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chicky's story ideas.; hihi.
Topic Started: Wednesday, 21. September 2011, 03:13 (158 Views)
YokoChikonoChii
The adorable asian kid from across the lane
:3 eyo it's Yoko.
I'm gonna put my story ideas right here. If you like/want to read dem, say "i likez" or something like that.
If you don't like it too much/doesn't sound original/just sucks, say "ewh" or something like that.
I'll probably post once a month or 2 times a month, idk.

here's 1st story.

Burn Wings

So this one is about an angel who's made it to heaven after being incarnated so many times on earth.
But there's a war between some angels that have been influenced by the devil and the good angels.
The explosive war blasts the little angel off Heaven and she slams back down to earth.
There, her angel wings turn into a feathered necklace and white hair dissappears and turns dark brown. She loses everything that would make her look holy.

There, she realizes she landed in a family's backyard. She meets the kids who think she's fallen from a tree or airplane, and she's taken into their home. The family is broken because the father died of cancer.
The mother, who is struggling to get by, takes the girl in.
and then a bunch of stuff happens where she's nice to people, blah blah, conflict, climax, solution. ;D surprise irony ending.

The Death of Ralph
this is actually a comedy.
Set in the 1870s London,this involves a young boy who's very curious and while playing in the overflowing cemetary, he falls into a grave that leads to the world of the dead.he meets friends and they help each other defeat an evil villian.

ok, dat's it. these are just fantasy type stories, i'm a very rounded writer xD kbai.
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The death of Ralph sounds interesting. Many children didn't make it past 5 years of age in Victorian England, and you could tie the story in with technological changes in the real world which makes life better for so many children. Maybe the evil villain is someone who wants to stop children from going to school or something?
I have a whole website. It's kinda lame though.
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YokoChikonoChii
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:D lol cool i'll try that >_< but i just had a writer's BRAINBOOM! and now my head's filled with ideas x3 please read my next story!
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