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Slipped Away; A poem ike thing from Littlefoot's POV
Topic Started: Mar 10 2013, 09:13:19 PM (864 Views)
Nahla
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I cried and cried and cried your name.
Nothing will ever be the same.
The thunder roared and the lightning cracked.
"Come on mother we must get back".
You looked at me with those trusting eyes.
Tried to tell me it'll be alright.
You said you' be there even if I can't see you.
Don't leave mother I need you!
As the night took your spirit away.
For my own end I did pray.
But I found my way home.
Many miles I did roam.
But remember Mother each and every day.
I still think of how you slipped away.




I am not a poet ok,yes the poem is about Littlefoot reflecting on his Mother's death.
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StrutEggStealer
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OMG, this is wonderful! :o
brimming with emotion, you've really captured that moment....
AGH! It's making me tear up! Must find something happy to read...
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Mr Wonk
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This is really good. And I think your really good poet! :DD
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Ducky123
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Well done, Nahla! :wow
In general I hate poems since we have to work with them in school, which is terribly boring :DD
But Lbt poems are great! :exactly

This is a very emotional one indeed :) Maybe the next one is about Nahla?;)
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Nahla
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Aww thanks guys nice thing to wake up to.

Despire it being 4am in the morining grr


I will kill these roosters if they don't stop this...well not really but if they go missing it was not me taking them far far away...., :angel
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somerandomfangirl
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Gah, I would HATE it if a rooster woke me up at 4am!

Darn, stop making me tear up! Seriously! This is so beautiful... and full of emotion, too, as Strut said. :cry Well done, Nahla!
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Nahla
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Thanks :)

Yes it not fun...,



I am working on one about my character Nahla

it called "Escape The Shadowlands"
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Mr Wonk
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Where all looking forward to it! :DD
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Littlefoot1616
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Wow! A wonderful piece made there Nahla! A real tear-jerker chocked with emotional pain and reflection. For someone who claims not to be much of a poet, you sure do have a knack for it! Nicely done! ;)
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Nahla
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Thank you everyone.

Since everyone likes it I guess I'll write more poems.

Better then my drawings,I tried to draw a dinosaur,ended up a horse which ended up a cow....
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Ducky123
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haha :DD
my drawing skill are even worse :lol: the end wouldn't even look like a cow ;)

I look forward to read more of your LBT- poetry :)
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StrutEggStealer
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Agreed, I think we all do Nahla^^
And don't get discouraged about drawing. It takes a lot of ptience and practice, and if it's something you want to stick with, by golly you'll stick with it, lol. My advice, look for references online or from illustrated books, they yield the best inspiration :)
Good luck!
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Nahla
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Please do not ask how I got a horse out of a dinosaur and a cow out of a horse.

I honestly do not know.

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