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Click-track; Just playing with words. Whee!
Topic Started: Wednesday, 12. January 2011, 03:07 (93 Views)
Jessie
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Click-track

Boom. Click.

Tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk
Taunt the tempo tantalizing
Tearing trying tap surprising
Tapered tricky town to tower
Tick a tackle's titan hour

Purpose pick a pickle's pieces
Prior pumpkin paper ceases
Pile package picky piston
Past a penny pound of listen leery loser lively laundry limber lost.

Click.
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Warrior Poet
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If you lead me, I will go.
I was laughing within the first three lines!

This is simply amazing. For a random poem, this is pretty thought out!

I think it would be even better if the poem's name was "Wikipedia."
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Jessie
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Haha thanks xD Maybe I'll make another one later and name it that.
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Yayy, this is awesomely fun to read. :)
Birds don't like to fly, they have to fly.
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Jessie
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Thanks Sweetdang! That's probably because it was awesomely fun to write. :)
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I liked all the Ts. :)
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Jessie
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Yep. =D Though if you were to read it out loud you'd probably spit all over everything.
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I tried to read it out loud... It's a tongue-twister xD
"Behind every successful woman is a substantial amount of coffee." <--Good thing I love it!
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NO I READ IT TO MY FRIEND. ;DDDD
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