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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 3 2008, 07:38 PM (300 Views) | |
| zeku | Jun 3 2008, 07:38 PM Post #1 |
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Rubber Chicken
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Chapter 1: Born under darkness theme song: Innocent Sorrow-Abingdon Boys School "My lord, everything will be all right, so please stop worrying" A king paced back and forth outside a hospital room, his wife was taken in to the room four hours ago. one of his loyal servents sat in a chair on the other side of the hallway. "I know theres nothing to give worry about, she will be fine and we will have son to take our place..but" "but what my lord?" "what if she doesn't make it?" As he said this, a nurse opened the door and asked him to enter. Inside was his wife, with two newborn babies. "Look dear, twins" The king walked over to his wife, and picked up one of their sons. "All we need is a name for these two" he said softly as to not wake the kids. "This one, will be named Azazel, and the other..." The king look at Azazel's forhead, where a moons shape was, which would be not odd, if any other childern had alike markings, but this was problty teh first time he,or anyone else had seen this sort of thing. On the other childs hand, was a birthmark in the shape of the sun "How about Solar?" his wife wispherd "You think we should name him that?" He turned to her, and his eyes opened wide. On the other side of the bed, stood a stranger wearing a brown jacket and black pants. "How dare you enter without knocking!" "Easy enough, Now hand over the kid that was born last" "Never, Now I suggest you leave" A knock on the door could be heard "Who is it" "Your brother,Rail" "Come in" The stranger pulled a dagger out from his jacket "Give me the child or else" "why would you want this child. what would you gain from taking him?" "If you must know, his fate lies with me, sooner or later he will come to me" Smoke filled the room, as it did, he was gone. "Are you alright, brother?" "yes, but I want to know who that was" "I didn't see anyone or hear anyone else from outside" 7 years later: The king sat on his throne, his two princes were out in the royal gardens, when out of knowhere two guards ran into the room "what is it?" "S-S-Someone took Azazel!" "WHAT? Find whoever did this, and I want answers, soon before it is to late" The words of the stranger echoed in his head. "Why, why is this happening to me?" Outside the castle, the stranger sat, listening, waiting and watching, For nightfall..... |
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Pearl name:Seth FC:0130-2372-6580 Brawl FC: 3480-2829-3124 (the 8 could be a 6 or 0, my t.vs kinda blurry in the morning) | |
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| zeku | Jun 3 2008, 07:39 PM Post #2 |
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Rubber Chicken
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Chapter 2:The demon of night By the time night came, the soliders had been busy opening every house, looking in every room,basement,attis that they came across, while this was going on, the stranger licked his lips, and dove down to meet one of the search parties."Don't do something you'll have to pay for" the first solider spun around coming face to face with pericing, blood red eyes. before he could yell his heart was yanked out of his body, with no sign that anything had cut open the flesh to do so."Your blood tastes...nasty"he said then added"why don't I just take care of this for you, since you don't seem to have any use for it" with that he took a bite of the heart and shoved the rest down his mouth. The other two soliders walked on, unaware of their friends fate."Who would take teh kings son anyway? what would tehy gain from it?" "ransom more like it, they just want money or power or something else.." some noises could eb heard as the dead body was being dragged into a deadend alley. "I hope no one finds him, on second though, it could be interesting" |
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Pearl name:Seth FC:0130-2372-6580 Brawl FC: 3480-2829-3124 (the 8 could be a 6 or 0, my t.vs kinda blurry in the morning) | |
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| zeku | Jun 3 2008, 07:40 PM Post #3 |
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Rubber Chicken
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Chapter 3:The Immortal One-Prt one: Stand off Theme SongZetsubou Bully ( Fourth Song on the list) "Just as I though, a demonic monster is running around" Rail stood up and looked around.He was standing over a dead soliders body, which, as he turned to leave, the body began breaking into shards and falling to the ground."What kind of monster could do this?" he yelled out loud. Meanwhile, four kilometers away th edemon dug its claws into a shop eepers head which he opened and feasted on his brain."I should have come here sooner if I knew how good the snacks were!" behind him a trash can toppled to the ground. "Who's there?" "Your maker, spawn of devil" "Someone wants to play hero? you want save this town? to bad, I'm ganing more power with every organ I eat..How tasty are you? this should be fun" before Rail could react, the beast was beside him. "To slow, why not give up? I'll let you live for a couple days" Rail grabbed his two swords, each had a glowing aura around it. In one swift movement, he stabbed both blades into its chest, then cut outwards from the inside out."what were saying about eating me?" "It might take a bit longer, but I will have my meal". Rail just stared at hi sfoe, who had no longer any bones from the bottom part of his body to the top half, he cut them apart, same with teh organs, and he was still there looking madder then when Rail showed up. "that would work, if I could die!" Rail smiled"First, tell your name" "Fine, its Lestat, happy?" Rail nodded, then jumped into the air, Lestat soon after landed on a buliding infront of him. "well, you won't live through thsi move! Divine impact, holy judgement!" 60 long golden lances filled the over head sky. "what is this?" "It is your last night alive, you will pay for your crimes" he threw to needles at Lestat, who stepped aside "A simple head on attack like that won't work" "really?" Lestat felt pain shoot threw his body, and saw that his left leg had 14 needles up and down it. "now that you can't escape, I give you your judgement!" The lances dropped from the sky, and Rain walked away from the battle, knowing that nothing could live threw an attack like that. Behind him, the lances were 3 inches frm their target. "Impalment, activate!" he said softly, as if he was talking to no one. |
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Pearl name:Seth FC:0130-2372-6580 Brawl FC: 3480-2829-3124 (the 8 could be a 6 or 0, my t.vs kinda blurry in the morning) | |
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| zeku | Jun 3 2008, 07:41 PM Post #4 |
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Rubber Chicken
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Chapter 3 part 2-50% Lestat opened his eyes, he was lucky that none of the lances hit his head or heart, but all 60 were lined up and down his arms, legs chest, and a circle around his heart. The lances went into his body and stuck themselves to the stone floor, leaving him with movement what so ever. "darn that guy, if I ever see him, I'm gona crush his skull and devour his soul!" focusing all his power into his arms and legs, he broke at least seven that were in his joints " This is gonna take a while...". Rail dashed over ships and roofs, going as fast as he could to get back to the palace. He was almost there, when a barrier went up over the eight roof that were around him. "Your easy to trap, I can't think of anything that can be trapped quicker then you" from the cloak of night, he leaped out at Rails back, with his sharp claws extend. Rail didn't look back, instead, he jumped behind him letting Lestat hit his own wall. "I'm done playing around with you!" his body began changing, his head became more demon like that animall, black bone like dragon wings grew from his upper back, and spikes grew from the back of his elbows,the sides of his shoulders and his arms were coverd in small deadly bards filed with chemicals that would melt you the second you touch it. "Like it?" He took to steps towards Rail."So you bigger, whoop de do" "You will not mock me!" he smashed the area Rail was standing less then a second ago."Stand still dam it" Rail barl moved to avoid teh rush of punches and kicks."bigger isn't always better, unless you know your foes skills, range of attacks, Speed etc" with one powerful kick, he hit Lestat in the chest, making him fall off teh side of the building and into a dumpster."what a waste of time" Lestat dug his claws into the building and started climbing it."at 25% I'm not powerful, but he can't match me at my next state" He grabbed Rail and slammed him to the roof, ending with a ray of dark energey being blasted into him. "you did good fighting me, but now your dead" He reached down to pull out his heart, but Rail threw up his arm, which Lestat caught. "Ha, then you want this pain?" with a slight twist, the sound of everything in his left arm shattering, then a the sound of skin splitting. His arm was torn off, halfway from his shoulder."How you gonna fight now?" Rail picke dup his sword and ramed it into Lestats skull "Thats how, you freak" The monsters right arm reached out and pulled the sword from itsresting place, then tossed it away. "nice try " |
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Pearl name:Seth FC:0130-2372-6580 Brawl FC: 3480-2829-3124 (the 8 could be a 6 or 0, my t.vs kinda blurry in the morning) | |
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| zeku | Jun 3 2008, 07:42 PM Post #5 |
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Rubber Chicken
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Chapter 3 part 3: Victory? or Defeat Rail just stood on the roof, his eyes wide open. "Is there way I can beat this guy? he lived through my lances, that last attack seemed to do nothing to him, but he has to have a weakness of some kind". Rail ran forwards "your all out of ideas? pity then I'll just rip you piece by piece" as he clawed Rail, he brust into flames. "whats going on?"his eys darted back and forth trying to locate him, until he spun around, face to face with his target. "when did you get behind me?" pain filled Lestats legs, and he fell backwards "what did you do?" "Its one of my fave fors of attacking, I transfer my pain back into the one who caused it, you ripped off my arm, and now your feeling everything I did, and more" a gold lance flew into Rails, hand and he sliced off his legs and tail, followed by a pond of blood.. "I'm supposed to win, it should have been easy to beat you, my master told me to distract you while he getting read..." "getting ready for what?" the wall went down and the moon was setting. "If I can trust his words, then I'd better tell my brother, he'd want to know" as Rail leaped off the roof, Lestat watched as a dark ball floated down from the sky, and carried him off. When the guards saw Rail, they rushed over to him, asking all sors of questions. "I'll tell you later, but I need to speak with my brother, its important" two guards led him inside "you don't want to vist eth hospital first?" "No, but thanks" five miutes later he was telling the king everything, and when he finshed , the King though for a bit, then orderd the guards to be full lookout for anyone dangerous suspects, then went down to the dinning hall for breakfast. "did you find the prince yet?" "No, I don't know what to do" Rail looked around dor solar, but he show up."where teh other one?" "He wants to learn sword combat" Outside, Solar was traning with one of teh many royal army generals. "You have a good back and fron slice, but you don't seem to dodge my hits, you try to block them" "If I can block them, then I can counter attack quicker, and win" Solar blocked his left slash, and stabbed his armor, making a small dent in it. "thats it for today, I have a new solider coming today" Solar noded and walked outside to the city, where large crowds where gatherd aroudn teh center, where a warroir in gold armour was accepting any challanges. "Now really, is there any good fighters here? you think someone strong would show up" Solar ran to front of the crowd to get a better veiw of teh action. Five men attacked the warroir at once, he effortlessly blocked, and cut them all at once. The warroir turned, and saw the prince. "What is your name, little boy?" "My name is solar, whats yours?' The warrior smiled, then replyed "My name..is Bane" |
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Pearl name:Seth FC:0130-2372-6580 Brawl FC: 3480-2829-3124 (the 8 could be a 6 or 0, my t.vs kinda blurry in the morning) | |
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| zeku | Jun 3 2008, 07:42 PM Post #6 |
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Rubber Chicken
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chapter 4: Last night Solar, now 14, and a commander in the royal army, was busy training new soliders in the art of combat. "Thats better Mike, your getting the hang of it" he watched them in mock battles facing off with other soliders. "Solar, the king wishes to talk to you" Solar sighed, then waved aonther solider over to look after the young fighters. "What is it?" "Your dad, has gotten reports that darkness is creeping over the land, in the form of..well nasty looking demons, much like the ones that have been popping up over the years" "yeah so?" "and, the king is worried for you, since your his last son, but other reporst that a person looking like your brother, is leading the vile beings" Solar ran to the watch towers, on the city side of the walls that protected their kindgom. Sure enough that darkness was coming, Solar felt a suddenly sick, and fell to the foor. "Prince, are you okay?" when Solar came to, he was in his room, with a bunch of people around him."What happened?" "You fainted, I took you back here, it was lucky we ran into Bane along the way" Bane enterd teh room "Is the kid okay? I wanted to give him his gift a couple days early" "Sure" He handed him a long box that was wrapped up in red paper to solar, who ripped it and teh paper off the gift, to find a flaming colored sword, on the handle in old text was FLAMESOUL "I had to do a lot to get that sword, but it was wortth, as you did say you wanted your own blade to use, and some say it has powers |
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Pearl name:Seth FC:0130-2372-6580 Brawl FC: 3480-2829-3124 (the 8 could be a 6 or 0, my t.vs kinda blurry in the morning) | |
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| zeku | Jun 3 2008, 07:43 PM Post #7 |
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Rubber Chicken
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Chapter 5: Small army of the underworld Five hours later Solar woke up, grabbed his sword, put on his amour, and ran to the one way into the city. When he opened it, he could see just one person walking towards the kingdom, not an army, just one solider. He turned to the guards that were ready on the inside of the gate. "Wait, the report sated that and army attacked the towns, and that is not a army, unless.." Solar drew his blade and walked outside the gate. From the gate, he saw just one solider, but outside he saw the lone guy, followed by skeleton like dragons made of bones, rotten corpses were in front. In total he counted seven, and with the royal army, there were more then 700 soliders ready to rip out anything when givien the order. "Hello, nice day isn't t?" the stranger called to Solar, who repiled with "Are you the one who killed all the people?" "I'm just on a nice walk with my pets, my names Azazel, whats yours?" "Solar, and the prince of the city". Azazel walked towards him, his ''pets'' stayed close to him. " I don't trust you, sorry but your coming with me" the two dragons flew to the air, and dive bomb solar. "What were you saying? that I would come to you? I'm gonna smash you, the army and turn this kingdom into a wasteland! Now go forth and devour every child man and woman you find" With his command, the demons went into a fast pitched run" Solar darted towards them, as he did one dragon swooped back down at him, Solar stabbed his blade into its rib cage as if flew by, pieces of its ribs fell to the ground. "Your not gonne win thie time" Azazel began chantng some old form of speech when he was done the ground broke away, something around 300 Km wide was digging to the surface and the sun was blocked by the growing darkness. |
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| Project: Shadow | Jun 3 2008, 09:42 PM Post #8 |
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Egg Robo
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Interesting story, I read a little over half of what's been posted so far and will probably resume the rest later tonight or maybe tomorrow. It's a little difficult to follow sometimes, though. Particularly with the dialogue, you really only have what's being said to go by in determining who it is that's saying it. While it's not necessary to go, "The king said," and, "His brother replied," all the time, doing so every so often just to establish where the dialogue is coming from makes it easier to understand. Other than that, it's pretty good from what I've read. Also, as this is a story and not a description or discussion of an original character, I'll be moving it to the main forum of the SSF Library and not the Character Archive sub-forum. So, what's the history behind your story? Anything in particular that inspired you to write it, not to mention post it here? :) |
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| Hyper Metal Sonic | Jun 3 2008, 10:05 PM Post #9 |
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Koopa the Quick!
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I read part of it so far too, nice job on it so far! ^_^ |
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| zeku | Jun 4 2008, 04:36 AM Post #10 |
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Rubber Chicken
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I just always wanted to write a backstory to some of my fan chars like Solar, and explain why he one of the few let of his people. but this is only part one of the series, part 2-3 are rpgs, which will be up soon |
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