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| Poke Rangers: Orre; Discuss Starfighter's fic here! | |
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| Topic Started: Aug 16 2007, 06:26 PM (234 Views) | |
| Psyduck Ranger | Aug 16 2007, 06:26 PM Post #1 |
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Well Orre doesn't have its own topic, so I guess I'd better put this here... Edit: It does now. I made my comment in the other topic without having read Starfighter's latest chapter, only knowing that he'd have Alex appear and morph. I had no idea just how un-canon it would get... Basically, every line that had something to do with Alex goes against what I have planned...that won't be his morph-call, that's not the origin of his powers, I have no plans for him to have a Blissey Zord (I made that comment pre-fourth gen, before they made two new fossil families (yes, his Zords will be Bastiodon and Rampardos)). Starfighter, you simply seem to have not grasped the concept of creating characters for other authors. There are a million little things about Jack (MMPR) and whoever else that I could have moaned about, but he's not my character any more. He's Yankee's Yankee has fully submerged him in the plot of his fic, and me saying something big about him now might upset the plot. Same goes for Alex; he might not have appeared yet, but I have plans for him for a full ten years after his first appearance, and a year or two before his first appearance (that's his timeline I'm referring to, of course). If you really wanted him so specific, you should have kept him for your fic. Now, as for the fact I've already had a crossover with Orre, I have a least one more planned, and Starfighter and I have made or will make innumerable references to each others fics, my explanation is paralell universes...it's not a fully formed explanation, but I've got five minutes before I get booted off, so yeah... Eh...don't think I have any more to say on the subject right now...although I've probably forgotten something... |
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| Starfighter364 | Sep 26 2007, 09:52 PM Post #2 |
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You never told me what you wanted his morph call to be, so I had to make one, since you never told me, then you can't complain about that. We agreed from the beginning that his powers would be created by Anthony, then I said his zord would have been given to him by Anthony, and said it was ok, and that it would be a Blissey Zord as a carrier Zord to counteract the hate based monsters that he would go up against. Man, first you forgot that we agreed that Alex was supposed to become the Delta Ranger after getting back to his original time, and that the Aerodactyl Zord in Dino Force would originally be the one he had as the Delta Ranger, and now this! What the heck are you going to forget about next? |
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| Psyduck Ranger | Sep 27 2007, 02:43 PM Post #3 |
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Oh dear...I don't like where this discussion is heading...nonetheless... I didn't tell you what his morph call was going to be because I didn't intend for you to have him morphing, or anyone else, at least not until after his first appearance in DF. And indeed, in part his powers will be created by Anthony, simply not in that context. Furthermore, he's not the only one who works on them. Indeed, his Zord is given to him by Anthony. You'll notice that at the end of the Orre crossover, Anthony places two Zord eggs in a cave. He was originally going to have a Blissey Zord, yes, but that was before Sinnoh was given Fossil Pokémon, which would fit in with the theme of the series. And I certainly have no recollection of Alex having any Delta powers, and like I told you, I have long-standing plans for him now. In fact, I think once you see them in action you'll be quite pleased... And all of the DF Zords will be destroyed by the end of the series...if that doesn't give too much away... |
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| Starfighter364 | Sep 29 2007, 02:33 AM Post #4 |
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Don't worry, I have thought of a way to fix this. I was a little iritable when I responded to your first post, I'd had a hard day of school that day, and then I discover what you said on here. You see, one thing that really makes me angry is when someone has a problem with a chapter in one of my fanfictions, or the fanfiction itself and doesn't tell me about it in a review or private message, but instead says it in a place that I might never find it in (since I hardly ever have time to come here). I told you that Alex was going to morph, but you never said anything about it afterwards. We did agree that his powers were created by Anthony, but that is easy to fix; Anthony finished them by himself, but who said he didn't have help, just tell me who else you want to take part in it, and I'll show it in a flashback in a later chapter. The Blissey Zord was your idea to counteract the hate based monsters, but if you don't want him to have it, well, that is easy to get around, I'll explain that later, but remember, as you have shown in Neo, ranger powers need Zords to be stable. Yeah, I know you don't remember about the Delta Ranger powers, but I have a way to get around that as well; I had intended for a while to show Alex beginning the fight with Butch, Cassidy, and the two monsters since he is my character and I wanted to be the one to send him off; I was thinking that we could have him be split in two people (like the Gold Ranger from Zeo split into three, but both halves of Alex stay the same) right as he was frozen, with one half of him be frozen an go to the future, while the other half would escape from being frozen stay in the same time, and the one who would stay in their original time would keep the Blissey Zord if you don't want it to come with him, and remember, any of the Zords that come from Anthony's Zord eggs will give the good rangers a weapon based on it because of Secc's invention, then both halves of Alex would later recombine after the events of Orre and whatever you have planned for the other Alex are finished since two of the exact same person can not stay in the same time for long. Alex still being around wouldn't make the Orre Rangers stronger if we do this, in fact, I have a way that will make it so that they have a harder time. I am aware that their are some plotholes between Orre and your fanfictions, (Along with some from Mighty Morphin Poke Rangers, but they are easy to fix) but not all of them are my fault, you are at fault for one small one, but it is very easy to fix, and I intend to fix all of the plotholes, so don't worry. Like I said, sorry about being iritable with you, to make it up I'll give you permission to create another ranger, but for Cipher, not the Orre Rangers. I already have some info: Name: Ranger: Pink (I need a Pokemon based power) Gender: Female Zords: Weapon(s): Special notes/Description: Has a crush on Alex (need more info, and yes, this means that a bad guy will have a crush on Alex) Pokemon: Also, if you want, I'll send you scenes from seasons 2 and 3 of Orre, the seasons of Future Force, along with some from a Poke Rangers Orre movie that I plan to make it will be called Ruined Future. One more thing, I need help with something in Orre Chronicles. I've mentioned that after the first badge that the fanfiction will focus on more than just Anthony's and Pikachu's adventures, but I need help deciding on which storyline to work on first. Here they are: Donald's Repent: After being beaten by Anthony at the Indigo Plateau, Donald runs into a new Pokemon which gives him a new view on Pokemon, follow Donald as he changes his way from being a jerk to a hero. Poke Rangers Acadamy: Anthony the second has set up an acadamy to prepare future Poke Rangers to protect the world, several Verteran Rangers are teachers to the newcomers (Only from Mighty Morphin and Orre for now, but others can be added if an author wants to, I gained permission from Yankee Blaze a few months ago to be able to use his rangers for my planned cross-overs, and I had this planned long before that), follow the journeys of Anthony Madigan the third, Sakura Madigan, and Derik Dragonfly as they go through the acadamy and become future protectors of the world. Heroes of Orre: Wes, Rui, and Micheal have each saved Orre and the two groups have met each other, they plan to just relax and do what they want, but Marshall comes to them and asks them to become Poke Rangers to save the world, follow their journey to save the world up until they join the Orre Rangers in season three. Journey of Mewtwo: Anthony's baby Mewtwo has recieved the Reverse Twilight Powers from Marshall, and he soon goes off on his own to have his own journey as a Pokemon trainer, while still working as a Poke Ranger, and coming to help the Orre Rangers when they need it. I would like your opinion (as well as anyone else who wants to add their comments to this) on what one you would like me to work on, right now I'm leaning towards Donald's Repent. Just tell me what you want his morph call to be, and I'll have him decide to change it in the next chapter of Orre. Please read and review the chapters, and next time, please tell me in a review or private message when you have a problem, then we can solve it right away. |
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| Psyduck Ranger | Sep 29 2007, 07:39 AM Post #5 |
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Eh...blimey that's a helluva post... Yes, indeed, I should have let you know direct...although my review policy (For those who've forgotten it: "You don't review me, why should I review you?") wouldn't allow a review at the time. I certainly did say something about Alex morphing afterwards...I can't remember exactly what now, but it would have been something with the gist of it not making sense and...bleh... Ok, look, I've already told you, Starfighter, but I might as well put it on the record...*sigh*...Alex's powers are created by the Elite Force. That's why they're the Alpha powers, the original basis for the Elite Force powers...thinking about it now, it'd probably have been called Beta...but Alpha's so much cooler... The splitting in two thing...actually; that does sorta kinda seem like it could work...even though I've already stated IN FIC that he's frozen by a Jynx, but...hmm...we'd have to tread very carefully...I mean, in the Orre crossover with DF, I was planning on Alex and Anthony reuniting like they hadn't seen each other in years...but Anthony would just be confused as to how Alex could be in the future and present (or present and past)...how soon after this were you planning on him becoming the Delta Ranger? It would be best if it were soon after, because the Elite Force are a team with public identities (I think that'll be a first for Poké Rangers), although he would have been frozen on his first mission, so he wouldn't be so well known...but the Elite Force also have to believe he's completely dissappeared...but it could work... Ay? Wait, what plothole did I create? If I did create any,. then nobody has ever pointed it out to me, and i'd like someone too...I've always tried to do my best to keep it in canon with as many fics as possible (which simply keeps getting harder and harder. Back in my day there were only three Ranger fics...)... You don't have to give me a Ranger to appologise or anything...still, I wouldn't mind making a Ranger...not just yet though, i'm kinda busy... And PLEASE do not send me any scenes from future fics, I like finding things out by reading them, and I hate it when authors give away future info in their authors notes or something... And finally...I'd go for Donald's Journey... |
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| Phoenix | Sep 29 2007, 11:31 AM Post #6 |
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-poofs in- OOH IS THAT ANOTHER SIGN OF MARY SUEISM? Bah. Starfighter spelled a looooot of things wrong. Like Michael. And academy. I'd know nothing about plotholes, since the only other Rangers fic I bother to read is Sentro's, so yeah. -poofs out- |
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| Starfighter364 | Sep 29 2007, 11:52 AM Post #7 |
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The Dino Force/Orre cross-over would happen before the other half of Alex would meet up with Anthony. Yeah, it will be tricky, but I believe we can pull it off. I thought I had reviewed, we I'll get to reviewing it right after I'm finished here. Don't forget, you can send me a Pink Ranger for Cipher, and if you want, I can send you scenes from Orre and Future Force. Oh, and Phoenix, I had to type in a hurry because my sister got on Runescape as soon as we got home, then when I finally was able to get on, we were about to go somewhere, so I didn't have time to check over my post. |
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| Psyduck Ranger | Sep 29 2007, 01:20 PM Post #8 |
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Yeah, actually Starfighter, this is really looking like it could work...we may be able to save the canon of our fics yet...although then there's the thing... Wait, wassat Phoenix? Which fics are you saying you're a-reading? Meh...I have to recommend Geno Blast. It's managed to topple Elem off its spot as my fave... Now I reckon I'll have a go at Ranger making...yet again...like the 30th Ranger I've made now, at least! Hmm...wait a second, in the fic they were stated to be the Hexagon BROTHERS but you want it to be female? Eh... confused.com... And hold on...I've just found them on Bulbapedia...the Hexagon Brothers are pre-existing characters...um...well I've already started making the character, so I'll just finish and if it's no good, then...I dunno... Name: Rowena Gliph Ranger: Pink Medicham Ranger Gender: Female Zords: Medicham, Gallade (obviously that's only if you want more than one or anything...) Weapon(s): Medicham hide (an armoured chestplate patterened after a Medicham's legs, used similarly to Kris's Legend Armour, ie, it fires powerful laser-like blasts, and ups physical strength), Gal Blade (A blade like a Gallade's arm. Again, optional). Special notes/Description: Has a crush on Alex. Has a lust for power. Appearance: Long (like two foot!) black hair, which she often uses to hide her face. Quite tall, about six foot. Other than uniform, her preffered outfit is a white vest top that shows her navel, and a pair of black jeans. Also wears a badge depicting a Ralts, entirely coloured pink. Pokemon: Honchkrow, Forretress, Sandslash, Froslass, Shadow Meditite. Oh yeah, hey, when are you going to introduce the  Soldier to your fic?
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| Starfighter364 | Sep 29 2007, 11:12 PM Post #9 |
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No, they are the Hexagon Rangers, they will start out as the Hexagon Brothers, but in chapter 44, one of them loses his powers and is thrown in jail, so Cipher brings in a replacement, she comes in long before Alex, just so you know. Yeah, I need her physical appearance as well, because she won't always be wearing her Cipher Uniform. Soldier will be introduced in chapter 42. For some reason the site is messing up the first part of his name.
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| Psyduck Ranger | Apr 10 2008, 05:48 PM Post #10 |
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It shows the emoticon becauses X D without the space is the shortcut for that emoticon. To simply show the letters you have to turn off emoticons...or, as I just found out, put it in quotation marks. Oh, and btw, I've added in Rowena's appearance, like you asked...although she still won't be appearing for zonks yet 
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| Starfighter364 | Apr 10 2008, 08:36 PM Post #11 |
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She'll have a small appearance in season 1, but not as a Hexagon Ranger. After that appearance, she won't appear again until chapter 44. I need more information on her personallity other than that she has a crush on Alex and a lust for power. On another note, right now I'm angry, but not at anybody here. I'm angry at my computer! I was close to being finished with the latest chapter of Orre, when my computer messed up! It didn't let me save, and closed what I was using to write the chapter. Has anything like this ever happened to any of you guys? |
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| Psyduck Ranger | Apr 11 2008, 08:32 AM Post #12 |
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Yeah, used to happen to me all the time with the first 28 chapters of Johto, with my old laptop. That, however, turned out to be because I was blocking the fan so it overheated...still, my new laptop doesn't overheat no matter how much you block the fan. And yeah, fair enough, I'll work on that when I get a minute...gotta dash now though... |
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| Darth Osiris | Aug 11 2008, 07:24 PM Post #13 |
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Is this fic still going on? If so, I have plans to introduce Rampardos and Bastiodon Zords in Sinnoh, and I'd like the OK to use them. |
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| Starfighter364 | Aug 14 2008, 02:26 AM Post #14 |
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It's still going on, but I'm really annoyed now. Today I almost finished the next chapter again, but this time either one of my parents, or my little sister (I'm not sure which) turned off the computer without saving what I had on Microsoft Word while I was cleaning my room, causing all of the progress I made today to be gone. After this chapter, I have no intention of ever doing the first round of a contest ever again on my fanfictions, I would have been finished with the chapter long ago if I wasn't doing the contest. Darth Osiris, what do you need an OK from me to use them for? Is it something we talked about and I somehow forgot all about it or something? By the way, to anyone reading this, I've got a poll up on my fanfiction.net profile, it isn't about Poke Rangers in any way (except for the fact that the two series will have a couple cross-overs), but I was wondering, could anyone please vote on it? |
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