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| Tweet Topic Started: Oct 19 2010, 02:09 PM (562 Views) | |
| Lord Atlas | Oct 19 2010, 02:09 PM Post #1 |
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Milky Way, Scourge System, Ryohlex Prime, High Orbit: The massive yet stately planet sits cold and unmoving in the dead of space as ships fly about it and the Horror Mine Field sits active. On the Pel’tak of a cloaked “Jan’tak” class Escort ship. The Second Prime of Atlas stands in front of the command console as two Jaffa busily attend to the controls. Hectors silver armor appears dull in the emergency lighting of the ship as it silently coast along. In the view screen the image of Ryohlex looms large as Hector says, “Excellent now take us in along the entry vector near the planets southern pole. The Jaffa nods as the silent ship banks an uses thrusters only, her power off line to give no warning that she is there. Hector watches as the ship weaves in between dozens of Horror mines. Hector stands unmoving and unperturbed by the dangerous devices. As the ship passes the Horror Mine Field it coast down through the atmosphere and comes out near the southern pole. The Jaffa at the console says, ”My lord a massive forest off the port.” Hector nods as he looks at the forest looming on the screen he says, “Find a clearing and let’s make this quick.” The “Jan’tak” zooms low over the tops of the ancient trees as the ship begins to slow and hover over a large clearing. The “Jan’tak” opens its bay doors on the ventral of the ship as an extremely large set of rings lower. They pulse and when they retract a massive Chappa’ai is left in the clearing. Hector smirks as he walks to a panel near the main console and begins to dial the Chappa’ai. As the final chevron locks, the massive gate billows to life, as it stabilizes one sole figure emerges from the liquid wormhole. A heavily muscled warrior in golden Jaffa armor stands with his dragon helm upon his head. The dragon helm rotates about the neck scanning the area. When satisfied the golden warrior reaches up and touches the collar of his armor and the helm retracts down into the collar until it is gone. Achilles looks up at the “Jan’tak” and says, “Nicely done my son, cloak the ship and remain on station in case we have visitors.” Achilles keys a gem on the back of his gauntlet and folds his arms over his chest as he waits. The Chappa’ai behind him ripples as thousands of black armored Jaffa begin to march out of the gate. Several quick moving Ash’rak dash from the gate and at a gesture from Achilles take off and disappear into the woods. Achilles stands unmoved as a massive "Typhoon" Walker emerges; it passes right over him, its massive legs stabbing into the ground as it passes, dozens of the Walkers emerge but one emerges that is different than the others. It has no cannons on its chassis this one carries a large shield generator on its back. It clears the gate and moves slightly to the left to allow room for the other walkers and Jaffa that emerge. The massive walker lowers its chassis on it’s legs and comes to a rest as the shield generator begins to pulse, a massive energy dome blossoms from its back, the dome grows and envelopes the clearing and the gate, as dozens of “Harpy” class death gliders emerge from the gate and fly off high into the skies. Achilles swiftly walks’ across the clearing filled with Jaffa deploying equipment and forming up into their legions and stands under the shield walker. A set of rings descend and surround him beaming him on to the Walker, he makes his way through the corridors and comes onto the bridge of the Walker. Achilles eases into the command gunners chair and tapping a few buttons on the arm watches as the screen in the front of the bridge switches over to a tactical view of the planet. Milky Way, Scourge System, Ryohlex Prime, Capital City: It is a standard day as the people who bow to Hephaestus the Smith God go about their lives, they trade in the streets. They perform services; they live their lives in shadow of their god. In the center of the city a great statue of the Smith God stands triumphant with a smiths hammer in one hand he stands before an anvil in a heroic pose, as citizen’s stand around the statue talking and bartering. They are shocked by a sonic boom. They look at one another and then into the skies, at first they see nothing until they notice several black dots on the horizon. The dots grow larger into a whole flight of death gliders. Not an unusual experience on this world but these death gliders are pure black and seem to be coming in low. Their random speculation ends as the “Harpy” death gliders open fire with their Gatling Staff Cannons. The 12 fighters open up mercilessly as they strafe the city below, great explosions light the edges of the city as the explosions work their way into the heart of the city. Bodies fly as buildings collapse and burn under the assault. Several blast strike the statue of Hephaestus as the great Smith Gods statue collapses into rubble in the square. Those who survive the first strafing rise from the rubble dazed and wounded. They look to see the flight of death gliders heading off into the distance. They look from the direction that they came and see more filling the skies of the capital, but these ones are not strafing they are moving slowly, as if following something. The shaking of the ground is the only warning they get as they see several “Typhoon” Attack walkers rising above the buildings on the cities edge. The massive war machines bring their legs down into buildings and people as they surge forward reeking untold devastation. Dashing between the legs hundreds of the Walkers are black armored Jaffa, they fire their staffs at anyone and everyone, their bolts blowing people to bits before they can run or surrender. The old, the young, women, and children all feel the wrath of the Titan Empire, the wrath of Emperor Prometheus…….. |
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| Deleted User | Oct 19 2010, 02:57 PM Post #2 |
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100 Oblivion Fighter's Launch from the hanger and head towards the battle. seeing Buildings in ruin's and death all around the Oblivion Pilots No the Walkers wernt friendly. The Oblivion Fighter's Form up into 4 Groups of 25. Each ground attacked 1 Walker each. Mark 2 Cannons Constantly charged and fired at the walker's damaging a few technical parts. Scourge Cannon's Smack the Armor of the Machines come to Destroy Hephaestus's People. Kelec Sits in the Palace of Ryohlex. hearing the explosion's from far away... Kelec new an invasion was on the way and took controle of the Mines in space. The Horror Mines Switched to full power. using there sensor's to find where the enemys where on the planet like a satalight. 200.000 Jaffa With Shiney red Armor Charge into battle against the enemy forces. Kelec Contacts Hephaestus to Warn him of the attack. "My Lord this is Kelec Ryohlex is under attack the Horror Mines where unable to pick up the cloaked ships But your jaffa and Oblivion fighters have engaged the enemy. Request Back up... Suddenly 2 Reaper Class Ha'taks Drop out of Hyperspace and Open fire on the planet's Surface Blasting the enemy's troops to peaces. 100 More Oblivion Fighter's Launch from the 2 Ha'taks and Engage with the enemy soldier's and Fighter's. The Horror Mines send messages to the Oblivion Fighters pin pointing where the enemy's where The Oblivion's Had perfect aim and missed nothing. Jaffa Layed dead on the ground from both sides as the battle rages on. (((You had to attack me :P))) |
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| Prometheus | Oct 19 2010, 03:13 PM Post #3 |
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Several techs stand on the other side of the gate working quickly to keep the large antimatter generator just barely under control. The massive machine pumps it's power strait into and through the gate as it hits the 38 minutes mark. The systems spark slightly as the gate accepts the extra power pushing past the time limit. There would be no dialing out for their enemy. Several more techs and a two squads of jaffa run through the gate next. They quickly set up small battlements around the gate as the techs set up smaller sensor arrays and begin broadcasting available information to the ground troops and pilots directing and warning them. Three larger gun placements squeezed through the gate being set up to run off small generators. Connected to the computers these gun would target large vessels patrolling the skies. ((Heph it takes time to get ships to the other side of the galaxy... It's not a poof thing)) Edited by Prometheus, Oct 19 2010, 03:19 PM.
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![]() Those who are ignorant and admit they don't know, don't bother me. Those who reject things w/o knowing what they are get under my skin. But those who 'believe' to go with the crowd & disagree with key components but never bother to investigate and determine the truth, those who will listen to a speaker and twist the words to some vague moralistic message that will make them feel good about themselves, I cannot stand. | |
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| Prometheus | Oct 19 2010, 04:56 PM Post #4 |
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Eleven ships pull themselves from hyperspace over the planet opening fire on the few ships above it already. Death gliders begin strafing runs while rise fighters and buzz drones push into the frantic dogfight over the surface. Thousands of Jaffa and Militia beam down at key points and begin wiping through enemy Jaffa becoming a pincer movement along with Prometheus's forces. The massive ships above maneuver and block the enemy ships firing onto the surface as the lower cannons focus on enemy troops and fighters. A message is sent to the control area at the new gate requesting a signal be sent to allies for more backup. |
![]() Those who are ignorant and admit they don't know, don't bother me. Those who reject things w/o knowing what they are get under my skin. But those who 'believe' to go with the crowd & disagree with key components but never bother to investigate and determine the truth, those who will listen to a speaker and twist the words to some vague moralistic message that will make them feel good about themselves, I cannot stand. | |
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| Prometheus | Oct 19 2010, 08:00 PM Post #5 |
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Four Ha'tak and the Mk IV broke off from the planets and entered Hyperspace giving chase the other quickly disengaged and headed for Memphis. The ground troops would be heading back the Titan Empire forces to join back with the main groups through the gate. |
![]() Those who are ignorant and admit they don't know, don't bother me. Those who reject things w/o knowing what they are get under my skin. But those who 'believe' to go with the crowd & disagree with key components but never bother to investigate and determine the truth, those who will listen to a speaker and twist the words to some vague moralistic message that will make them feel good about themselves, I cannot stand. | |
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| Deleted User | Oct 20 2010, 11:54 PM Post #6 |
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As The Two Reaper's Fly in Hyperspace with a Blue wave slashing by the window's The Commander of the Ship Following the front Reaper Notices a fleet of 5 ships in the same Hyperspace... The Ship Commander sends a Private communication to The Front Reaper "Commander. i Have a plan But it will end it many deaths But more on the enemys side... Drop Your ship out In 10 Seconds the Selfdestruct is set on my Ship." The First Reaper Drops out 1 second Before the other ship started to selfdestruct. The First Reaper Jumped back into hyperspace straight away heading to Quetesh's System to tell Hephaestus of the Brave Commander. The Reaper In Hyperspace Selfdestructs. as Explosion's Clash around the Hyperspace Window. the Explosion Heads into the Enemy Ships... |
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| Prometheus | Oct 21 2010, 12:55 AM Post #7 |
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The small fleet caught up to the blast before it had even finished starting. The heavily armored Nephilim simply powered through the heat and debris as it's armor takes the beating. The next ship took the blast full on as the weak hulls of the sphinx showed. They carved enough of a path to let the rest through as they added to the debris quickly left behind by the other ships. All the ships veered off from the hyperspace window and left the system. ((This thread is just downright bull now. Posts have been deleted without reason and while the rulings are technically fair they have let one person do something while not letting other. Just figured I'd add that in.)) Edited by Prometheus, Oct 21 2010, 02:48 PM.
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![]() Those who are ignorant and admit they don't know, don't bother me. Those who reject things w/o knowing what they are get under my skin. But those who 'believe' to go with the crowd & disagree with key components but never bother to investigate and determine the truth, those who will listen to a speaker and twist the words to some vague moralistic message that will make them feel good about themselves, I cannot stand. | |
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| Lord Atlas | Oct 21 2010, 07:23 PM Post #8 |
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Milky Way, Scourge System, Ryohlex Prime, Capital City: As the sun sets on the capital the battle still rages fiercely. The scene is lit by the burning buildings and ruins of “Typhoon” Walkers, in the skies over head deathgliders clash in an aerial dance of death over the city. Dozens of red armored Jaffa advance from behind the rubble as their staffs open up and discharge at the surging mass of dragon helmed black armored Jaffa of the Titan Empire, both sides fire their staffs as they charge into each other with bone crushing force. The two sides fight fiercely as staffs fire and swing in all directions. Near this scene the burning ruins of a “Typhoon” Walker is crushed as another Walker smashes down on it, crawling over the twisted wreckage. The Walker is rocked by “Oblivion” fighters that swoop and hit it with punishing blasts, one “Oblivion” fighter is blown to fiery bits as the massive staff cannons of the walker target it and fire. The Walker surges over the wreckage and continue its march toward the castle, the center of this worlds culture and command. Following it are several more Walkers that fire their cannons, hurling massive bolts of energy toward the castle, blowing massive chunks out of the stone structure. In the skies overhead flights of “Oblivion” fighters hold their own even though they take heavy fire from the ground and the Walkers below. A flight of “Harpy” deathgliders descend on the “Oblivions” from the apex of their flight path and open up with their Gatling Cannons ripping the formation to pieces, some of the “Harpy’s” fire their Naquada Missiles causing impacts that unleash massive explosions. Even in the chaos of this most glorious of battles, a loud static pulse rips out and floods the channels of the enemy forces, their communications are jammed as a voice says, “This is Achilles of Knossos, First Prime of Atlas. The forces of the Titan Empire are overrunning your world, you have fought bravely in the name of your God The Great Hephaestus, but your struggle is at an end, your ships have fled, your capital has fallen and our forces are like grains of sand on a beach, you are all true warriors, now surrender in the name of honor and common sense.” As Achilles’ message echoes across the battle field legions of black armored Jaffa, their wicked dragon helms turning and growling as they survey the battlefield march into the dying capital, in the center of the city the golden head from the statue of Hephaestus lies on the ground as a massive mechanical leg crushes it, 6 “Typhoon” Walkers advance through the center of the city knocking down the buildings as they pass their staff cannons locked on the castle…………….. |
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| Deleted User | Oct 22 2010, 09:26 AM Post #9 |
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As the enemys Troops March through the citys of Ryohlex Sounds of death and destruction Spreads across The Planets Surface puting fear into all who hear it. Kelec See's the Desruction of Hephaestus's Statue, of his great god... As The Enemey Troops Smash through the Buildings of Ryohlex They come to a door in the Palace. The Door slides open by its self and the Troops charge in... Across the Hall they see Commander Kelec backed up by 1000 Mark II Legacy Gaurds... Kelec Shouts to the Enemey troops "You have 10 minutes to start leaveing my planet. i have 5 Annialtor Bombs along with my entire stock pile of Naqada Under this Palace ready to blow. I am not affraid to give my life for my god and my Royal Gaurd feels the Same. Leave and never come back or we all die this day all your army will die You Pick" As the Weapons on both sides stop to work as Kelec turns on the Tollana Weapon Destrupters. The Mark II Legacy Gaurds Draw there Two Red Sword's and Prepare for Battle. Kelec Turns to his Soldier's to make a Speech "You are my most trusted Gaurd. i have trained you all your life. we will live or die for our God Hephaestus this day. If they pick death we will die with honor they will die of cowardnes. Our god will look after us they will burn in the fires of Exon.".... (((Nice post atlas i perfer rpin with u not prom.))) |
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| Lord Atlas | Oct 23 2010, 12:53 PM Post #10 |
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Milky Way, Scourge System, Ryohlex Prime, Capital City: As Kelec’s warning is shouted to the forces of the Titan Empire, the black armored Jaffa all receive message through their Dragon Helms. The voice of Achilles rings through helmets telling them to begin an orderly withdrawal. One of the Jaffa Commanders walks forward a few feet and deposits a small orb on the ground that hovers there for a second, before it erupts with a bright blue light that forms into the image of the First Prime of Atlas. Achilles looks about the chamber and his massive image looks toward Kelec and his forces as he says, “So this is how you would purport yourself? The once noble Jaffa have fallen far, instead of an honorable surrender you will throw your lives away with a meaningless gesture.” As Achilles talks the horde of Titan Jaffa begin to fallback, outside the sinister looking “Typhoon” Walkers begin to reverse their progress, crossing back through the ruined city toward the edge. As they reach the edge of the city and begin to stomp through the woods, high over head a “Jan’tak” Escort Cruiser uncloaks and sits there many miles from the city but still within range of the ships cannons and torpedoes. Achilles continues, “Your sacrifice here will be for nothing, for we will still carry this day and our forces will only continue to move forward, like a river that erodes a mountain, you have all fought well, should your final reward be an inglorious death?, surrender is not the end for you, you will be given an armistice and allowed to return to your homes, rule under the Titan Empire is a rule of law, fairness and not cruelty and slavery, you will not be subjected to the reign of foul beast like the Wraith or Ori. Come my children, in the name of peace and stability, lower your weapons and surrender to a force that is greater then you….” On the Pel’tak of the “Jan’tak” Escort Crusier: Hector leans back into his command chair as he listens to the message begin broadcast by his father. He looks over at Jaffa and says, “Full power to shields, energize the Reflex Armor, and load all launchers.” The Jaffa looks at Hector Second Prime of Atlas and says, “My Lord what load out should we use?” Hector smiles wickedly as he says, “Load the Naquadria missiles, if they do not surrender, the explosion they want to set off will look like a Sunday rain storm compared to what we have.” The Jaffa nods and begins keying the command console…… |
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| Deleted User | Oct 23 2010, 02:01 PM Post #11 |
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Kelec smerks at the Enemy after Achillies perfectic speech, "You speak of Honor But you have non You killed Thousands of Jaffa just to win a battle. jaffa witch where not soldier's. Women Childen all dead because of you. my wife my Two Son's dead because of you ive picked my words carefully Achillies perhaps you should have done the same. You leave this world and you never return im not afraid to die for my god. and i promise you i will never serve your's... But... If you promise to let us return to Hephaestus and take any surviver's to his home planet we will surrender and both leave this ruined Planet. but if your army harms another jaffa. your army will not make it of this planet alive. You Choose" |
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| Lord Atlas | Oct 23 2010, 11:25 PM Post #12 |
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Milky Way, Scourge System, Ryohlex Prime, Capital City: As Kelec makes his misadvised reply, Achilles massive image flickers in the holographic projection as he says, “Very well, I will allow you and your brave garrison to leave this world, but under conditions: First you must all disarm, no weapons on any kind on your troops or civilians or slaves that you take with you, you must disarm your explosives under the city and you must be escorted to the gate by my Jaffa. This will be the only offer I will forward to you out of respect; I have wasted enough time on this world as is.” Achilles image turns and looks down directly at Kelec as he says, “Your answer Commander?” |
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| Deleted User | Oct 24 2010, 11:18 AM Post #13 |
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Kelec looks across the hall breathing heavly noing it could be a trap to make his men give up there weapons and to disarm the Bomb. Kelec thinks about it for a second and decides to do as Achillies said, Kelec and his Gaurd drop there weapons but before Kelec droped his hand device he pressed a button that Stoped the weapon distrupter so he could press another button that disarms the bomb but doesnt stop it from Exploding if the Horror Mines See Achillies Troops fire at Kelec. Kelec throws his Hand Device On the Ground and walks towards Achillies Jaffa and His Gaurd follow's a Legacy Gaurd sends a loud communication across the citys "Jaffa prepare to leave this world we will return to Exon Achillies has asured us passiage do not fight back and you will make it of this world alive".... (((Erm if your ganna go by your word and attack hope u have fun geting blown up :D. but if you have honor u can RP Kelec,Kelecs Gaurd and The Population still alive leaving through stargate Ow and if any of Your troops follow us through stargate ill make sure i put the shield up Weapon Distrupter's and my Royal Gaurd will be waiting aswell ;) ))) |
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| Lord Atlas | Oct 25 2010, 05:10 PM Post #14 |
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Milky Way, Scourge System, Ryohlex Prime, Capital City: The holographic image of Achilles nods at Kelec as he acknowledges the surrender. Legions of black armored Dragon helmed Jaffa march into the city and begin searching and stripping the last of Hephaestus troops of their weapons and armor. The Jaffa of the Titan Empire spread out to all corners of the city and secures the strategic strong points. “Harpy” Class deathgliders begin to spread out across the continent to secure the airspace and force the last of the “Oblivion” fighters out of the sky. 2 “Typhoon” Walkers sit on either side of the Chappa’ai, as black armored Jaffa begin herding the population of the city toward the portal. Achilles and Hector stand on the pel’tak of the “Jan’tak” Escort as she slowly hovers over the city and begins to float toward the Chappa’ai. Hector turns to his father and says with enthusiasm, “This is a major victory father the Emperor will be pleased.” Achilles nods as he walks a few feet forward and looks at the main screen. It shows him a massive crowd numbering the thousands gathered in the main square, waiting for the Chappa’ai to be activated. Milky Way, Scourge System, Ryohlex Prime, Capital City, Deep Beneath the Palace: A black robed priest steps over dozens of red armored bodies as he makes his way down the heavily damaged corridor. He holds his robe out of the pools of blood as an Ash’rak appears in front of him from out of nowhere. The Priest gasp and then relaxes as a sultry feminine voice says from beneath the cloak and cowl, “Follow me Holy One.” The Ash’rak leads the Priest past piles of dead Jaffa and once in while he sees other Ash’rak standing over one of their own chanting prayers of their fallen sisters. The Ash’rrak and Priest come to vast vaulted chamber filled with tons of Naquada, bright lights glow and blink on dozens of Ark bombs spread throughout the chamber. The Priest looks about with a keen calculating eye as he does calculations inside his head. He walks to a Ark set in the center of the room and says, ”Ah, I see, so he planned a series of incrementally more powerful blast, not bad, but to series detonate he would need to send a signal to one so that it could detonate the others. The Priest reaches down and turns a series of emblems on the Ark, it makes a brief whirring sound until it goes quite. The Priest moves to the center of the room and takes a small golden box from his robes and places it on the ground. He taps a button and it begins to segment and become larger. The once small box is now a rounded pillar 4 ft tall. The priest taps a few buttons on it and its center column begins to spin as a low dull hum fills the room. The Priest smiles and walks from the room as he does the Ash’rak joins him, she says, “What have you done Holy One?” The Priest says, “I deactivated the main detonator and set up a signal blocker, no signals can get into the radius of the chamber or leave it. Just in case someone has a dead man’s switch somewhere. Let your commander know that the bomb that the great Hephaestus was so proud of is now dead…….” Milky Way, Scourge System, Ryohlex Prime, Capital City: As the “Jan’tek” hovers high overhead the First Prime of Atlas stands on the dais that holds the Chappa’ai. He looks down as Kelec is escorted up the steps to him. Achilles golden armor is in striking contrast to the bloody clothes that Kelec now wears, he and his Jaffa stripped of their armor and weapons. Achilles folds his arms over his chest as Kelec stops, two black armored Jaffa shove him forward pointing their staffs at him as Achilles says, “Commander dial your world and take your people home.” Kelec nods as he walks to the dialer and keys the coordinates for Exon. The Chappa’ai surges to life, casting a blue light over the main square as the light of day fades. The “Jan’tak” activate its flood lights, the lights rotate back and forth over the square as slaves, Jaffa and citizens flee though the gate. Achilles makes a motion as the Jaffa grab Kelec and force him to his knees, Achilles stands over him and looking down says, “You see I am a Jaffa of my word, your people are all being allowed to leave this world. Kelec looks over as he sees the endless sea of people fleeing through the gate. Achilles kneels down and says, “But if seems to me that there are debts left unpaid at this point? The loss of my Walkers, the downing of the deathgliders, the loss of my troops and the numerous times your “God” insulted the Titan Atlas.” Achilles face contorts to rage as he wraps his iron grip around Kelec’s throat and hefts him from the ground. Kelec’s face turns bright red as Achilles shouts, “How many times did your master insult mine, your filth, your nothing to Titans and you will be an example to all gods that the time of Titans is here and none can stop it!!!!” Achilles tosses Kelec down to the ground, the Jaffa quickly grabbing Kelec and grabbing him by his head, forcing him to look toward the Chappa’ai. As thousands stream through the gate the massive “Jan’tak” Escort begins to descend toward the square, its engines kicking up great gust of wind that buffet many, throwing them to the ground. The crowd panics and begins to push and shove for the gate as they sense the end. The massive ship tilts its bow down and lines up with the Chappa’ai. Both sides of the Escort segment and large torpedo launchers slide out with full racks of Naquadria torpedoes. Achilles steps forward and with sinister intentions holds up his hand and makes a slashing motion. The twin racks of Naquardia torpedoes discharge their lethal contents, the torpedoes slide free and blast forward all passing through the highest part of the liquid event horizon, a dozen Naqaudria Torpedoes travel the stargate and emerge on Exon to do untold damage. The Jaffa situated about the edges of the Square begins opening fire on the people closest to the gate. Hundreds die in the initial onslaught while others break out and run into the streets of the city, most fall to their knees and beg for surrender. The Jaffa holding Kelec drag him kicking and screaming toward the Chappa’ai and Achilles smirks as they toss him into it and the certain doom on Exon. Achilles looks about at those still alive and turning to another Jaffa says, “Women and children, make slaves, all others execute. The sounds of staff blast fill the night as the Chappa’ai deactivates and Achilles stands in his golden armor looking upon the ruins of Ryohlex with pride………… |
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| Deleted User | Oct 26 2010, 06:01 PM Post #15 |
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The Stargate opens at Exon and Hephaestus's Royal Gaurd Prepares for Battle... After a few seconds of waiting Jaffa Humans and Gou'ald Started steping through the stargate from Ryohlex. Hundreds come Through but suddenly the line stoped Rockets Fired through the stargate But The Weapon Distrupter's Came to Life and all the Rockets Fell to the Ground Like Falling Rock's. Kelec Flys through the stargate and Quickly Shouted "Sh... Turn the Shield On." The Shield Come up around the stargate But nothing Came Through After Kelec. Kelec Lifted himself up and dusted himself down. "I Want all of these Jaffa and Humans put into new homes give them food and water" The Legacy Gaurd Incontrole of The Stargate Gaurd Walks closer to Kelec "Commander What Happend Why are there so little Jaffa and Humans here Ryohlex had a big Population "Because this is all that survived my wife and sons are dead every 1 els is dead. Achillies went by his word he promised to let every1 go through the stargate bt started killing as soon as we got close. he's a Coward he has no Honor. I Will have my Revenge. Achilies wil die by my hand and No other" The Stargate Shut's Down and Kelec redials Back to Ryohlex "Bring me 2 Bomb's" 8 Slaves Draged 2 Massive Bombs to the stargate and placed them onto the platform. The Stargate Blasts Open and Kelec sets both Bombs Up The EMP of the Bombs Come Life and the Slots of 3 Liquids begin to Merge. The 2 Bomb's fire through the stargate.... (((btw atlas i hate u still )))
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| Lord Atlas | Oct 26 2010, 08:33 PM Post #16 |
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Milky Way, Scourge System, Ryohlex Prime, Capital City: Several Minutes Later: The First Prime of Atlas stands upon the dais of the Chappa’ai barking out orders as his troops march from the city and his Walkers storm from the ruins of the Capital. Achilles stands with his arms crossed as he says, “The orders from the Emperor have arrived we are too begin….” He is cut off by the sound of the Chappa’ai spinning in its base, the chevrons begin to lock in as Achilles sighs and looking at one of the Holy Priest of the Titan Empire nods his head. The Priest takes out a holopad and keys a few simple commands erecting the force field over the gate with new security codes and protocols. As the shield energizes the gate finishes its dialing sequence. As the portal stabilizes Achilles turns his back on it as he thinks, “The foolishness of these children knows no boundaries.” Achilles walks down the dais and into the center of the square. The rings from the “Jan’tak” Escort descend down and in a bright flash he is brought aboard the “Jan’tak”. He makes his way to the pel’tak where he sees Hector rise from the throne, his son bows as he says, “Father, nearly all our troops are evacuated back through the Chappa’ai.” Achilles walks past his son and rests his hand on the young man’s shoulder as he says, “Excellent, once the evacuation is complete, we will begin the countdown.” Achilles sits upon the throne and holds his hand out; a slave brings him a moist cloth that he uses to clean his hands and face of the filth of Ryholex. He tosses the rag into the slaves face and says, “Hector take us out of here” The Second Prime of Atlas nods and walks to the command console and tells the Jaffa, “Set course for the Holy Charon System.” The Jaffa enters the command and the ship shoots up through the atmosphere, upon reaching the Ionosphere, it jumps to hyperspace to avoid the mines leaving a massive disturbance in the atmosphere, invoking massive and violent storms. Deep in the bowels of the palace, the simple jamming column sits whirring away in the depths of the massive Naquada trap. The center ring finally slows and stops, as it does, another larger more elaborate Ark with the symbol of Atlas on it begins to flash and glow…. Deep in the ancient forest of Ryohlex, the last of the Titan forces head back through the massive Chappa’ai. As they go black robed Priests work busily about the gate rigging it’s automated self destruct. As the last Walker heads through, 3 Priest and a dozen Jaffa look over their shoulder as they feel a massive pulse of energy and force. They look back toward the Capital and see the once black night sky blown away and replaced with a bright red hue. The trees violently shake and tremble as a massive wave of wind pours over the area, birds and small creatures screech and flee from the might of the blast. The last of the Jaffa move quicker through the gate as the Priests follow them. One priest stops and looking toward the approaching cataclysm bows his head and says, “I sacrifice this world in the name of Atlas, may this small token of my loyalty and fealty be just the beginning of my offerings to you, may you rest in Elysium for all time!” The Priest turns and slowly walks through the gate as it deactivates and begins to glow bright red. The gate explodes causing a massive blast that mushrooms up only to be devoured by the oncoming blast from the Capital. From space a massive wall of flames can be seen sweeping the whole continent…….. |
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Ow and if any of Your troops follow us through stargate ill make sure i put the shield up
Weapon Distrupter's and my Royal Gaurd will be waiting aswell ;) )))
3:54 AM Jul 11