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Psyduck Ranger	Jan 2 2009, 12:47 AM
Celebi's Guardian Posts: 1,106 Group: Dimension Warriors Member #2 Joined: June 3, 2007	So I've just read the latest chapter of DW, and wrote a rather extensive review, but then of course, one little mistake with the backspace key and you go to a completely different page, losing everything! Still, maybe it's better I put it here, more likely for Wrath to read it... To summarise: * There was always a chance you'd break-up, so if you weren't willing to keep writing Nick in that event you shouldn't have included him in the first place. I got over the person Melanie is based on a long time ago, but I never even considered removing the planned relationship between Jack and Melanie, because that would just completely screw up what has been shown of them so far. * As far as DW is concerned, this is completely out of the blue, Nick has never shown any of the behaviour described. Even in this very episode, Nick was still shown as a nice guy. * I completely sympathise with Nick and think Aly came off awfully there, in her own chapter. She breaks up with Nick because he misses his family and his home, and then later bitches about him. And Nick still clearly has feelings for her, based on his actions throughout the episode. * Too short. Could have been made longer by including adequate reasoning for the break-up, and exposition on the behaviour Nick is said to have portrayed. * Why did Miss Suzuki back Aly up? She's certainly never seen Nick the way Aly described him. * Where did this sudden relationship between Aly & Sentro come from!? That seriously came from nowhere... * You shouldn't assume people have heard what you're talking about unless it's related to the series you're writing about is based on (for example, in Doctor Who last summer, it was ok for them to assume people had heard of the Doctor Who spin-off Torchwood). I've never heard of Pitch Black, and so had no idea what those monsters were supposed to look like, since the only description given was that they're like the monsters from that film. * What the hell was that Minun all about!? That just made no sense at all... * Sentro was called Ash way too much, he'd have protested about that. * I would never agree to watching a horror movie if I didn't have to. I hate horror, it's disgusting, pointless gore. I like comedies, rom-coms, sci-fi, that sort of thing. And occasionally action-adventure. * All that explanation of how our base Pokémon learn the attacks we used? Unneccesary and annoying. * I don't obsess over puns. I just love "Ranger than Fiction". And that's just a summary... Edited by Psyduck Ranger, Jan 2 2009, 02:51 AM.


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