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Feel that?
Topic Started: Saturday, 29. January 2011, 14:43 (85 Views)
Phovos
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Medicating Raptor
Feel that, mon ami?
Feel that sharp pain in your back?
Feel the blood come pouring out?
Hear the sound of death?
Smell your own blood?
Of course you do.
You know what's just happened.
You've been stabbed in the back.
By someone you thought was your friend.
Turns out I was a traitor.
Disguised as one of your own.
I've ruined your plans.
Messed with your mind.
Screwed you up.

Because I am a Spy.
I have a whole website. It's kinda lame though.
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mousely
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Lose.
xDD this made me think of Nathan Hale. You probably don't know who he is/was. He spied on the British during the American Revoltion. Anywho, I liked it. :) It interested me and when I read "You've been stabbed in the back" I understood what it was about. Then, I read it again. "Smell your own blood?" didn't seem right to me. I dunno. But it's good. :)
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Josheh
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stalker!!!!!!!
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Warrior Poet
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If you lead me, I will go.
They say you never hear the shot that kills you. But this wasn't a shot lol. What's the sound of death? You could make this a lot more gruesome if you felt like it.

Peace :P
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James
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it's all cool
Tehehehe that's amashing. :)
To protect the world from devastation.
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Sfabulous
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Sleepy Kat
I always get killed by spies. Poem was awesome though, made me laugh and fueled my hatred for spies :)
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James
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I reread this and was cackling in the living room. My parents gave me a funny look. :DD Wheee, good, good, good. ^-^
To protect the world from devastation.
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Harket
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Hear the sound of death? O.o

Because i am spy. You are epick. Epickness in itself. :D
Birds don't like to fly, they have to fly.
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