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Sentrovasi	Jun 14 2007, 02:38 PM
White Night Posts: 278 Group: Dimension Warriors Member #1 Joined: June 3, 2007	I thought I'd make this thread to discuss most of the general Elements of my story. ... Bad pun, I know. That said, I guess most discussions about the story go here; any random thoughts and stuff like that as well. Things that have only a tenuous relationship... well, that's at your discretion. Might put it in a new topic if you want. Heck, flood. Well, following my latest chapter, Psyduck's said that some parts of my story seem too graphic... and both CWA and Psyduck have both commented on how dark it is. I'd be the first to admit that the graphic-ness and the dark elements are definitely present, but they're there for the express purpose of showing the extent to which the Tentor Fog and the Forgotten conduct their operations: these aren't the pseudoEvil teams like Team Rocket, or the failure-a-week nemeses in the Power Rangers series. However, I'll pose a question: should my story work towards becoming more humorous (which might be a little cliché), more dark, or should I eliminate one of the two altogether? If you've noticed, the balance has shifted towards less humourous and more dark after the initial chapters. So. Opinions? Anything else about the story you'd like to add would also be much appreciated =/


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