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Keep it right
Topic Started: Monday, 31. January 2011, 02:45 (82 Views)
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Strumming my guitar
Looking at the stars
and the bright moon
It shines!

See what i see?
A world of possibilities
and love
and other things
you see?

Baby...
I- just wanna keep my head in the clouds
'cuz that's where it belongs
and i know i'll get along
and Baby...
I see the world as a big blue game
with people dancin' round
and singing "oh happy day"
Be cool.
Be cool.
Just keep it right
Just keep us tight
oh
Be cool.
Be cool.
Just keep it right
Just keep us tight
for me...

Do-Do-Do-Do-Do~ Oh~
DaDaDa...DaDaDa. <3
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I liked it. I didn't expect to, but I did :) At first it seemed really cheesy, which it is, but as a power metal fan I can appreciate a certain level of cheese.

Want to understand how you can cuddle and play guitar at the same time - I've tried and it doesn't work. Or maybe contemplating her love? W'ever :P What kind of music is this? To me it sounds like that "adult contemporary" nonsense, but I really have no idea.

Basically, it was cute. I definitely know how you feel about having your head in the clouds. here's one of my favorite sentences:
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It's the honesty of these lands that makes me yearn for the past

I love fantasy, and there's something special about it. It touches the very deepest part of human longing, which is something that other literature simply can't do.

Being hopelessly in love is a feeling I miss. Nice little diddy there :)
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mousely
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WP i think it's more like Taylor Swift stuff. :)

As mentioned, it's nice. Do you actually play guitar, or was that just something you decided to put in?
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CUUUTE.

I actually heard it in my head sung by justin bieber, but feel free to pretend I never said that. -_-
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CUTE IS THE WORD FOR IT!

Tswift. I insist. :)
Birds don't like to fly, they have to fly.
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thankz guys ^_^
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