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| Mr. Hendrickson | Apr 15 2011, 04:34 PM Post #31 |
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Yeah no doubt we are all here for one thing .. fun. Well that and expansion of our skills. |
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| bruno3997 | Apr 15 2011, 08:04 PM Post #32 |
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So again I say hot Chocolate all the way |
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Ain't nobody fucking with my Kliq Ain't nobody fresher than my muthafuckin Kliq As I look around, they don't do it like my Kliq ![]() Former UCW General Manager/Commissioner Present Hardkore World West Coast Champion Former UCW United States Champion Former UCW World Heavyweight Champion Former ICW Tag Team Champion Former ICW World Heavyweight Champion Former GWA North American Champion Former TKOW World Heavyweight Champion Former 2X UCWA Tag Team Champion Former 2X Hardkore World 6 Man Tag Team Champion Former NW 6 Man Tag Team Champion Former FCW Evolution Champion Former Hardkore America Heavyweight Champion 2004 Most Popular Wrestler SWAT 2005 UCW Hall Of Fame http://youtu.be/acGWtQ5d5jI | |
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| Tum Tum | Apr 16 2011, 04:05 PM Post #33 |
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Boys sorry when real girls are here too! I did explained me mates that in e-fed got three type of players read and react if there is problem some never win? Got former real Indy wrestlers,veteran players and people who miss experience in writing or creating . Could be so that a veteran player is better in a rp/promo writing and former Indy wrestler in creating moves list,with others hoping learn something? |
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| Tum Tum | Apr 16 2011, 04:05 PM Post #34 |
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Boys sorry when real girls are here too! I did explained me mates that in e-fed got three type of players read and react if there is problem some never win? Got former real Indy wrestlers,veteran players and people who miss experience in writing or creating . Could be so that a veteran player is better in a rp/promo writing and former Indy wrestler in creating moves list,with others hoping learn something? |
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| Tum Tum | Apr 16 2011, 04:09 PM Post #35 |
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| bruno3997 | Apr 16 2011, 04:24 PM Post #36 |
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The Compton Colossus
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I would like to know the people behind their characters but it's not really important. |
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Ain't nobody fucking with my Kliq Ain't nobody fresher than my muthafuckin Kliq As I look around, they don't do it like my Kliq ![]() Former UCW General Manager/Commissioner Present Hardkore World West Coast Champion Former UCW United States Champion Former UCW World Heavyweight Champion Former ICW Tag Team Champion Former ICW World Heavyweight Champion Former GWA North American Champion Former TKOW World Heavyweight Champion Former 2X UCWA Tag Team Champion Former 2X Hardkore World 6 Man Tag Team Champion Former NW 6 Man Tag Team Champion Former FCW Evolution Champion Former Hardkore America Heavyweight Champion 2004 Most Popular Wrestler SWAT 2005 UCW Hall Of Fame http://youtu.be/acGWtQ5d5jI | |
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| Nash | Apr 16 2011, 05:01 PM Post #37 |
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El Messiah
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Not sure what he just said. But, my character was a loser for a span of three or something years before I finally learned how to RP right and win. In the end, wins and losses mean nothing as long as you have fun. |
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[ ![]() ![]() ![]() Title History: UCW Hall of Fame 2012 - Only Handler Inductee 1x UCW World Heavyweight Champion - Hector 1x UCW Southern Justice Champion - Hector - Longest Reigning 1x UCW Television Champion - Eric - Never lost it 1x UCW Tag Team Champions - Southern Blood - Never lost them, longest reigning 3x UCW Television Champion - Nikki Monroe managed by Veronica Rodriguez 1x UCW Women's Champion - Nikki Monroe managed by Veronica Rodriguez - Never lost it 1x UCW Women's Champion - Brandy Danielle trained by Eric Herrera 2x Tag Team of the Year - Southern Blood - UCW | MCW 1x UCW Feud of the Year - Frostbite versus Dave Brickheart versus Eric Herrera 2x Cruiserweight of the Year - Eric Herrera [2006 | 2007] 4x Hall of Fame - Eric Herrera [UHW | HCW | UCW | XPW] 2x Most Improved - Eric Herrera [HVW | EWA] 9x World Champion [Eric 3 | Jay 2 | Lance 2 | Hector 2] | |
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| Mr. Hendrickson | Apr 16 2011, 05:20 PM Post #38 |
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I've never been a loser, always been the Main Event. With that said ... Okay the above is so untrue ask Dave.... |
![]() ![]() ![]() [CURRENT CHARACTERS] Cash Allan [Member of Greed] Nikki Monroe Mr. Hendrickson [UCW Owner] Trent James Errick Mason [Bodyguard of Mr. Hendrickson] [UCW CHAMPIONSHIPS] 1x World Heavyweight Champion [Trent James] 3x World Television Champion [1x Trent James/2x Nikki Monroe] 1x Women's Champion [Nikki Monroe] 1x Crisis World Heavyweight Champion [Trent James] | |
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| Frostbite | Apr 16 2011, 07:03 PM Post #39 |
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Tum, Tum trust me my good friend. When I first started out in the world of e fedding. I was very raw. My rp's were horrible. I didn't know what I was doing, didn't grab the thoughts on creative writing. It was like a foreign language to me. It took me about 6 months to sort get what they really wanted. I asked the gentleman that was running the fed that I was in. "What do I need to do to get to that next level."? He sent me an email explaining what it looks for in a rp. I still have the email to this day. After reading it, I understood what they wanted. Trust me to this day, I still at times still trying to figure things out. My spelling at times is questionable. My grammer can be botched at times. And color use as never worked for me. And I have tried thousands of times and still can't get to load. From what I learn, most fed heads look for many different things to judge a promo. 1- Some could knock off because of the three things that I have mention above. 2- I have ran across some fed heads that prefer humor in an rp, more so over a heart felt rp. 3- Some fed heads would like you to describe things right down to the tee. Example: If your characters starts to talk about your upcoming match. Your characters stops and you might add... Itching my balls, and you continue on. Some fed heads are going to ask. "Why was your character itching his balls"? Was it because you mention your opponents name and it made you itch your balls. Or some fed heads will not worry about that and listen to what your character has to say about the match, and not be too much into every little detail. |
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| Nash | Apr 16 2011, 07:22 PM Post #40 |
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My grading criteria usually consist of: Match Relevance | Entertainment | Flow. I focus on the shoot area first then go to the CD for a tie breaker. If someone gets outright hammered in the shoot portion, the guy could be writing Macbeth and still lose. Also, if the guy has any consistency with his writing. If he's a CD writer, the ability to continue off it / keep me wanting more instead of falling asleep midway. Basically this --- http://cpwf.b1.jcink.com/index.php?showtopic=53. But, that's just me. There's an entire voting council here with varying opinions and styles. I did that on purpose to avoid bias. You're never going to appeal to ALL people, I've learned that firsthand. It's best to just be yourself. |
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[ ![]() ![]() ![]() Title History: UCW Hall of Fame 2012 - Only Handler Inductee 1x UCW World Heavyweight Champion - Hector 1x UCW Southern Justice Champion - Hector - Longest Reigning 1x UCW Television Champion - Eric - Never lost it 1x UCW Tag Team Champions - Southern Blood - Never lost them, longest reigning 3x UCW Television Champion - Nikki Monroe managed by Veronica Rodriguez 1x UCW Women's Champion - Nikki Monroe managed by Veronica Rodriguez - Never lost it 1x UCW Women's Champion - Brandy Danielle trained by Eric Herrera 2x Tag Team of the Year - Southern Blood - UCW | MCW 1x UCW Feud of the Year - Frostbite versus Dave Brickheart versus Eric Herrera 2x Cruiserweight of the Year - Eric Herrera [2006 | 2007] 4x Hall of Fame - Eric Herrera [UHW | HCW | UCW | XPW] 2x Most Improved - Eric Herrera [HVW | EWA] 9x World Champion [Eric 3 | Jay 2 | Lance 2 | Hector 2] | |
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| Phoenix | Apr 16 2011, 07:23 PM Post #41 |
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I remember when I was fedheading, and when I had people judging matches for me as well, even when I just talked to other fedheads about what they looked for, it was usually just "it entertained me". Of course, everyone's entertained by different stuff. Take me. I'm not entertained much when Character Development mixes with Match promoing. I like CD stuff, I just liked it done seperately. My feds always had seperate sections for each, and CD's would be like bonus points. I'm also not entertained much when people do three+ promos that are basically the same thing recycled. Which make straight shoots get old fast cause honestly, how many different ways can you say "I'll beat you"? I've "worked for" something like nine different fedheads, plus myself, and we all had slightly different answers to what entertained us. These things vary fom promo lengths to promo volume to style to vocabulary to shoots to offbeat comedy and so on. Best thing to do is find a style that you can write "easily" then try to tweak it so it works well in the fed you're in. |
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| Nash | Apr 16 2011, 07:27 PM Post #42 |
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Correct, at entertainment. Although personally, I'm fond of combo rp'ing (cd and shoot mixed into one) cause it sets up the mood the character is in. Not going to take that away from you though. It helps entrench me into the character a bit better. Character Development can be explained in many ways whether it's the traditional route or some of the Hardkore World variants where it's all televised and blended into one. Regardless of what way it goes, as long it looks to me like the character is being explained properly. |
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[ ![]() ![]() ![]() Title History: UCW Hall of Fame 2012 - Only Handler Inductee 1x UCW World Heavyweight Champion - Hector 1x UCW Southern Justice Champion - Hector - Longest Reigning 1x UCW Television Champion - Eric - Never lost it 1x UCW Tag Team Champions - Southern Blood - Never lost them, longest reigning 3x UCW Television Champion - Nikki Monroe managed by Veronica Rodriguez 1x UCW Women's Champion - Nikki Monroe managed by Veronica Rodriguez - Never lost it 1x UCW Women's Champion - Brandy Danielle trained by Eric Herrera 2x Tag Team of the Year - Southern Blood - UCW | MCW 1x UCW Feud of the Year - Frostbite versus Dave Brickheart versus Eric Herrera 2x Cruiserweight of the Year - Eric Herrera [2006 | 2007] 4x Hall of Fame - Eric Herrera [UHW | HCW | UCW | XPW] 2x Most Improved - Eric Herrera [HVW | EWA] 9x World Champion [Eric 3 | Jay 2 | Lance 2 | Hector 2] | |
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| bruno3997 | Apr 16 2011, 08:18 PM Post #43 |
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The Compton Colossus
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My character is basically me minus the wrestling and the talking,lol. I'm from Compton so isd my character and Bruno is a nickname that was given to me when I started bouncing. I keep my promos simple and straight to the point . I try to be funny here and there but reall I'm no writer and I try to imagine what I would say if I was a wrestler and what I would be doing all the time. Me I would allways train and workout mybe a party here and there. But I have fun and stick with it. I've been a mutiple tag team champion and world champion so I must be doing something right,lol. I just try and try my promos aren't great but I do put my heart into them and I'm not really a talker so it is hard for me but I do it and have fun. I have to admit all my work is off the top of my head because it's hard for me to right it out ahead of time but I try and nobody can take that away from me. Bruno has been around for 10 years and still has some more left to give and be it solo or part of my group The Kliq I'll be around. |
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Ain't nobody fucking with my Kliq Ain't nobody fresher than my muthafuckin Kliq As I look around, they don't do it like my Kliq ![]() Former UCW General Manager/Commissioner Present Hardkore World West Coast Champion Former UCW United States Champion Former UCW World Heavyweight Champion Former ICW Tag Team Champion Former ICW World Heavyweight Champion Former GWA North American Champion Former TKOW World Heavyweight Champion Former 2X UCWA Tag Team Champion Former 2X Hardkore World 6 Man Tag Team Champion Former NW 6 Man Tag Team Champion Former FCW Evolution Champion Former Hardkore America Heavyweight Champion 2004 Most Popular Wrestler SWAT 2005 UCW Hall Of Fame http://youtu.be/acGWtQ5d5jI | |
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| Phoenix | Apr 16 2011, 10:18 PM Post #44 |
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Yup it's all who's reading it at the time. That's why I just entertain myself and hope for the best. lol |
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While the wicked stand confounded Call me with thy saints surrounded ![]() Career Record: 73 - 16 UCW Record: 8 - 2 UCW Southern Justice Champion (1)(Current) UCW Heavyweight Champion (1)(Retired Belt, Longest Reign) UCW Intercontinental Champion (1)(Only, Retired Belt) uCw United Kingdom Champion (1)(Last, Retired Belt) About Phoenix: Spoiler: click to toggle Title History: Spoiler: click to toggle Efed Awards: Spoiler: click to toggle Records: Spoiler: click to toggle
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| bruno3997 | Apr 16 2011, 11:06 PM Post #45 |
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The Compton Colossus
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Phoenix you know you come up with entertaining stuff. |
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Ain't nobody fucking with my Kliq Ain't nobody fresher than my muthafuckin Kliq As I look around, they don't do it like my Kliq ![]() Former UCW General Manager/Commissioner Present Hardkore World West Coast Champion Former UCW United States Champion Former UCW World Heavyweight Champion Former ICW Tag Team Champion Former ICW World Heavyweight Champion Former GWA North American Champion Former TKOW World Heavyweight Champion Former 2X UCWA Tag Team Champion Former 2X Hardkore World 6 Man Tag Team Champion Former NW 6 Man Tag Team Champion Former FCW Evolution Champion Former Hardkore America Heavyweight Champion 2004 Most Popular Wrestler SWAT 2005 UCW Hall Of Fame http://youtu.be/acGWtQ5d5jI | |
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| Tum Tum | Apr 17 2011, 03:58 AM Post #46 |
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Thanks guys this what I ment don,t metter if you were in real life a former WXW junior lightweiggt champ or like me active as handler in differt e-feds must be fun. When can,t lay feeling in it like read in past in HKW promo,s that person only insulted everybody with his promo. Yes tomorrow we see who won and who lost not because didn,t were not 100% but opponent won on all levels. |
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| bruno3997 | Apr 17 2011, 01:50 PM Post #47 |
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Thats just some peoples styles Tum but I'm use toit :-) |
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Ain't nobody fucking with my Kliq Ain't nobody fresher than my muthafuckin Kliq As I look around, they don't do it like my Kliq ![]() Former UCW General Manager/Commissioner Present Hardkore World West Coast Champion Former UCW United States Champion Former UCW World Heavyweight Champion Former ICW Tag Team Champion Former ICW World Heavyweight Champion Former GWA North American Champion Former TKOW World Heavyweight Champion Former 2X UCWA Tag Team Champion Former 2X Hardkore World 6 Man Tag Team Champion Former NW 6 Man Tag Team Champion Former FCW Evolution Champion Former Hardkore America Heavyweight Champion 2004 Most Popular Wrestler SWAT 2005 UCW Hall Of Fame http://youtu.be/acGWtQ5d5jI | |
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| Phoenix | Apr 17 2011, 03:58 PM Post #48 |
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FFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK YYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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While the wicked stand confounded Call me with thy saints surrounded ![]() Career Record: 73 - 16 UCW Record: 8 - 2 UCW Southern Justice Champion (1)(Current) UCW Heavyweight Champion (1)(Retired Belt, Longest Reign) UCW Intercontinental Champion (1)(Only, Retired Belt) uCw United Kingdom Champion (1)(Last, Retired Belt) About Phoenix: Spoiler: click to toggle Title History: Spoiler: click to toggle Efed Awards: Spoiler: click to toggle Records: Spoiler: click to toggle
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| bruno3997 | Apr 17 2011, 05:23 PM Post #49 |
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LMAO and for those that don't know it's my friend and long time tag team partner DK's catchphrase. |
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