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Persephone Caelon - Dragon Candidate - Female
Topic Started: Dec 10 2013, 07:53 PM (199 Views)
Kabia
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Character Number- 4th

Name- Persephone Kipcha Caelon

Age- 19

Gender- Female

Sexuality- Heteroflexable

Appearance- Persephone was raised to be a prim and proper lady of nobility and it shows in almost every possible way. Her hair, long and blonde, is almost always in top condition. Not only combed but styled in elaborate ways with twisting braids and numerous pins. Her face has high cheekbones and is rather angular in general, but not in a very sharp way. If anything the build of her face has a soft look to it. It is very expressive, showing her every emotion when she doesn't remember to force herself to keep her face blank. She has very wide and noticeable blue eyes. Persephone is a thin girl, weighing only 120 pounds. As far as height goes she is rather tall at five feet ten inches.

Oh, she tries to look all elegant and move with grave. The keyword to this being tries. It just so happens that the girl has long limbs that tend to hinder her more than help and cause her to look rather awkward when running. Or making any sort of fast movements really. Clumsiness is very much a part of her, although she she has come to the academy she's been trying to put an end to it. A dragonrider whose lack of co-ordination poses a danger to themselves without facing any other type of threat isn't going to help much, after all! For most of her life Persephone has worn elegant clothes. Long, flowing dresses, expensive jewelry, lavish makeup. Since leaving her old life she hasn't been exactly sure what her style is and so she does not seem to have one. Instead she seems to fluctuate from look to look, wearing one kind of clothing one day and something completely different the next.

Personality- There are two sides to Persephone, who was was raised to be and who she wants to be. She is torn between to two, trying to decide which one she really is. Trying to figure out what she is going to do with her life. It took her so long to reach this point, there is no telling just how long it will be until she is truly comfortable in the real world. After all, she is used to safety and warm beds, good dreams and lavish meals. Riding into battle and facing a real enemy? While she knows it could and probably will happen to her one day she can't quite picture it just yet. Not fully anyway, it's just a far-away nightmare to her.

She was raised to be a proper girl of nobility in every possible way. The daughter of a well respected nobleman in her city her image effected his image, and he certainly needed a good image. So it was important that she appeared to be perfect in every way. Politeness is very important to her. Address your superiors like they are just that, superiors, and always do what they tell you without question. Use proper speech, dress modestly, do not do anything that could be considered wild or improper. These are all things she does, or tries to do. But she hates it. She wants to stop, to go out and do her own thing, but these ways have been so deeply ingrained into her that she doesn't know how. As a matter of fact the ways of those with more 'wild' personalities unnerve her a bit. However, another part of Persephone does look up to them, wondering how they could manage to act so happy and free.

Yet Persephone is not exactly the perfect little lady her parents wanted her to be, she never really has been. She was taught to be polite, to obey her superiors, and most of the time she does do that. Yet she is not a pushover, not completely. When it's not a ranking person or someone with rank that is pushing her a bit too far she will stand up for herself and let them know exactly what she thinks. In fact she can be rather strong-willed when she sets her mind to it. Along with this she tends to be sarcastic, very sarcastic. Yes, she tries to hide it, but she isn't always very good at it.

Although she tries to look fearless she really isn't. Persephone fears almost everything about the Academy. The dragons, while she doesn't have a deep fear of them and dreamed about riding one for ages, she still doesn't feel completely confident around when up close. Not to mention that threat of fighting and getting killed in battle, or maybe worse. Is there something worse than that? She doesn't know for sure yet she can't help but feel that there is. However, she tries to push her fears as far away from her mind as possible, pretending that they do not exist. The same tends to go for any other fear of hers right up until the very last moment when she can no longer hold it in.

Rank- Dragon Candidate

History- Persephone was born in a city to a nobleman and his wife. While she might have been born nobility she was not nearly as 'important' as her parents yet, but it would still effect her life in the long run. Her father did not exactly make it a secret that he had had a child, and people started to judge him based off his daughter. His daughter who, for the first few years of her life, proved to be a very troublesome child. That had to change. Her father decided to become an active part of her life, even if only to teach her how to act like a proper lady.

And so it began. As time passed Persephone was molded into her father's perfect little girl. As she grew older she began to take lessons in music, although it was more her father's choice than hers. She did well enough at it, although she was no prodigy. Not that it mattered to her. She had a duty, that was what her father said, and she fully intended on fulfilling that duty. Never did she imagine a day that she would find her breaking point.

But eventually it did happen. For quite a long time she knew that she would end up in an arranged marriage, preferably to someone with a decent rank if her father could find one. Eventually her father did indeed find someone and at sixteen turns old Persephone was going to meet him. His name was Hares, a noble boy from a nearby city. And Persephone couldn't stand him. They had nothing in common, he was rude, cared little for others, and seemed to think he was all that. But he had a chance at rank, so her father did not agree to let her out of the arrangement when she asked.

She was to get married to him the weekend after turning ninteen and the idea absolutely terrified her. There was nothing she wanted more than a way out, unfortunately she couldn't see anything. She didn't expect anyone to come along and save her, and she certainly didn't expect a dragon to come and take her away. Oh, she had dreamed of being a dragonrider many a time, but there was no way one would pull her away from there. But that didn't mean that Persephone couldn't get away herself, did it? A little while before turning nineteen she ran away and made her way to Sekkai Academy, where she quickly enrolled and tried her hardest to forget her near brush with unwanted matrimony.

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Great work on length and detail! Absolutely fine there. However, I'd like to ask you to go back and edit for grammar. This is especially pertinent to run-on sentences. You have quite a few and most of them are in the appearance and personality section. It would be great if you could clean them up a bit.

If you have any questions, or would like some help, just ask.

Thank you!
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[align=center]More than one week has elapsed since this profile has been edited to suit revision requests, so it will be moved into the inactive section where it can be finished at your leisure.[/align]
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