwilling to get up.

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Great battle guys! I should probably heal up both of your pokemon since they're tired.

Cheren healed both Snivy and Oshawott, but as Bianca looked at them, a smile came over her face again.
She picked up Oshawott as soon as she was healed and went off to the side.

Your turn to battle, Cheren!

What?

Yeah! Since Touko won last match, let's see how you and Tepig do.

I guess that makes sense... You ready, Tepig?

Tepig nodded and stepped into the fighting area in Oshawott's place.
Snivy still stood on the other end, looking confident.

Snivy, Tackle!

Snivy hurried with its newfound strength and tackled Tepig to the ground
Tepig shook it off like it was nothing

Tail Whip, Tepig!

Tepig turned around and shook its tail to Snivy
Snivy didn't know whether to blush or attack

REALLY, Cheren?

Hey, this strategy worked for you guys last time

Point taken... Snivy, Tackle again!

Now, you use Tackle, Tepig!

Both pokemon collided into one another and were pushed back.
Tepig was starting to get tired, but Snivy still had some energy left

We can take him down and hit after this!
Snivy, use Leer!


Snivy glared at Tepig
Tepig shuddered, but was ready for his next command

Tackle, Tepig!

Tepig charged and slammed into Snivy
Snivy hit the ground and got up but was tired
... One last move could finish both of them

Tackle, Snivy!

Snivy charged at the Tepig as it help its ground

Tepig!

Tepig's attention shot up at Snivy
Tepig used its spring tail to jump up and dodge

What?!

Tackle!

Tepig dove down towards Snivy and slammed into her with all his might
She was knocked down and defeated

Snivy!

I rushed over to her, hoping she was okay

Snivy! Are you okay?!

Snivy's eyes twitched.

Please stop yelling...

A smile formed on my face upon hearing her.

She's okay!

That's good... Didn't want you to lose your pokemon through your first warm-ups

So wait... Touko's better than me... But Cheren's better than Touko?!
I'm at the bottom of the branch?!


I wouldn't say that. Bianca, you haven't even battled Cheren yet.

Hey, that's right! Cheren, how about we-

Cheren was already walking away with his Tepig

Nooo, thanks.

Bianca puffed out her cheeks

Hmph! He's just too scared to challenge me!

I laughed in response as the two of us followed after Cheren into the lab

Believe me, Bianca, you will at some point...

Touko's POV End


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Edited by Eren Jaeger, Feb 21 2012, 07:50 PM.
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Very nice :biggrin: You write pretty well, I must say. What's your Snivy's name though? And I hope she gets more lines in the future
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I'm with Malik. I kind of didn't want to post until Isah did. :sweatdrop:

Anyway, I'm going to type some of my self-imposed rules:

The Ways of the Random run
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The Old spice and Dos Equis guys mixed together.
Hey, Imma let you finish, but this is a solid-sounding run, I'm excited to see this develop.
So, I don't have anything interesting to say here am the most intersting man in the world. :dealwithit:



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MY BEAUTIFUL (COMPLETED) NUZLOCKE RUNS
Matt's Adventures in White 649!- Completed!


My Not-So-Completed Runs
Matt Goes back to Johto: Now with 20% less sense!
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@Malik: She will :3 And you'll learn her name when we get to the lab for nicknaming
But thank you and I'm glad you enjoy it so far

@Sadist: lol I have absolutely no problem with that
And I can't wait to read you or Isah's parts

@Solstice96: Imma finish now; glad you like the run so far


:v: I'm breaking my own rule here to say I made a Banner I'll update it as the story goes on
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Alright Queen. Mind giving me the link and the banner so I can toss it into my sig?

Anyway, I'll stop posting until Isah does after this, so can you just PM it to me? :P
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HAWKEYE,USE THUNDERSHOCK!

I AM SO NOT READY.I GUESS THAT MAKES ME BIANCA
HOW SHOULD I WRITE THIS? :v: ON BIANCA'S POV?ASDFGHJKL OH JEEZ I WILL BE SUCH A DITZ.

HOPEFULLY MY WRITING WON'T SUCK SO BAD :tranny:
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You'll do fine in Bianca's POV
XD Just relax Isah
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HAWKEYE,USE THUNDERSHOCK!

Just started writing.
I don't sound like Bianca at all :psyduck: I sound like the old-trolley-me XD
at least I'm trying. Also,my part will go up to the first-step-together,ok? :3:

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Are you the only one who can 'listen to pokÚmon',like N? :psyduck:
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Okay~ :3
Good luck with your writing, I'm sure you'll do fine

LEGIT SPOILER! IF YOU READ THIS, PART OF THE STORY WILL BE SPOILED
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HAWKEYE,USE THUNDERSHOCK!

Alright then :3: I will try my best not to screw-up our characterization XD
Writing Bianca and Cheren is kinda easy,but Touko?I will try my best to make her friendly ASDFGHJKL
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Damn, the anxiety is killing me. XD But, it will be a great chapter, I'm sure of it. :3:
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HAWKEYE,USE THUNDERSHOCK!

THIS IS A SPOILER.NOT A BIG ONE,BUT EH


And Sadist,when I finish writing it I'll send the chapter to you so you can grammar nazi it before I post it here,mmkay?
I hope people really like my chapter because I think this is the first time I'm writing SERIOUSLY >_<
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Yep, I'll just change grammar on it. :P

I saw sad/emo-ish Bianca coming, actually. Considering she has to live with the Pokemon equivalent of my dad. :wooper:
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This looks awesome and fun. Definitely following this~ :roll:

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ISAH HURRY UP I CAN'T WAIT
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HAWKEYE,USE THUNDERSHOCK!

BITCH,YOU BETTER WAIT.
I AM UPDATING MY NORMALOCKE RIGHT FUCKING NOW BECAUSE IT'S EASIER.IT GOT PICS AND ALL THAT.

SO YOU BITCHES BETTER WAIT.I STOPPED WRITING WHEN WE GOT TO ARARAGI JUNIPER'S LAB. CALM THE FUCK DOWN.
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LOL WUT IS THIS ALL CAPS
WELL I'LL READ THE UPDATE TOMORROW THEN I KINDA MUST GO NOW SEE YA
AND I'M NO ONE'S BITCH BUT MY OWN, BITCH
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HAWKEYE,USE THUNDERSHOCK!

I DON'T EVEN KNOW IF I'LL BE ABLE TO END WRITING TODAY. I TOLD YOU I WRITE TOO FUCKING SLOW,MAN.

BUT DON'T WORRY,ONE DAY I WILL FINISH IT :TROLLFACE: LOLZ
THANKS FOR YOUR INPATIENCE

ALSO,YOU'RE RIGHT,YOU'RE NOT MY BITCH. YOU'RE OAK'S BITCH :v:
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