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Let's make a story; DON'T END IT
Topic Started: Jun 13 2005, 09:55 PM (487 Views)
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Just keep adding on to the story, I'll start

Peter was a loner who had no friends, his only friend was his brother. One night he and his brother got in a fight. So peter left the house, and didn't come back for a week. When he returned the lawn was grown out which was weird because peter's brother mowed it everyday. Peter went up to the door and knocked, nobody answered. He waited for 10 seconds and knocked again, still no answer. A minute passed by and there was still no answer. Peter wondered why there wasn't an answer, his bro's car was there, and so was his bike. Peter decided to go to the window to his brother's room and check it out. When he got to the window, peter let out a scream. There in the room was his brother, dead. He was stabbed multiple times in the chest and on the wall was a message written in his brother's blood it said, " You're next"

now someone else continue the story
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Peter got so scared and try to run away. He almost tripped over the mower. When he looked up a girl was staring at him. "Hello!" Said the girl. Peter crawled back. "Who are you?" He was shaken all over. "I'm Vanessa, what happened you look scared?"
Peter was still shaken: "I am Peter... brother...dead!"
"Huh?"
"My brother is dead!" Screamed Peter. "And now they're after me!"

Vanessa pulled him up: "We should go to the police then!"

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whent hey turned up to the police station peter notcied that there was a poster on the notice bored saying that 'there is a missing girl and that she has been missng since 1959... the girl's name is vaneesa please contact this numbe' peter looked blanked faced and went to the sergant and said that his brother has been killed and that there is something chasing him...
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after he told the sergent about his brother, the sergant just laughed and said " its ok, your next so dont worry" peter was shocked and he ran out the station. it wa raining now and peter ran to his house. when he got there the front door was open and his brother's body wa gone... peter ran to the car and drove off in to town, then behinde him was a dented old truck and he was gaing speed and it started pusing into the back of peter's car, and then peter was driven off the road and crashed into a tree. the truck vanished...
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Peter woke up in a strange house. He wore a strange pyjama and he lay in a strange bed. Next to him sat Vanessa. "How do you feel, you have been out for 3 days?"
Peter touched his head and then asked: "Why did you leave me at the police station?"
Vanessa smiled: "You ran in, you were to fast for me, what happened, cause I found your car on the side of the road."

"The sergant, he said I was next, then I went back to my brothers house. The body was gone, when I wanted to leave a truck pushed me from the road, that was the last thing I remembered before crashing into that three!"

Vanessa pushed him back in the pillow. "It's over now, take some rest while I make some chickensoup for you!"
La Pussycat:Only people with no imagination hide in reality!

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Starfleet Liason/Head of Iris Aliance
Starbase Executive Officer

Captain Daniella Le Williams
CO USS Siberia
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Taskforce 412 The Zodiacs

Major Ellis Sheppard
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while vanessa was in the kitchen, peter had a vison (preminition) about the tuck and he saw another car being chased and falling over the cliff and the the vision stopped and vanessa came back, peter said he had a vision about as car going over a cliff and vanessa said "dont be silly abd eat your soup" after he ate the soup he fell asleep and when he woke up vanessa was gone and he was alone ina strange house
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Peter walked around. Not knowing what he had to do. In the kitchen he found a note on the fridge. Peter, don't go anywhere, I'll be right back! Vanessa. He looked outside the kitchenwindow. Where did she go? He thought to himself. Then he noticed the guy outside at the barn. He had an axe on his shoulder. He was looking at Peter. Peter stepped back and ran out of the kitchen. He grabbed the phone to call the police, the voice on the other side of the line just said: "You're next!" The voice was hollow and scary. Suddenly the connection was broken. He looked up and saw the guy standing infront of him. Peter moved scared backwards.
The guy put his axe down. "So you're Vanessa's new guy? I am John, her brother."
Peter couldn't bring out a word. He just continued: "She already said you would be a bit shy." He went to the kitchen. "Would you like somethinge to drink?"
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Starfleet Liason/Head of Iris Aliance
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Captain Daniella Le Williams
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Major Ellis Sheppard
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once peter got his drink they both sat down and had a long talk, then peter heard a noise coming from out side but all he could see was a field and thats it. then he noticed a scarecrow in the field it was holding a scythe and it was covered in crows.
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John followed his look. "Ah, the old scarecrow, I think the crows fancy it now!" he got up and left for the kitchen, thus the phone rang. Peter looked at it. "Can you pick it up!"Asked John from the kitchen.
La Pussycat:Only people with no imagination hide in reality!

Vice-Admiral Talim Meran
CO USS Revelations
Starfleet Liason/Head of Iris Aliance
Starbase Executive Officer

Captain Daniella Le Williams
CO USS Siberia
Sirenfleet Taskforce Executive Officer
Taskforce 412 The Zodiacs

Major Ellis Sheppard
XO USS Ottawa
Bravofleet, TF 17 IGOR
Taskgroup Ulysee

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when he answered the phone there was a crackling noise and all he could hear was "your (crackle) next" then the phone went dead. john said who was it and peter said " wrong number" then peter noticed the scarecrow was missing and told john that the scarecrow was gone, al john said " the crows must of bitten through the ropes.
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then a crow came smashing through the window and then up the chimeny, then five seconds later the scarecrow jumped through and swung a blade and sliced john open and then jumped back out. Peter was shocked of what happened and rushed over to see John was dead. :CRYING
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Peter grabbed the phone to call the cops but it was dead, so he ran out the house and there was nothing insight. So he ran the John's truck and he drove to the nearest town. On the way he had a blow out and so he thought F*** this and he ran alongside the road. when he got to the nearest town it was like it was deserted and no-one was living there. he went to the police station and it was empty. He went back out to the road and there was the scarecrow standing there and then Peter stood in front of him. It looked like it was an old western shoot out but it wasnt. the scarecrow began charging towards Peter weilding a big blade stained in blood and it got closer and closer and then...


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... then the scarecrow lowered his knife and said in a high voice:"You're next, Peter!"
Peter was frozen with fear and couldn't move a muscle and that's why he couldn't run away. But he had recognized the voice. "Vanessa?"He asked.
The scarecrow 'Vanessa' clinched her fist around the knife: "You're right, I am surprised you didn't notice earlier."

"But you killed your own brother!"

"He is not my brother, well he was, when I was still Vanessa!"

"When you were still Vanessa?"

(This story is getting a bit complicated, how will it go now)
La Pussycat:Only people with no imagination hide in reality!

Vice-Admiral Talim Meran
CO USS Revelations
Starfleet Liason/Head of Iris Aliance
Starbase Executive Officer

Captain Daniella Le Williams
CO USS Siberia
Sirenfleet Taskforce Executive Officer
Taskforce 412 The Zodiacs

Major Ellis Sheppard
XO USS Ottawa
Bravofleet, TF 17 IGOR
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