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untitled work; hi please read this. and comment. i'd love to know what you think.
Topic Started: Sunday, 17. February 2013, 04:05 (128 Views)
JayBeCreative84
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My sister and I were always together, my mother constantly reminds me. Demi was pretty much a boy back then. She liked wrestling in the mud, finding worms and beetles, helping dad with the yard work and even working on our skyflyer.
I miss her so much. It's been 3 years since she left to go to the Academy.
A school where the gifted, the mind movers, went to train. There, they master their powers and come back as individuals who can help their community instead of hurt it.
I do admit...she was a bit of a rebel before she left. At 12, she destroyed the town hall just by thinking it.
At 13, she demolished the school (on a saturday, thankfully) injuring 4, killing 2.
But i still love her. My role model, my best friend, my wonderful spunky sister...

She's coming back today.
Any moment now, she'll be gliding into the garage on the skyflyer, greeting us with a new bland attitude.
And i'll try my hardest to get her back to normal.

After all, what's a big sister for except for causing trouble?

Chapter 1: The Wretched Girl
Hazon wrote these last words into his journal before putting it in the special hiding place under the floorboard. He then laid down on his bed, staring up at the ceiling his sister had painted just for him.
"You're not crazy, Demi...you're just...misunderstood," he whispered to the stars inlaid across the painted night sky.

He sat up and looked out his large window.
A tiny dot appeared, growing larger and larger with each second.
Hazon squinted his eyes.

"No...that can't be her. She cant be thinking of flying through the window," the boy wondered.
He noticed the dot becoming a blob, then a form, then a person.

Panicked, Hazon unlatched the window just in time for-

BOOM! CLAMMER! KA-BLAM!!!

Demi crashed into the boy, causing them to slide across the wooden floor to the bookcase. A few books struck Hazon on the head.

"Owch! Demi, you crazy little-"Hazon screeched, then looked closely at his sister.

Her short fiery hair had grown out into long locks that caressed her face and shoulders. Her lips were red now, her freckles gone, her skin like porcelain.
She no longer had a child's figure. Her flat chest had grown plump, her hips apparent. Her outfit consisted of a wife beater,leather jacket, jeans and combat boots.

Hazon was at a loss for words. This grown woman could not be his lovable tomboy sister.

The girl blinked, laying on the ground, then cocked her head to the side.
"Hey,Haze! Why, haven't you grown up!" Demi exclaimed, then stood up, pulling him with her.
With the combat boots, the 2 were the same height.
"Oh, come here, big man," and with that, an embrace was shared. An awkward one, but still a lovely embrace.
Once that was done with, Demi yanked the sky glider from the window. Dusting her hands off, she looked around.
"So, uh, where's mum and da?"
"Uh...downstairs. Still waiting for you. It would've been better if you had used the garage," Hazon muttered, kicking his feet at the ground and looking down. He'd missed this girl so much, and now that she was here, he couldn't even look at her. Could he have really thought she wouldn't have changed this...drastically?
"Oh, whatever, Haze," Demi dismissed, opening the bedroom door to trot downstairs.
Hazon looked down still, biting his lip.

"...Well? Why are you just standing there like a dumbass?! Come on, i want food now!" Demi screamed, and with her mind pulled him to her in half a second.

Yep...That's definately Demi.

To Be Continued...
Edited by JayBeCreative84, Sunday, 17. February 2013, 05:27.
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Finally got a chance to read this, pretty cool so far. I like the dynamic between the siblings so far, especially like Demi (I have a thing for writing and reading about fairly amoral characters with infinite power) so I'll definitely be keeping up with this. Keep writing, it looks great!
You hear about that thing down in Samothrace?
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