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| Tweet Topic Started: Sunday, 26. December 2010, 05:53 (64 Views) | |
| Deleted User | Sunday, 26. December 2010, 05:53 Post #1 |
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Decorate the Christmas Tree Til it sparkles beautifully Gingerbread and cookies we're happy Everyone is smiling Celebrate the newborn King Its almost midnight Dont open the presents! But there's one person missing from the bunch She's dressed in a tu-tu with ballet slippers on.... Everyone forgot the little ballerina See how she dances in a fit. Tries to grasp the attention of the people but everyone just says "Quit Quit" See how she flies in midair Jumping with extreme care. Daredevil moves She doesnt wanna lose. Until she falls out of balance She has the blues. Everyone forgot the little ballerina See how she cries in a fit She grasped the attention of the people Now she's shower by hugs and a kiss See how i punched the little ballerina! made her cry to our mommy. Stupid brat shouldnt be dancing wildly Its my birthday! Attention's on me. >:( |
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| Warrior Poet | Sunday, 26. December 2010, 07:11 Post #2 |
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So your birthday is on Christmas? Sweet. Also, meaniehead. I think. That was pretty good there. It felt deeper than maybe it was supposed to, with you stressing "everyone forgot the little ballerina." But maybe you did put some more meaning into it. Regardless, it did make me think for a while. That touched me. Especially since i've got more than one friend who's into ballet who would probably appreciate this. It was really good. |
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| Harket | Sunday, 26. December 2010, 07:27 Post #3 |
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WHOO CHRISTMAS BIRTHDAYYYYY! Also, i quite liked the description of teh ballerina and all. Have you ever written a poem on dance? I think you'll rock it
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| Cow! | Sunday, 26. December 2010, 22:17 Post #4 |
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hahaha, this made my day ![]() Also, I totally used to be the little brallerina bea. |
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| Deleted User | Monday, 27. December 2010, 19:04 Post #5 |
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:O oh nu, its not my birthday, i was born July 10th, i wrote this after these 2 little girls i'm slightly related to (great uncle by marriage's sister's daughters) and Ellie's birthday is on Christmas. She's eldest at 8. and Kerianna (kerry) is 5. they always struggle to grab attention from the crowd from each other, they're always fighting. I was just observing one of their accidents. and lol...i didnt think i tried to put any deepness in it, i was just saying how sisters fight. but thankz, guys <3 Merry Late Christmas! |
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| Harket | Tuesday, 28. December 2010, 04:03 Post #6 |
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Aww, how cute! They both do ballet? Whose birthday was it? |
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Have you ever written a poem on dance? I think you'll rock it





and lol...i didnt think i tried to put any deepness in it, i was just saying how sisters fight.
2:30 PM Jul 11