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Max attn Jane
Topic Started: Mar 19 2007, 05:01 AM (575 Views)
Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"I wish I knew you were this psycho when I met you so I could of avoided you. I guess your just jealous Max has my heart and you never will"I said to him. I was so mad and upset and worried I didn't have any idea what to do."When my mom finds out you have me you will be sorry."
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"By the time she finds out, she'll never find us," I said as I took her by the arm and took her to my car. I drove her far outside of town into a heavily wooded area, where I had Max chained to a tree. "There's your boyfriend. Say goodbye because this is the last time you'll ever see him."
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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I got out of the car and ran up to Max and hugged him and kissed him softly on the lips."Oh Max I never meant for this to happen. I love you so much"I whisper and stroke his face and stare into his eyes."Tell mom who has me she will find me and bring me back to you I promise you that. Oh Max I love you so much only you and no one else has my heart and soul never anyone else but you."
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Max Brady
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"Jane?" I asked. My vision was blurred and I was freezing. "Am I dead?"
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"No your not"I whispered and caressed his face. I slipped a note into his boxers so they would find it and and it explain who had me and stuff."But I need you to remember that I am with Jacob tell my mother please she will find me. I love you Max"I said starting to cry and I reach out and lift his face up and kiss him softly on the lips.
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Max Brady
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"I'm sorry," I said, trying not to pass out. "I should have protected you better. THis is my fault."

"Alright, that's enough," Jacob said as he took Jane's arm. "Time to say goodbye to this little bastard."

Jacob punched Max hard across the face.

"Think you can steal my girl? Think you can be the man she needs?"

Jacob punched Max again and again.
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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I screamed and grabbed Jacob's arm and pulled it on."Stop it leave him alone you have done enough you asshole. If you touch him again I will make you sorry and hurt myself, despite how sick you are I know you don't want that. So step away from Max right now, because like I said he will always have my heart. And Max it isn't your fault what happened you did the best you could to protect me and I love you even more for it."
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Max Brady
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I tried to stay awake, but I felt myself heading into the darkness. I had to help Jane, but I had no way to do it.

"You can call for help when we're out of town," Jacob told her. "Take a last look, Jane. This is the last time you'll be seeing Max."
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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I looked at Max tears running down my cheeks. I memorized his face and saw something on the ground and i opend it and starte to cry harder."He was going to ask me to marry him"I whispered. I took the ring out of the box and slipped in my pocket and glared hatefully at Jacob."If he dies I will make your life a living hell."
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Max Brady
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Jacob laughed as he kissed her roughly. "You're nothing without me, Jane. Now, get in the car, we're going."

Jacob punched Max one last time. "He's the one who's going to hell."

"Jane," I said weakly. "I love you."
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"Max I love you to"I called out to him as the car door was slammed in my face. I laid my face against the glass and just watched him, I knew for the rest of my life or however long I was going to be gone that Max would always be on my mind that I would always love him.
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Jacob Underwood
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I drove the car to the airport. I had no intention of letting call for help to save Max. He was going to die in the woods, then Jane's love would be all mine.
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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At the airport I looked at Jacob and held out my hand."Let me call for the ambulance now"and when he didn't give the phone I glared at him."I swear if you don't let me call I will scream right here in the crowd and draw so much attention to us and tell everyone who I am and who you are and tell them you are kidnapping me."
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Jacob Underwood
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"Say one word and I'll call my friend in Westland and have him slit Max's throat," I told her. "He can either die bleeding, or he can freeze. The choice is yours. Either way, Max is dead."
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Max Brady
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"Jesus," Micheal said as he looked at Max. "Is he-?"

Sly felt Max's pulse. "He's alive, but he's freezing. Help me unchain him. We've got to get him to the hospital. I've got some blankets in the car, go get them and call 911. Hurry!"
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Micheal Quartermaine
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I got the blankets and called ahead to the hospital, telling them we were bringing Max in, and how bad of a condition he was in. I got back to them and put the blanket around Max's shoulders.

"Have to... help Jane," Max weakly said.

"What?" Sly asked.

"The airport," Max said before he passed out.

"Shit," I said. "Sly, get Max to the hospital. I'll go to the airport and see if I can find out what's going on."

I helped Sly put Max into his car and we both rushed off. I sped to the airport and started looking around for Jane.
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"Your a piece of shit"I growl out. I give him a hateful look."You know I won't do anything to hurt Max you know that. And everyday I am away from him I will pray you die so I can get back to him. And him and my mother will work together to find me, since she is the head of Crane Industires you can't hide me for long."
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Micheal Quartermaine
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"Jane!" I shouted as I spotted her. "Jane, it's Micheal!"

"Ignore him and keep walking," Jacob told her.
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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I look down as I walk and start to cry. My hand went into my jeans pocket and gripped the ring in my hand. I wanted to scream out to Micheal to let him know I don't want to go that I wanted to kill the man next to him."Enjoy this while it last because I will see you die before its all over."
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Micheal Quartermaine
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I caught up with them, and was out of breath.

"Jane, it's Max," I told her. "Someone beat the hell out of him and left him in the woods. Me and Sly found him and took him to the hospital. He's in bad shape, Jane. We have to go to him."

"No, she doesn't," Jacob said as he looked at Micheal. "We're on our way out town, now get lost."
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"Please Micheal tell Max that I love him. Please this is for him not because I want to"I say and look at Micheal. I would never stop loving him."Please tell look after him for me, let him know he is always on my mind and heart."
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Micheal Quartermaine
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"Jane, what's going on?" I asked. "Max could be dying."

Jacob sighed and pulled a gun out and held it to Micheal's back.

"You're coming with us," Jacob said. "I'll figure out what to do with you later. Now both of you are coming with me to my private plane. Start walking, junior."

Jacob led them to his private plane and forced them in. He bound Micheal's hands and feet and tossed him to the floor. "I presume this little prick is a friend of yours, too?"
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"Yes he is please don't hurt him Jacob"I said and looked at Micheal then him. I sat in a seat and pulled my legs up to my chest and wrapped my arms around them."I can't stand you Jacob and if you even want me to be nice to you, your going about it the wrong way. Hurting my friends and Max make me hate you even more."
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Jacob Underwood
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"Why do you say things like that?" I asked. "Max is probably dead by now. Do I really have to kill your other friend as well? We're going to awfully high up. It'll be a shame if he fell from the plane without a parachute."

"You're insane," Micheal said. "Max is going to pull through, and when he does, the cops are going to be all over you."
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"Please Jacob don't"I pleaded with him."Micheal has nothing to do with this so let him go"I said and looked up at him. She wrapped my legs tighter around my legs almost trying to pull into myself.
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