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Max attn Jane
Topic Started: Mar 19 2007, 05:01 AM (576 Views)
Jacob Underwood
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Still looking for an actor to play Jacob, but I'll register him soon.

I heard Jane scream, and smiled. With that loser out of the picture, I would have no trouble getting Jane back into my arms.
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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I didn't know what to do as I started pacing. I had to do somethign to save Max I knew I had to call the cops. When I picked up my room phone there was no sound it was like it was cut and my cell phone was dead."Max max max please please live, live for me I love you so much"I said aloud.
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Jacob Underwood
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I'd cut her phone line, and I was watching her dorm room to make sure she didn't leave. I was letting the fear set in before I approached her. I'd make sure she never left me again.
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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I plugged in my cell phone hoping it wouldn't take long to charge. I started to pace as I got scared for Max and I chewed on my bottom lip. The only thing on my mind was Max and then I started to get scared for myself worried what Jacob would do now.
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Jacob Underwood
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I decided not to wait any longer. I slid pictures of Max I'd taken after I'd beaten him to a pulp under her door. He was alive when I left him, but he wouldn't be too much longer.

"Open the door, my love," I said in a calm voice. "Or I can guarantee that Max will suffer much more than that."
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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I picked up the pictures and looked at them and gasped horrified. I couldn't believe it was my Max in the pictures the man I loved. I gently touched them and got tears in my eyes."Jacob you sick freak you raped me now you hurt the man I love when will you just go to hell"I yell through the door.
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Jacob Underwood
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"He's still alive," I told her. "For how long depends on you. Open the door, my love. Let me see you again."
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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I grab a bat that Max left at my dorm one day. I pulled open the door and held it up."Don't even come near me you freak where is Max? I want to know now and when I find him I will hunt you down and kill you"I growl out.
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Jacob Underwood
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"Do you think I'm a fool?" I asked. "Max is somewhere where he can't cause trouble. You can call and have him taken to the hospital while we're on our way out of town."
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"Why do you want me someone that can't stand you"I say and growl out. I back up so he can't get closer to me."I hate you Jacob can't you understand that I wish you were dead."
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"Don't say that, baby," I said as I inched closer. "I could always go back and finish Max off if that's what you want. I'll split his skull like a watermelon if that's what it takes."
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"No don't you dare hurt Max"I yelled at him."He is ten times the man you are. You can never be like him ever"I say and stare into his eyes and the hate shines out through my eyes.
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"Put the bat down, Jane," I told her. "And maybe I'll take you to see him one last time before I take you away from this place."
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"How can I trust you?"I said to him still holding the back."I don't trust you Jacob I know you would hurt Max in a heart beat. And how does it feel that the only reason I would go with you wasn't cause I wanted to be with you, just to save Max. You won't touch me if I go with you"I growl out.
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Max Brady
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"I love you," Jacob told her as he reached his hand out for her. "Put the bat down and give me a kiss."


I felt cold, and my entire body was in pain. I could tell I was in my underwear before I opened my eyes as much as I could. My left eye was swollen shut. I looked around through blurred vision and couldn't tell where I was, but I knew I was tied up, and I was outside. I had to get out of this and find Jane, she was in trouble.
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"No I won't kiss you"I said disgusted. If he thought he would willingly get a kiss or a touch or a smile from me he is wrong. He would never get that from me at all not even if he was the last man on earth."Just take me to Max so I can see him and kiss him one last time."
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Jacob Underwood
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"No," I told her. "I think I'll just give you time to think over your situation. Max has at least a day or two before he freezes to death. I made sure he was less than dressed for the occasion. I hear it's supposed to get really chilly tonight."
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"You asshole you would let him die. I didn't know you were this must of a monster"I said heatly."You know you will never have my heart now or ever, Max has it. Just as you forcefuly took my virginity I gave myself to him willingly."
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Jacob Underwood
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"Jane, can't you see that I love you?" I asked. "You'll see that Max means nothing to you. What he can give you? He has no money, no class. I can give you the world. Just take my hand and go away with me."
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"He can give me love true love real love, he is my soul mate Jacob not you. Why do you insisit on ruining my life and not letting anyone else have me"I demanded. I threw the bat down and glared at him hard and cross my arms over my chest."Money means nothing to me because you know what I would rather be happy then have money."
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Jacob Underwood
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I reached out and gently touched her arm.

"I'll take you to see Max, only if you tell him it's all over between the two of you. You're mine, Jane, and no one else's."
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"Fine I will go with you but you will never have me"I looked directly into his eyes."I love Max he will always have my heart and to have my body you have to rape me each time.And I will go with you just to save Max and no other reason."
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Jacob Underwood
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I got closer and brushed my lips onto hers.

"If that's what it takes to be with you, then maybe I'll just do you right there in front of Max," I told her. "Let him see how a real man handles a woman. Now, let's go out to my car and I'll take you see to see your little whore one last time."
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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When he pressed his lips against mine I didn't do anything back. I glared him when he pulled back and wiped my lips off."You make me sick but I love Max and will do anything to save him. Take me to him then and I want to make sure he is okay and kiss him one last time. And if you touch me in front of him I will hurt you so bad you won't be able to walk ever ever again."
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Jacob Underwood
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I laughed as I looked at her. "Behave yourself, or I'll kill Max without a thought."
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