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| Tweet Topic Started: Tuesday, 8. February 2011, 17:41 (67 Views) | |
| JuJuBee | Tuesday, 8. February 2011, 17:41 Post #1 |
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I use you and feel nothing I feel you and use nothing You fill me and tear me apart You empty me and patch me up We work as one We're on opposing teams You meet me on equal grounds; you dominate me I catch you in the middle; I’m above you Nothing's the same It's always a monotone You fill my mind with worthless mumble I'm unaffected by the sounds you make I turn to you for refuge; you are my punishment You come to me for fulfillment--yet come away with none We are a team; we are enemies You are my addiction You are my death Right... Just read this again and realized it has a few cliches in it. *shrugs* Oh well. I'm posting it anyways. Feedback?
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| mousely | Wednesday, 9. February 2011, 00:43 Post #2 |
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Lose.
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That's a nice little poem..
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