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| PR Elem - Discussion Thread; Discussions for Poké Rangers: Elem here! | |
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| Topic Started: Jun 14 2007, 02:38 PM (94 Views) | |
| Sentrovasi | Jun 14 2007, 02:38 PM Post #1 |
White Night
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I thought I'd make this thread to discuss most of the general Elements of my story. ... Bad pun, I know. That said, I guess most discussions about the story go here; any random thoughts and stuff like that as well. Things that have only a tenuous relationship... well, that's at your discretion. Might put it in a new topic if you want. Heck, flood. Well, following my latest chapter, Psyduck's said that some parts of my story seem too graphic... and both CWA and Psyduck have both commented on how dark it is. I'd be the first to admit that the graphic-ness and the dark elements are definitely present, but they're there for the express purpose of showing the extent to which the Tentor Fog and the Forgotten conduct their operations: these aren't the pseudoEvil teams like Team Rocket, or the failure-a-week nemeses in the Power Rangers series. However, I'll pose a question: should my story work towards becoming more humorous (which might be a little cliché), more dark, or should I eliminate one of the two altogether? If you've noticed, the balance has shifted towards less humourous and more dark after the initial chapters. So. Opinions? Anything else about the story you'd like to add would also be much appreciated =/ |
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| Psyduck Ranger | Jun 14 2007, 02:46 PM Post #2 |
Celebi's Guardian
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You already know my view on this, but nonetheless, definitely more humourous...partly because it really is just too dark now, partly because I just love comedy... |
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| ClarinetWrathArineko | Jun 14 2007, 02:55 PM Post #3 |
Poké Zord
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Perhaps slight humor would help, to lighten it a little, but the dark fic is unique to yours, so I wouldn't get rid of it completely. |
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| Phoenix | Jun 14 2007, 08:23 PM Post #4 |
Poké Ranger
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Keep the dark, it's fun. D: I'm weird, aren't I? Don't answer that. But do put in some humor once in a while, okiez? |
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| Sentrovasi | Jun 25 2007, 11:15 AM Post #5 |
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White Night
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Well, the next chapter's up... Call me a Super Robot fanboy, but I love manual, complicated piloting of Zords =/ The simple stuff doesn't seem too right for me. If you're wondering what all the things on the screen mean, well. I'm hoping it sounds cool, anyway =S That said, the cameo appearance of a particular Pokémon Go! character... Ah well. Anyone got anything to make of all of it? |
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