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Coughing Up Blood; Repost. Extremely weird.
Topic Started: Friday, 3. December 2010, 19:08 (177 Views)
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If you lead me, I will go.
Er....I don't even remember what this one was about, originally. I wrote it...how long ago?

Ere breaking the lines we stood
Taking in the sight before us

Dare they behold Excalibur
Cutting through the very sunlight
Innately satisfied
Fulfilling its design

Anon I realized
What was the gain if I won?

Nevertheless the sword called

The clouds broke, the storm swirled
Bitter rain slicks the ground
Scarlet with the tears of their hearts

If I should fall, it's all for naught
naught which makes it worth

If those who live by the sword
Die by the sword

Then who am I protecting?

Let thy shield guard thee faithfully
Better faith than thine in me

What's the gain to be a king
Run through by hatred and rust

As Mordred's ashes return to dust
What little breath is left to us

What folly to think Avalon was safe
Does running from wonds bring them farther away?

The sound of battle is chaos to my ears
Ere I realized why I fought
How was I to ask
"What have I wrought?"
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James
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o.o ... wow, nice. :)

lol, I am so good at constructive crits, lemme tell ya.

But um... Good job!
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Harket
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That didnt make sense in a it made sense way. But i'm still having Riona aftereffects, so i'm not really gonna do anything 'cept say this was actually really good. :)
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Warrior Poet
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Meh, it doesn't actually make any sense to me either. Something about King Arthur and inconsistency.
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How very nice. :P Nvm, it sounded cool. :D
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