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Jacob & Jane's new life
Topic Started: Jun 4 2007, 02:50 PM (232 Views)
Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"He has been told that but also I have been told by women I am lucky to be with him."I knew I couldn't hide my feelings in my voice. I did not agree when peple said that I was lucky to have him.
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Max Brady
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"A man like that doesn't deserve such beauty," I said as I looked across the room. Jacob was coming back and he looked annoyed. I leaned in and whispered in Jane's ear in my regular voice so she'd know who I was. "A man named Spinelli's going to come for you and get you to safety when the time comes. Go with him and do what he says. I love you, Jane."

Before she could say anything, I disappeared into the crowd and left the room to find Spinelli so we could start the next part of the plan.

"It was a prank call," Jacob said as he returned to Jane. "If I catch that punk who tricked me... Jane, are you alright?"
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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I watched where Max dissappered I knew he would come after. I just knew that he would find away to get me away from Jacob. I put a tight smile on my face and glanced up at Jacob."I am fine Jacob."
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Jacob Underwood
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"Let's dance," I told her. "I have a very special surprise for you shortly."


Max found Spinelli. "She's... just like I remembered her."

"Don't worry, heroic one," Spinelli said as he put his hand on Max's shoulder. "You'll be in your true love's arms again soon. Just say the word."


"Soon," Max replied. "For now we wait."
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"Jacob I said I didn't want anymore suprises"I said and looked at him. I went in his arms without a word I got good at acting. I could always hide things so well.
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Max Brady
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I watched Jacob dancing with Jane, and my blood boiled. I just need the right moment to move in and get Jane back.


"I love you, Jane," Jacob told her. "We're going to have a long and happy life together. You and me and our baby."
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"I hope you know that the most important person to me in this world is mybaby no one else"I said and gave him a look. By no means would I tell him I love him back or make him even think I did or ever will.
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Jacob Underwood
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We continued dancing as I held Jane close. It was around ten o'clock when I decided to reveal my surprise. I took the ring from my pocket and got everyone's attention.

"Jane, will you marry me?" I asked as I got down on one knee.
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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I looked at him and looked around. She bit her lower lip knoiwng she couldn't say yes to him."I.. I am sorry Jacob I am just not ready to marry you."
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Max Brady
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"It was a rhetorical question," Jacob whispered to her. "You don't have a choice. Just smile and say yes."


I got ready to move. It was now or never. I couldn't let my girl suffer anymore than she already had. It'd taken forever to track her to this place, and I wasn't about to lose her again.
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"Fine yes"I whisper and look down. I couldn't put on a smile I was unable to, it was not in me.
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Max Brady
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"We're going to Paris tonight," Jacob told her. "We'll be married there, then we'll check out boarding schools for the baby. I know he won't be old enough to attend for about twelve years, but it's never too early to check them out."


"Go get her, heroic one," Spinelli said as he patted Max's shoulder. He put on his mask and hat and headed to the ballroom.
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"I will not, will not send my child away for school. I want my child with me even when they are old enough to go school"I glare at him.
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Max Brady
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"It's cute the way you think you have any say in these matters," Jacob said as he took her hand.

"Get your hands off that lady," I shouted as I jumped off the second floor and grabbed a rope, landing safely in the middle of the room. "You've insulted the lady's honor, and I'm here to defend it."

"Oh, you've got to be kidding me," Jacob said.
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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I recognized the voice and looked over at Max then back at Jacob. I knew I was not dreaming it was Max he really did come for me.
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Max Brady
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"It's you," Jacob said. "ALright, this time I'm just going to dismember you and make sure you don't come back."

Jacob grabbed a sword off a display from the wall. "I'm an expert swordsman, trained by the best Europe had to offer."

"Heroic one!" Spinelli shouted as he tossed a sword down from the second floor. I picked it up. All I had was a lifetime of watching sword fighting in movies.

"Prepare to be gutted," Jacob said.

"How do you prepare for something like that?" I asked.
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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I moved back and just stared at the scene in front of me. It was surreal a sword fight in todays world."Be careful Max he is telling the truth"I call out.
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Max Brady
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"Come on," Jacob said as he held his sword out. "Unless you're scared."

"I'm never scared when Jane's around," I replied as he ran at me with his sword. I blocked as the people started to applaud, apparently thinking it was some of show.

Spinelli came up to Jane and took her arm. "The heroic one wanted me to get you to safety."
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"Will he be okay? Does Max have any training whatsoever?"I asked following the boy that had my arm. If Max trusted him I would turst him to.
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Max Brady
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"Well... no," Spinelli told her. "I've known Max most of my life, and he's never even touched a sword. But don't worry, he won't let the evil one win. He's been dreaming of this day for months. He just wants his lady love out of the line of fire. Hey, you're with child. Is it the heroic one's or the evil one's?"


Our swords continued clashing, and I was barely holding my own, but I couldn't let him take Jane from me again. I wouldn't let her go again, and I was going to make sure her child had a loving father, wether it was mine or not.
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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"I... I am not sure who the father is"I admited to the guy holding my arm."I hope it is Max though I really do."
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Max Brady
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"Don't worry, I'm sure the heroic one will love this baby all the same," Spinelli assured her.


"Give up?" Jacob asked as he swung his sword.

"Never," I replied as I continued to block. He swung and I ducked, and he ended up beheading a statue. We continued our sword fight, and somehow wound up out on the patio.
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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I watched and bit my bottom lip. I just kept praying that Max would be okay. I gasped when they went out of sight and I went to run for the door.
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Max Brady
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Our swords continued clashing until he finally knocked the sword out of my hand and held it to my throat.

"Now, Mr. Brady, it's time to die," Jacob said as he rushed his sword forward, but Max ducked as he fell onto the railing overlooking a cliff. Max grabbed him and was tempted to just let him fall to his death.

"Oh, I can't do it." I said as I pulled him up. I couldn't kill a man.

"Good man," Jacob said. "But guess what? I can."

Jacob grabbed me and tried to force me over the railing, which was a good two hundred foot drop.
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Jane Lopez-Fitzgerald Crane
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I screamed and tried to break free from Spinelli. I had to get to Max he needed me and I need him."Jacob no please no"I screamed out.
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