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| Warrior Poet | Friday, 3. December 2010, 18:57 Post #1 |
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If you lead me, I will go.
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And I don't have to explain what it's about, either. Aspen shade fights off the stars in a sky deep and knowing The great trees' understanding offers comfort and solace as I gaze into the night Beneath the air enchanting lies a lonely heart and a dusted path The promise at the end is all men seek As the path to the elves is long and winding Though perils reside and shadows persist It offers the life to keep on living The sunrise offers light to every sword, the fight to love reflects to the faces Knights on journeys, lives not wasted Far from home, where I belong, the dragon's blood awaits Scarlet pride in death and life Drawing ever closer, she fills my arms and holds my heart My every thought reminds of her touch And the magic is never too strong Lacing love with ancient words The fight cannot end Beholding strength inside the pages The dust of one more story Another hero's ending One more restless empty morning Cannot end my quest I live my life a fantasy |
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| James | Tuesday, 7. December 2010, 03:46 Post #2 |
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it's all cool
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I didn't think it would end like that, or so quickly. </3 I'm sad now.
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| Warrior Poet | Tuesday, 7. December 2010, 04:11 Post #3 |
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Yeah, I probably should have let it go on longer. But it was actually supposed to be all beautiful and enticing and then just end. This poem is about three things. 1. It's about closing a fantasy book. Spoiler: click to toggle 2. It's about standing on my conviction. The last line: "I live my life a fantasy." Spoiler: click to toggle 3. It is also about some other third thing. I'll leave that up to you. Yeah, I'm sad now too. Thanks for the reply, though. |
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| Harket | Saturday, 18. December 2010, 04:48 Post #4 |
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Thats was really, really touching. I'm not going to say it was good, although it was, because i dont think you wrote this poem for people to read. Did you write this for yourself? To promise yourself something? I was even more touched when i read what its about and why you wrote it. God made you special in your own way, God blessed you with skills that only you have. I really - really can't say much about this, because its something between you, your life and God. There only one verse i would like to tell you now. I think its my favourite verse. Trust in the Lord with all your heart, and lean not on your own understanding. In all your ways, acknowledge Him, and He will make your paths straight. Proverbs 3:5-6. God bless you on your onward quest and journey in a life that will be full and make a difference, because He is honored and ever-present in your life. |
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| Warrior Poet | Saturday, 18. December 2010, 05:09 Post #5 |
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Thanks, sweetie. Well, I was promising myself, and God, but it was written for Riona. Now, I haven't met her yet, but when I do, I'm showing this to her. Thanks for that verse, too. I've memorized it, but reading it again did me good. And thanks for the blessing, too! I really appreciate it. |
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| Harket | Saturday, 18. December 2010, 05:25 Post #6 |
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No problem, glad to help or whatnot. <3 |
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I didn't think it would end like that, or so quickly. </3 I'm sad now.

2:30 PM Jul 11