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| Harket | Wednesday, 29. December 2010, 11:54 Post #1 |
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Because of how you took the blame Because of how you ran away Because of how you pushed me down Because of how you fooled around Because of how you made me smile Because of how you saw me through Because of how you then backed down Because of how you stood your ground Because of how you cast your spells Because of how your curse i dread Because of how you drive me mad Because you were a selfless man Because you did all that you could Because you would do more - you would Because you stabbed me thorough and through Because you broke my heart in two Because you confuse and make me hurt Because you danced the dance of flirt Because you left me crying there Because you picked me up and stayed Because you threw me down and left Because you had the final stand Because you used sweet honeyed words Left the rudder of my heart unmanned. Well, that was... weird. I wrote this in a really short time. ;D And don't worry, its not real. Honest!
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| Warrior Poet | Wednesday, 29. December 2010, 22:56 Post #2 |
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Well, good to hear it's not real! Although this thing made basically no sense - At first I thought it was about some bully, and then a good friend, and then possibly Jesus, and then some weird romancer type, and now I'm totally not sure at all. No idea whatsoever lol. Also, you started every line but the last with "because" but never actually said what happened because of what he did. Most of these were dependent clauses not attatched to an independent - you know, "because you made me laugh." Well, what's supposed to be before the word "because?" |
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| Harket | Thursday, 30. December 2010, 15:57 Post #3 |
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Lets edit my words. It's not real - for me. Not all of it, anyway. It was kind of written... for somebody. Kind of a love thing, but toward more then one person. And more then one type of love. I was there for this person who experienced this the whole way thorough, so. Yea. |
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