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You and Me; Addiction o.O
Topic Started: Tuesday, 8. February 2011, 17:41 (67 Views)
JuJuBee
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I use you and feel nothing
I feel you and use nothing
You fill me and tear me apart
You empty me and patch me up
We work as one
We're on opposing teams
You meet me on equal grounds; you dominate me
I catch you in the middle; I’m above you
Nothing's the same
It's always a monotone
You fill my mind with worthless mumble
I'm unaffected by the sounds you make
I turn to you for refuge; you are my punishment
You come to me for fulfillment--yet come away with none
We are a team; we are enemies
You are my addiction
You are my death


Right... Just read this again and realized it has a few cliches in it. *shrugs* Oh well. I'm posting it anyways. Feedback? :)
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That's a nice little poem.. :)
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