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| Eating in the Great Valley; What Goes on With Food | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 11 2011, 12:36:19 PM (555 Views) | |
| The Friendly Sharptooth | Feb 11 2011, 12:36:19 PM Post #1 |
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Beware. I eat my friends.
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I was bored during my lunch break at the university, so I decided to write another poem. It's nothing special, just a little piece about some things to expect when eating in the Great Valley. Eating in the Great Valley There’s lots to eat in the Great Valley. When meal times come, expect a rally. Wow, the food is good! Tree stars are a snack of choice. They cause the children to rejoice. Boy, they are a treat! When a dessert is much desired, A tree sweet is what’s required. Yes, they are the best! Living in the valley is a little Sharptooth, Though his eating habits are a bit uncouth. Mm, the bugs are spicy! The very best of the berry bushes, Were there for the risers of their tushes. Yeesh, they don’t leave much! All love the time of the great giving. It’s a tradition that keeps on living. Oh, the sharing is grand! When the snowy cold times come, The sweet bubbles are more than yum. Gosh, they’re hard to find! When a red tree star ends with a pluck, Petrie will be there, talking of luck. Ugh, that is so annoying! When others visit, looking for food, They’d best be wary of old Three Horn’s mood. Yikes, he can be mean! These are a few samples of what may be, As with eating in the valley, there's much to see. Yay, it sounds like fun! |
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| FlipperBoidSkua | Feb 11 2011, 02:59:56 PM Post #2 |
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Your soul.... is MINE!!!
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Make it "dessert" and the poem will be flawless!! This is soooo cute and it doesn't help that I'm hungry when I read this. And it reminds me of visiting a friends house for dinner: there's lots of choices, but beware the grumpy grandpa who isn't about to share. And the rhythm is once more awesome and consistent enough for this to be a song!! I'mma memorize and sing it now! I still very much admire your poetic abilities, and I hope I see more to come!! ![]() P.S. I loooooooove your new avatar! Calumon is so adorable! |
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| The Friendly Sharptooth | Feb 11 2011, 04:21:42 PM Post #3 |
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Beware. I eat my friends.
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Thank you. My poems are a reflection of my life in that there are always problems. I fixed it.
I'm sure you'll make it sound beautiful.
I'm flattered. Having that come from someone of your writing status is high praise indeed. And I don't plan for my production to stop here, so more will definately be seen in the future.
Aw, thanks. I plan to keep this one for a while. The subtitle is actually a line he spoke during the series. |
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| brekclub85 | Feb 11 2011, 05:23:28 PM Post #4 |
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The Gang of Five
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I liked this poem TFS! I agree, your new avatar is cute, though I'm not sure where it comes from. Something tells me a Mysterious Beyond version of this would be considered "too bloody."
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| LBTDiclonius | Feb 11 2011, 05:23:33 PM Post #5 |
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Your Resident Diclonius
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Awesome poem, TFS! Just when I thought no one could make a poem about eating sound good, you have proved me wrong! Great work!
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| Cancerian Tiger | Feb 14 2011, 01:26:54 AM Post #6 |
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Look Within Yourself
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This was quite humorous :lol. Reminds me of when I visit the kitchen to figure out what to eat...since most of what I eat comes from plants :p. |
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And the rhythm is once more awesome and consistent enough for this to be a song!! I'mma memorize and sing it now!
I still very much admire your poetic abilities, and I hope I see more to come!! 
I fixed it.
Just when I thought no one could make a poem about eating sound good, you have proved me wrong! Great work!
7:51 PM Jul 10