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| Poems are a type of verbal art | |
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| Topic Started: Jun 21 2006, 03:07 AM (131 Views) | |
| kataro | Jun 21 2006, 03:07 AM Post #1 |
 
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poems are art and here;'s a poem i wrote What is Hell, what is heaven (guy 1) Hell they say its in the Earth, they say it is bad to go there. But what they dont know is... Hells where we and them live. Heaven people think its in the cloads, they are wrong its the same as hell, What we call life is Heaven and Hell they are diffrent yet the same thats what Heaven and Hell is. (guy 2) Cool. |
 
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| Sasaki Makie | Jun 21 2006, 03:08 AM Post #2 |
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Nice free verse there, KT...hehehe. |
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| kataro | Jun 21 2006, 03:14 AM Post #3 |
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thx im good at writing poems here's one my friends find realy dark Falling intop darkness Falling into darkness a sybol of death Death sends you to the real heaven or hell Its all darkness From one point to the next All Dark Many people here sit searching for light But only the mind can find light Think of light u picture darkness Light appears when you picture it in darkness Enything happens in darkness Even another death |
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| Sasaki Makie | Jun 21 2006, 04:15 AM Post #4 |
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Umm, can you do rhymes?...Free-verse gets old after a while...or why not try a haiku...:D |
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