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| Deleted User | Monday, 31. January 2011, 02:45 Post #1 |
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Strumming my guitar Looking at the stars and the bright moon It shines! See what i see? A world of possibilities and love and other things you see? Baby... I- just wanna keep my head in the clouds 'cuz that's where it belongs and i know i'll get along and Baby... I see the world as a big blue game with people dancin' round and singing "oh happy day" Be cool. Be cool. Just keep it right Just keep us tight oh Be cool. Be cool. Just keep it right Just keep us tight for me... Do-Do-Do-Do-Do~ Oh~ DaDaDa...DaDaDa. <3 |
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| Warrior Poet | Monday, 31. January 2011, 03:00 Post #2 |
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I liked it. I didn't expect to, but I did At first it seemed really cheesy, which it is, but as a power metal fan I can appreciate a certain level of cheese.Want to understand how you can cuddle and play guitar at the same time - I've tried and it doesn't work. Or maybe contemplating her love? W'ever What kind of music is this? To me it sounds like that "adult contemporary" nonsense, but I really have no idea.Basically, it was cute. I definitely know how you feel about having your head in the clouds. here's one of my favorite sentences:
I love fantasy, and there's something special about it. It touches the very deepest part of human longing, which is something that other literature simply can't do. Being hopelessly in love is a feeling I miss. Nice little diddy there
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| mousely | Monday, 31. January 2011, 03:09 Post #3 |
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WP i think it's more like Taylor Swift stuff. As mentioned, it's nice. Do you actually play guitar, or was that just something you decided to put in? |
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| Cow! | Monday, 31. January 2011, 14:20 Post #4 |
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CUUUTE. I actually heard it in my head sung by justin bieber, but feel free to pretend I never said that.
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| Harket | Saturday, 5. February 2011, 07:41 Post #5 |
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CUTE IS THE WORD FOR IT! Tswift. I insist.
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| Deleted User | Sunday, 6. February 2011, 07:24 Post #6 |
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thankz guys
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At first it seemed really cheesy, which it is, but as a power metal fan I can appreciate a certain level of cheese.
What kind of music is this? To me it sounds like that "adult contemporary" nonsense, but I really have no idea.






2:25 PM Jul 11