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| DragonFlame | Sep 2 2007, 07:27 AM Post #1 |
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Title ~~ The Truuth of a Warrior The First Sequal Second one is already in progress. The story is about my fan caracter Kragulov. Okay this is the second story of mine, the last one was realy not good, i realy hope that there is some improvements from the last one. Caracters involved in the 1st Chapter. Kragulov Evil Master of the School The TroubleMaker by the School The Guards The Fisherman Mother and Father. And the fellow student. Chapter 1: The Child Hood ---------------------------------------------------------------- {Home by the little village of AlsHeimer} The 16th of October unknown year a young and special boy was borned in a little village named Alsheimer. As he was an ordinary boy whit an extinguish caracter form, whit his cat ears and cat looking tale. His parents was chocked by the first sight when looking what their son had become, but they didn`t care and didn`t hesitated long before starting raising him, feeding him whit baby food and using diapers as it would be with a normal child. He was a hungry one, almost eating more then she could give, so they had to buy pesturised milk instead and that made him cranky and screaming the nigths long for more food even if they where a poor family. After a while they did get so tired of walking up in the night to try and make him satisfied, eventually they took him in a bag and sended him down the river next by their house. It was as they wanted to kill him, but realy they just wanted him to be found by maybe another owner when traveling down the river. As the river was dangerous because there was a waterfall abit down the river and that would have been a suicide to try and jump or go down there. But they had also named the boy before sending him down the river, as they had also bought him a necklace that his name was engraved in it. His name was Kragulov and was also been called the little alien by his parents when he was still in their care. Almost several hours the little boat made of korn and wheat together, how it kept him floating i cant tell, but maybe it was a sign from above. Well suddenly it gets caught by a fisherman and taken up from the lake. He used his hands to take of the blanket and gets chocked by the little child lying in the basket. He finished fishing and carried him to where he was keeping at the Training school not to far from where he was fishing. ------------------------------------------------------------------- {The Training Academy School} Finaly when the fisherman arrives he knocks on the door and tells the two guards to let him in, but covering the child from the guards sight. One of the guards calls out. Guard "So any fish today fisherman." Fisherman "Yes, but only for the students, you will get the usual." Guard 2 "What, you mean we have to eat that slime of a food again, because you cant fish, that is rude, let me see what you got." Walking up to him grabbing a hold to the fisherman`s arm that he lost his grip of the basket falling towards the ground whit the baby. Guard "Now what have we hear, a little child. You sought to keep him secret would you, well that is out of question, we shall take him to the master of this school and introduce this little odd looking human to see what we are going to do whit him." The fisherman resisted and tried to make them not taking him up to the school`s master, but they didn`t breech and placed him down where he belonged, one of the students watched what was happening and had grown angry on the way of the learning the school have been teaching in. He charged towards the guards and attacked the guards kicking the first one down. Guard 2 "That`s it, you have interfeared whit this school`s teachings for to long." Grabbing his sword, but only to be eluded and instead of making an attack whit the sword from the guard, quickly the student steals the sword and stabs the guard down whit it and points it at the other guard to deliver the kid to the fisherman. The guard delivers the boy to the fisherman while the student tells him "Here take him now go." But it was to late the master had seen what was going on and fired an arrow towards the fisherman sending him down whit the kid flying in the air and landing on the ground screaming from the fall. The child oddly keeps quiet. Master looking whit his eyes whit a greed staring look "You, that is the final warning, no more interuptions in this school, i challenge you to death in the fighting ring at dawn tomorrow, may you be ready to face death." As he turns around and walks up to his school office, the student making his preperations clear for battle leaving the guard alive, but takes his sword. He runs over to the child and grabbs him up, while looking over to the other students that watched everything from afar. He walks up to one of his closest friends and asks him to take care of him until he would get other orders otherwise. The student nodds whit his head and walks towards his own room upstairs whit Kragulov. While the challenger and troublemaker and savior was heading towards the training hall to make his preperations to face his own teacher in a battle to death. ----------------------------------------------------------------------- {Dawn next day at the School, the battle was to aphend.} Master on the right side, wearing his suit and on the other side the challenger. Master "Have you been looking where you are gonna rest in peace he laughed." The student just holds an eye and focus on the battle and not speach whit the unruly teacher`s threatening words. The battle is started by the guard "Ready men, this is it, a fight to the death." They rushed towards each other caring each of them a sword by their side. The swords clashing between the master and the student, the battle is intense and the master is getting tired of the silly resistance he had, but he didn`t managed to stab down him, as every time he tryed to strike the student, he managed to rolling away or dodged the attacks whit his own sword. Steal against Steal, there where no other place this would end, eather death or a new ruler. Finaly the teacher gets the student down whit a feeble trick on the ground and is ready to cut him of when the student takes out his little dagger and throws it into the heart of the master, seconds later he falls down to the ground abit chocked in his eyes that he had failed towards one of his own students. The student pulls himself up and tells the guard "Now, your master have nothing left to say, and if you want to keep yourself alive then i suggest you follow my orders from now on." Guard 2 "Yes, i shall do as you wish, my new master." Student "Stop talking and take yourself together and get out fishing, we need food." he laughed abit, still shaking whit his arms after the intense battle. (That was the beginning of a new Master by the School and the way for the young student to be a fine warrior someday, as that what his thoughts was for the little human half cat person would be when he would get older.) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ End of First Chapter! Sorry if the grammer is still abit poor, as that is the biggest problem of mine, but i hope it is still readable and some what understanding. If there is anyone that likes it, then i shall continue whit the story, i might as well try and fix some slight spellings later if that is needed. Comments would be most appreciated. B) |
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