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Poke Rangers Sinnoh
Topic Started: Mar 8 2008, 09:32 PM (159 Views)
Darth Osiris
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Click here for information on submitting a Ranger.
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Psyduck Ranger
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Another thing I've got to say; since you're having the Rangers made before the fic comes out, please just don't have the first chapter be just a silly little hundred word prologue that only exists in most fics so people can submit Rangers. It's fine for you to have a prologue, but just stick it on front of the chapter.
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Yankee Blaze
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I may have submitted you a ranger, if you didn't get it i will resubmit it.
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Darth Osiris
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Yankee Blaze, I didn't get a Ranger from you yet.
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Darth Osiris
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I should also mention that if I include your ranger, you get to submit a storyline focusing on it. You can also choose the monster of the week to go with it.
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Darth Osiris
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Your cooperation has brought forth new information! The main villian's name is: Queen Vespi.

Colors still available: Black, Blue, Green
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Queen Vespi. By any chance is she based on Vespiquen? Bit obvious when you think about it, but so was Tina Rage, so...

Ooh dear, since they're going off the market, can I reserve black? Excluding Kris (not only my own Ranger, but an evil one who was only in for 10 episodes), I've never done a black Ranger, I don't think...

EDIT: Ey? I'm confused. According to a pm you just sent me, there's no green available, but there is yellow...I'm confused.com.
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Darth Osiris
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My bad. Did I say yellow? Yankee has that.

Only blue and green are left, since Psyduck Ranger claimed black.
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Darth Osiris
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Just green left now, ladies and gentlemen. Just remember, he should be a goofball.
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Femore
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The Boss Baddie Who Never Fights
Yeh, my blue ranger made the cut.
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Darth Osiris
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This story's not going to be told unless I get a green ranger, so the sooner I get one, the sooner I start writing.
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Well I'm not gonna review 'cause of my rule thing and all that, but there is one comment I would like to make; yes, it's a very typical, over-used format for opening episodes (but that's fair enough, it's a very good, simple formula to use for openers if you don't have a specific theme for your series, which, admitedly, most of us don't yet. I don't, in either of my series', and indee, both the first chapter of Johto, as well as chapters 2 & 3 of LA were this way.

Anyway, my point was, based on that chapter, I think you're a ruddy marvelous writer! The Rangers pretty much all got a decent bit of characterisation in a very short amount of time. I also liked the way you chose to open, it may not be the biggest hook, but it was excellent.

Oh yeah, also, it did seem very short, I mean it must have just been around 2000 words or something...are all chapters going to be this sort of length, or can I look forward to something longer...?
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Darth Osiris
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Aw, that's really nice! Thank you!

The chapters should get longer after the two-to-three parter, but I don't really know yet.
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Darth Osiris
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Two things:

1. Could someone move this to the General Discussion board (and maybe pin it?)

2. I'm thinking of giving the Rangers a new morph call. The old one, for the record is "Ranger Form, Go!" Any suggestions? If I like it, you get a storyline for Sinnoh.
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