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| Escape The Shadowlands; another poem by moi | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 11 2013, 06:51:18 PM (547 Views) | |
| Nahla | Mar 11 2013, 06:51:18 PM Post #1 |
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GOF'S resident horse expert.
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This poem is about my OC Nahla (where I get my name) escaping the Shadowlands if you read my fic you'll know what that is but if not it a barren wasteland lead by a cold hearted longneck named Hades,oh and he Nahla's father.... Run she said,escape with your life. The Shadowlands are such fright. No one ever escapes alive. But if I stay I'll surely die. Fastbiters closed in on my tail. In the distance I hear my herd wail. I know they have found my mother dead. But tears I do not have time to shed. Father I'm sorry I disappointed you. But be evil I refuse to do. I want to be good,I don't want to be bad. I don't want to make others sad. Fastbiters corner me on the wall. I look down-it such a fall. I have no choice I jump with my life. In a way I know this was right. I land on the ground,the pain I do bare. The fastbiters left,they were gonna leave me there!. Sorry my herd I left you behind, But for you my love will always shine. For we will always be one. Expect dad-he a total bum. I look to left I look to right. I escaped the Shadowlands... I'll be alright. This one was hard,only so much I can do to make an escape story into a poem. |
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| Ducky123 | Mar 12 2013, 07:39:45 AM Post #2 |
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There should be an award for best poetry ![]() Well done! This is really emotional
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| StrutEggStealer | Mar 12 2013, 08:51:14 AM Post #3 |
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Who needs mirrors? XD
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I really love how you can fit the summation of her story into a mere 26 lines well done!
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| Mr Wonk | Mar 12 2013, 02:13:43 PM Post #4 |
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Learning Java!
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It was amazing. Well done again Nahla, you've wow us all again.
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| Nahla | Mar 12 2013, 02:28:03 PM Post #5 |
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GOF'S resident horse expert.
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Aww thanks everyone. My next poem is about Nahla and Littlefoot together. Love poem naww. |
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| Mr Wonk | Mar 12 2013, 02:35:07 PM Post #6 |
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Learning Java!
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I'm looking forward to that!
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| Nahla | Mar 12 2013, 02:51:41 PM Post #7 |
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GOF'S resident horse expert.
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It all fluffynes and love in that one. |
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| StrutEggStealer | Mar 13 2013, 10:02:18 AM Post #8 |
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Who needs mirrors? XD
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Fluffy and love are good
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well done!

2:25 PM Jul 11