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BallerinaBattle?; i made this for Kerry. and Ellie. lol sisters r funny <3
Topic Started: Sunday, 26. December 2010, 05:53 (64 Views)
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Decorate the Christmas Tree
Til it sparkles beautifully
Gingerbread and cookies
we're happy
Everyone is smiling
Celebrate the newborn King
Its almost midnight
Dont open the presents!

But there's one person missing from the bunch
She's dressed in a tu-tu
with ballet slippers on....

Everyone forgot the little ballerina
See how she dances in a fit.
Tries to grasp the attention of the people
but everyone just says "Quit Quit"

See how she flies in midair
Jumping with extreme care.
Daredevil moves
She doesnt wanna lose.
Until she falls out of balance
She has the blues.

Everyone forgot the little ballerina
See how she cries in a fit
She grasped the attention of the people
Now she's shower by hugs and a kiss

See how i punched the little ballerina!
made her cry to our mommy.
Stupid brat shouldnt be dancing wildly
Its my birthday!
Attention's on me. >:(

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So your birthday is on Christmas? Sweet. Also, meaniehead. I think.

That was pretty good there. It felt deeper than maybe it was supposed to, with you stressing "everyone forgot the little ballerina." But maybe you did put some more meaning into it. Regardless, it did make me think for a while. That touched me. Especially since i've got more than one friend who's into ballet who would probably appreciate this. It was really good.
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WHOO CHRISTMAS BIRTHDAYYYYY!

Also, i quite liked the description of teh ballerina and all. :) Have you ever written a poem on dance? I think you'll rock it ;)
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hahaha, this made my day :D

Also, I totally used to be the little brallerina bea.
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:O oh nu, its not my birthday, i was born July 10th, i wrote this after these 2 little girls i'm slightly related to (great uncle by marriage's sister's daughters) and Ellie's birthday is on Christmas. She's eldest at 8. and Kerianna (kerry) is 5. they always struggle to grab attention from the crowd from each other, they're always fighting. I was just observing one of their accidents.
xD and lol...i didnt think i tried to put any deepness in it, i was just saying how sisters fight.
:) but thankz, guys <3 Merry Late Christmas!

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Aww, how cute! They both do ballet? Whose birthday was it?
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