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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 19 2007, 05:01 AM (570 Views) | |
| Max Brady | Mar 19 2007, 05:01 AM Post #1 |
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I drove Jane back to her dorm room so we could be alone. I had a very important question to ask her. "That was nice wedding," I said as I kissed Jane's cheek. |
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| Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane | Mar 19 2007, 12:43 PM Post #2 |
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"Yeah it was"I smile at him."But the best looking guy in the place was my date"I said to him sweetly and honeslty. |
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| Max Brady | Mar 19 2007, 10:24 PM Post #3 |
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"Jane... there's something important I want to ask you," I said as I took her hand. "We've been together for a few months now... and I can't imagine myself without you in my life. I guess what I'm trying to ask is-" Before I could ask, a knock came at her door. |
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| Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane | Mar 19 2007, 11:11 PM Post #4 |
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I wonder who it could be. I had no idea who would come knocking on my door at this time of night. I had a feeling Max was going to ask me something very important and I wondered what it was. |
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| Max Brady | Mar 19 2007, 11:20 PM Post #5 |
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It was a delivery man with a bouquet of roses. I hadn't ordered them, so I wondered who could have sent them. |
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| Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane | Mar 21 2007, 12:29 PM Post #6 |
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I take the flowers and look at Max and see by his face he didn't send them. I gave the man a tip and shut the door and laid them on the table. And just looked at them trying to figure out who would send them to me."Who in the world would send me flowers you didn't, no on in my family does they would rather send food. So I am lost you can read the note it could be for someone across the hall." |
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| Max Brady | Mar 22 2007, 05:03 AM Post #7 |
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"My dearest Jane, it's been years, but I finally decided to make you mine again. Hope to see you soon, Jacob." I read off the card. "Old boyfriend?" |
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| Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane | Mar 22 2007, 10:09 PM Post #8 |
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"Did you say the name is Jacob?"I asked going pale. The name I knew it but it couldn't be."In a sense you can say that"I say dryly. I took the card and read over it myself."Throw them out just throw them out I don't want them." |
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| Max Brady | Mar 23 2007, 05:03 AM Post #9 |
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"Jane, what's going on?" I asked as I did what she said, tossing the flowers in the garbage. "Who's this Jacob?" |
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| Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane | Mar 23 2007, 10:33 PM Post #10 |
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"He is the guy I told you about"I whispered and wrapped my arms around myself tightly. I started to shiver thinking just when I was getting over my past it came back to bite me in the butt. |
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| Max Brady | Mar 24 2007, 02:27 AM Post #11 |
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I pulled Jane into my arms and held her tightly. The monster that had raped her was here in Westland. "He won't touch you, I promise," I told her. "I'll never let anyone hurt you as long as I'm alive." |
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| Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane | Mar 24 2007, 06:02 PM Post #12 |
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I leaned into Max and let him hold me. I closed my eyes feeling safe in his arms."I am scared Max I admit it I am scared. I didn't think he would ever find me after I left." |
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| Max Brady | Mar 26 2007, 04:58 AM Post #13 |
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"He won't get near you," I promised. "I love you, Jane, and I'm not going to lose you to this psycho." |
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| Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane | Mar 27 2007, 11:06 PM Post #14 |
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"I love you Max so much. I trust you to keep me safe"I whisper and look into his eyes. I kiss him softly on the lips. |
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| Max Brady | Mar 28 2007, 05:08 AM Post #15 |
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"Pack a few things," I told her. "I want you to stay at my place for a while so I can keep you close to me. I don't want to leave you alone with this guy stalking you." |
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| Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane | Mar 28 2007, 07:07 PM Post #16 |
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I pull back and looked at Max and shook my head."No Max I can't do that I am sorry. I am not going to run anymore and I am keeping my doors and windows locked and you can call me every few hours to check on me. But I am not hiding or going to be weak I am not going to let my past hurt me anymore." |
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| Max Brady | Mar 28 2007, 09:17 PM Post #17 |
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"Jane... are you sure?" I asked. "I want you to be safe. I don't want this bastard to hurt you." |
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| Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane | Mar 28 2007, 10:39 PM Post #18 |
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"I promise doors and windows locked at all times"I said and looked up at Jane. I kissed him soflty on the lips."I love you Max just trust me please I will keep myself safe." |
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| Max Brady | Mar 28 2007, 10:43 PM Post #19 |
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"Alright, but I'm only going home to get a few things," I told her. "And I want to you to call me if anything happens, alright? I'm going to rent a motel room across the street from the dorms so I can be near you if you need me if you need anything." |
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| Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane | Mar 28 2007, 10:59 PM Post #20 |
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"I will call you if anything happens"I said and stroked his face gently."You just go and hurry okay and see locking the windows"I said walking over and locking the windows tightly."And I will lock the door as soon as you shut it behind you." |
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| Max Brady | Mar 28 2007, 11:04 PM Post #21 |
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I kissed her softly and gave her a hug. "I won't be far, alright? I love you, Jane." I gave her one more kiss before I left the room. I had to stop this creep before he hurt Jane again. |
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| Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane | Mar 28 2007, 11:15 PM Post #22 |
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After Max left the room I locked the door behind him. I sat on my bed and picked up a book from english I had to read. And I tried to concentrate on that and not let the fear get to me. |
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| Max Brady | Mar 28 2007, 11:24 PM Post #23 |
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I returned home to pack a few things. I wanted to be near Jane at all times until this threat was gone. I pulled the small black box with the engagement ring out of my pocket. I'd have to wait until this was over to propose. I put it back into my dresser drawer and packed a suitcase. As I was about to open the door, I noticed that the window was open. It was closed when I left, and that's I felt a sharp pain in my back- I hit the young man several times with the tire iron. He was a strong man, and it took several hits to get him to stay down. I carried his body to my car and bound and gagged him. By the time he woke up it'd be too late. Jane would be mine. |
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| Jacob Underwood | Mar 28 2007, 11:59 PM Post #24 |
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I stripped Max down to his underwear before I left him somewhere where he wouldn't cause any trouble. He'd die within a matter of days with no food or water, which was all the time I needed to get Jane to go away with me. I put Max's bloody dress shirt in a box and left if on Jane's doorstep. I knocked on the door and waited outside to hear her beautiful scream. Attached to his shirt was a note saying 'Now no one can stand in our way'. |
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| Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane | Mar 29 2007, 03:22 PM Post #25 |
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I heard a knock at the door and waited for someone to speak. When they didn't I cracked it opened and saw a box on the floor. I looked around and didn't see anyone. I thought Max had a suprise and smile. Max was always doing sweet stuff leaving me suprises."Max your so sweet you know just what I need no wonder I love you"I said and brought the box inside. When I opened the box I saw Max's shirt with the not on it. I couldn't hold back and screamed out."Max nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo." |
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