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Ryuuta no isuku; Ryuuta's story
Topic Started: Apr 13 2006, 04:06 PM (212 Views)
Ryu-Kage
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Rubber Chicken
alright kids, I decidedfinnaly to rewrite my fanfic. This time it's not sonic style but human style. Enjoy and tell me what you think so I can improve.

Ryuuta’s story
Chapter1: Humunculus
It was truly a dark night. Standing on a steel platform stood a crazy old man. He had grey eyes that glowed with insanity and a powerful ambition. This man, a professor Heike, had finally finished his lifelong dream. He had created a humunculus.
Now, humunculi are not naturally evil themselves, but they are created by doing a form of science that would even make even the most horrible creature in the darkest corner of Hades cower in fear. But none of that for now. In short, humunculi are invincible, immortal, human-like creatures that can only be destroyed by a nuclear explosion. The reason for this is that regardless of whether a humunculus wants to, whenever one is injured, and its cells regenerate thus healing the wound.
The humunculus that this professor had created was no different. And it slept in front of him with his jet black hair and his tanned skin. Tonight he would awaken, this very special boy and to this crazy professor he would be a loving son. Finally it happened. The humunculus glimmered with an unworldly aura that seemed to cut and crackle though the air like static. His eyes opened.
His eyes, like this glow, were unworldly. They seemed to have a spinning whirlpool within them instead of a pupil. And strangest of all, these eyes were the most gruesome shade of blood red one could ever see. He spoke to the good professor in an unearthly tone “Hello, I am Ryuuta. What is your name?”
“My name is Professor Vlad Heike and I am your father. You exist to serve me perfect one.” Said the professor.
Ryuuta seemed to flicker for a moment. He quaintly asked, “If I am truly perfect, then why would I exist to serve one who is imperfect like you”
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Brewmaster Dragon
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I'm a bit in my cups at the moment.
“If I am truly perfect, then why would I exist to serve one who is imperfect like you”

Ha! So true...
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Ryu-Kage
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blood rained that night :wacko:
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