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| Sentrovasi | Jun 26 2007, 03:38 PM |
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White Night
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Well; it was pretty obvious from the beginning; I generally prefer mystery stories with red herrings... and there weren't hardly any here >_< That said, it's not a bad script... although stage directions are a little too sparse to be anything concrete. No other major problems, though =/ |
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1:24 PM Nov 26