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| Phovos | Saturday, 29. January 2011, 14:43 Post #1 |
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Feel that, mon ami? Feel that sharp pain in your back? Feel the blood come pouring out? Hear the sound of death? Smell your own blood? Of course you do. You know what's just happened. You've been stabbed in the back. By someone you thought was your friend. Turns out I was a traitor. Disguised as one of your own. I've ruined your plans. Messed with your mind. Screwed you up. Because I am a Spy. |
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| mousely | Saturday, 29. January 2011, 17:44 Post #2 |
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xDD this made me think of Nathan Hale. You probably don't know who he is/was. He spied on the British during the American Revoltion. Anywho, I liked it. It interested me and when I read "You've been stabbed in the back" I understood what it was about. Then, I read it again. "Smell your own blood?" didn't seem right to me. I dunno. But it's good.
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| Josheh | Saturday, 29. January 2011, 20:46 Post #3 |
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stalker!!!!!!!
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| Warrior Poet | Saturday, 29. January 2011, 23:36 Post #4 |
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They say you never hear the shot that kills you. But this wasn't a shot lol. What's the sound of death? You could make this a lot more gruesome if you felt like it. Peace
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| James | Sunday, 30. January 2011, 00:30 Post #5 |
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it's all cool
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Tehehehe that's amashing.
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| Sfabulous | Sunday, 30. January 2011, 03:53 Post #6 |
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I always get killed by spies. Poem was awesome though, made me laugh and fueled my hatred for spies
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| James | Sunday, 30. January 2011, 20:15 Post #7 |
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I reread this and was cackling in the living room. My parents gave me a funny look. :DD Wheee, good, good, good. ^-^ |
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| Harket | Saturday, 5. February 2011, 06:50 Post #8 |
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Hear the sound of death? O.o Because i am spy. You are epick. Epickness in itself.
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It interested me and when I read "You've been stabbed in the back" I understood what it was about. Then, I read it again. "Smell your own blood?" didn't seem right to me. I dunno. But it's good.




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